05-13-2018, 09:22 AM
(05-06-2018, 05:12 AM)Ikit Claw Wrote: [Dark-Claw – 600 OM + Ranged, Physical, Area Attack]
Upon his darkened steel armor: a claw of great bladed scythes stretch from its warpstone – blessed plates. The claw: with each blade at a foot's length: allow for Ikit to slice into opponents, should the need become necessary.
What's more: the arm itself is embedded with a warp-flamethrower device, feeding from his backside up into a brass nozzle jutting from the palm of his great claw.
From the Warpstone-powered machinations of his armor, should he require it: the Skaven may begin feeding raw energies through the eternal piping, taking but a few seconds of sputtering, hideous noise to begin dousing any within a fifteen foot cone before him (at a 45 degree angle) in a scathing display of blistering green warpfire.
He can continuously do this, if necessary: for over thirty seconds before having to allow the machinations to temporarily cool-down. His pack can carry enough warpstone fuel for six bursts.
[Tier 1 Super Attack – Warp Lightening – Ranged, Area Attack, Ranged Materialize – 600 OM]
Ikit raises his claw to the sky, beginning to sound off a writhing throaty chant: gathering the winds to his will. Within but a few seconds, a terrible cloud of sickly-pale gas will coalesce above his target. Within the blink of an eye, an arc of darkened green lightening will be cast down onto Ikit's target: bestowing the Great Horned Rat's blessing of death-death to any within a fifteen meter radius of its impact zone in a explosion of warp energies.
Dark-Claw: The claw part is fine, just remember that you're not going to be able to slice into everyone with them. You've got 2 ATK, so you'll probably only scratch someone with 4 DEF (whose skin is like armour). As for the flamethrower, how fast do the flames travel, or how long do they take to reach the maximum range? Also, how long does it have to cool down for? Lastly, you might want to decrease the flamethrower duration and increase the ammo it has (or just give it unlimited ammo) - that would make it more damaging. (Shorter 5 second bursts of higher damage rather than longer 30 second periods of lower damage)
Warp Lightning: This is good.