02-13-2015, 05:07 PM
Omni Wrote:I couldn't find that bit of the story from what you linked to. Could you give a header to the specific part? Might have been the wrong header.
You'll need a little more description on your move. Specifically, I'd like you to include that it can be used as a normal knife (I mean, that's how weapons work on the Omniverse) and if you could write a separate line about the charge attack, specifically how long it takes roughly to charge up. Everything else looks fine to me.
Okay, I updated the move. Also, the part of the story I referenced is the second to last sentence of the last paragraph in the section I linked to. It's also here:http://www.teamfortress.com/fateworsethanchess/#f=27