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Ikit Claw
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Hello, and welcome to the Omniverse!

Physical Description: Roughly how tall is he? An estimated height is fine, you can finalise it later. 

(05-06-2018, 05:12 AM)Ikit Claw Wrote: STARTING MOVES:
[Dark-Claw – 600 OM + Ranged, Physical, Area Attack, Homing]
Upon his darkened steel armor: a claw of great bladed scythes stretch from its warpstone – blessed plates. The claw: with each blade at a foot's length: allow for Ikit to slice through his opponents with ease.
What's more: the arm itself is embedded with a warp-flamethrower device, feeding from his backside up into a brass nozzle jutting from the palm of his great claw.
From the Warpstone-powered machinations of his armor, should he require it: the Skaven may begin feeding raw energies through the eternal piping, and douse any within a fifteen foot cone before him in a scathing display of blistering green warpfire.

Super-Moves
[Tier 1 Super Attack – Warp Lightening – Ranged, Area Attack, Homing, Ranged Materialize – 600 OM]
Ikit raises his claw to the sky, beginning to sound off a writhing throaty chant: gathering the winds to his will. Within but a few seconds, a terrible cloud of sickly-pale gas will coalesce above his target. Within the blink of an eye, an arc of darkened green lightening will be cast down onto Ikit's target: bestowing the Great Horned Rat's blessing of death-death to any within a thirty meter radius of its impact zone in a explosion of warp energies.

Dark-Claw:
>You won't be able to slice through all opponents with ease, so can you add a small comment in like, "(dependant on his ATK and their DEF)". 
>Does the flamethrower take any time to activate? How fast does the fire travel?
>Can he keep burning people indefinitely? 
>How wide is the cone? Either give an angle or a rough width for the end of the range.
>Balance-wise, without some drawback (you could add an activation time or force Ikit to move slowly while the flamethrower is active), the flamethrower won't be really strong. Since right now it's implied that it's easy to use and can be done indefinitely.
>This doesn't need homing proficiency. Homing would just be needed if you wanted to make the flames curve towards people.

Warp Lightning:
>Looks awesome, but you'll need to cut down the attack radius to 15m. T1 super attacks cannot do notable damage in an area larger than a 30m at its widest point.
>This doesn't really need homing, since you're just creating the lightning/cloud above your target.


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