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The Spy - The Spy - 02-13-2015

Character name:The Spy

Character source:TF2

Character history:I'm using the Spy from immidiately after Saxton Hale fired him. (https://wiki.teamfortress.com/wiki/Story#1971)

Physical Description: Not an original.

Stats:
ATK:3
DEF:2
SPD:1
TEC:4

Starting Proficiencies:Physical Strength

Starting Powers:Shapeshifting,Stealth, Basic Suppresion

Starting Moves:
Butterfly Knife - Requires Physical Strength - 600
A standard 6 inch (including handle) butterfly knife. Can be used as a normal and quick knife. Also can be used to do a damaging backstab that takes 2 seconds to charge. De-stealths and de-shapeshifts upon use.

Earned OM:5000

Spent OM:4700

OM Left:300

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. I have.



Re: The Spy - Omni - 02-13-2015

I couldn't find that bit of the story from what you linked to. Could you give a header to the specific part? Might have been the wrong header.

You'll need a little more description on your move. Specifically, I'd like you to include that it can be used as a normal knife (I mean, that's how weapons work on the Omniverse) and if you could write a separate line about the charge attack, specifically how long it takes roughly to charge up. Everything else looks fine to me.


Re: The Spy - The Spy - 02-13-2015

Omni Wrote:I couldn't find that bit of the story from what you linked to. Could you give a header to the specific part? Might have been the wrong header.

You'll need a little more description on your move. Specifically, I'd like you to include that it can be used as a normal knife (I mean, that's how weapons work on the Omniverse) and if you could write a separate line about the charge attack, specifically how long it takes roughly to charge up. Everything else looks fine to me.

Okay, I updated the move. Also, the part of the story I referenced is the second to last sentence of the last paragraph in the section I linked to. It's also here:http://www.teamfortress.com/fateworsethanchess/#f=27


Re: The Spy - Omni - 02-14-2015

Given that it only takes a couple of seconds to charge, change the description slightly to take out the "very" part. So:

A standard 6 inch (including handle) butterfly knife. Can be used as a normal and quick knife. Also can be used to do a damaging backstab that takes 2 seconds to charge. De-stealths and de-shapeshifts upon use.

With that, you're good. A mod will set you up with your roster and log shortly. In the meantime you are free to begin role-playing in the Nexus. Make sure you read the other sticky in this joining forum before you start writing though. Other than that… Welcome and have fun!


Re: The Spy - Guu - 02-14-2015

Oh! Sorry this took so long! Here you go!


Name: The Spy
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4700
Proficiencies (1000): Physical Strength (1000)
Powers (3100): Shapeshifting (1400), Stealth (1200), Suppression; Basic (500)
Moves (600): Butterfly Knife (600)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 4


Head on over to the Roster forum and make yourself a Roster! Copy and paste the above into the first post and make any subsequent posts about your character.

Please read over this topic to help you get started: What do do once you've been approved

Your log for future purchases is right here!

Any who, congrats on getting approved and welcome to the Omniverse!