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[Ezrihel]

A Vigilante In Pursuit
Personal Storyline 
Participating Characters: Moon Knight, Jarvis NPC (Vision), Blair NPC (Marcus), Marcus Wright 
Total Character Count Including Spaces: Moon Knight: 32362, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 3741, Jarvis (Vision): 17429
Total Word Count: Moon Knight: 5920, Marcus Wright (Including Blair): 693, Jarvis (Vision): 3116

Going to bump this and yes the embarrassing like that originally was there is fixed.

While it was an interesting read, I had trouble keeping my place in your posts Moon Knight. You should work on the pacing of your sentences, otherwise they all sound kinda long and monotone. Aside from that, at times you can also feel a bit too wordy if that makes any sense. Like, I don't need you to state the werewolf's full title more than once really, or reiterate that the werewolf has a canine face- especially not in what's supposed to be a fast paced fight. Other than that I really enjoyed your writing. Your descriptions are nice and convey the setting well. =)

Moon Knight- 321 OM (5,912 words 32,103 characters)
Vision- 179 OM (3,094 words 17,861 characters)
Marcus Wright- 37 OM (684 words 3,671 characters)

Power Broker
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Veritas Night, All Might
Total character count including spaces: 
Veritas:7,599 characters
All Might: 31,467 characters
Total: 39,066
Total word count (excluding bbcode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Veritas: 1,424 words
All Might: 5,524 words 
Total: 6,948

(All according to https://wordcounter.net/)

Veritas Night- 31 OM
All Might- 315 OM

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