Shio Mora

[Dane Regan]

Frenzied Swipe (Requires Physical Proficiency) - 300 OM
Shio is talented at a great deal of forms of combat, but he excels most notably in the range one would expect from the typical longsword.  This move takes about half a second to perform, provided Shio isn't otherwise distracted or fatigued, making it a very good way to finish off opponents who he's leery of giving a chance to prepare whatever nasty surprises they like.  Starting from the shoulder and working his way towards his opposite hip, Shio aims to slice his opponent open at the center of mass.  There's more force and passion than finesse behind this blow, so it's relatively slow but can smash through most shoddy defenses, making it far wiser to dodge than block.

I've been thinking, you don't really need a move for this. You're just swinging your sword, and there's nothing here that you can't do with a normal sword swing. A less accurate but hasty and strong swing is something you can do normally. So... you can just write him doing this. You could add a charge time or something and have it be like a power attack if you wanted, or emphasise that it will almost always (or usually, depending on stats) push its way through conventional defences (i.e. by knocking a sword to the side) in exchange for being slow or inaccurate or leaving Shio open or something. So, for now, I've removed it from your roster. I'll leave this thread open for a while so you can discuss any changes you might want to make to that move. 

Anyway, I'll get you approved now. Sorry for being slow the last few days. I can't properly activate your account, but I've pinged a senior staffer to get that sorted. 

Here is your roster:

Name: Shio Mora
Spent OM: 3700
Consumed OM (0): (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Proficiencies (1000): Physical Strength (1000)
Powers (1800/8000): Suppression (1000), Burst Movement (800)
Moves (900): Break and Mend, Taroba! (900) 
Super Moves (0): 
Transformations (0): 
Assists (0):
Items (0):
Artefacts: None
Bases (0): 
Unlocks (0): 
Base stats: 
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3

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