01-12-2018, 09:56 PM
last post is up on my end, Kopaka's got one more to make then we should be ready for our judgement.
If I may request Jeff, let me know whether or not this style of writing works for so long a combat. I want to try and approach this character with a more tolkienesque voice, but he doesn't dwell on combats this long. If the way this works ends up being annoying to read that's definitely something I'll need to fix for future conflicts, and I would appreciate your feedback on that aspect especially.
No pressure of course, this is all voluntary, just curious as to your thoughts on it.
If I may request Jeff, let me know whether or not this style of writing works for so long a combat. I want to try and approach this character with a more tolkienesque voice, but he doesn't dwell on combats this long. If the way this works ends up being annoying to read that's definitely something I'll need to fix for future conflicts, and I would appreciate your feedback on that aspect especially.
No pressure of course, this is all voluntary, just curious as to your thoughts on it.