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Switching: Jaina Proudmoore to 2B
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I have Dark Link’s permission to perform this swap. Proof of it is in my Log.

Starting OM: 6 566,05 ((8 132,11-5000) : 2 = 1566,05. 1566,05+5000)

Character name: 2B, if possible, change my account name to "2B". Obviously without the quotes. ^^
Character source: Nier: Automata
Character history: [spoiler]2B is taken from after her death in the Route C of Nier Automata.[/spoiler]
Physical Description: (originals only)
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Stats: (1000)
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3 (+1)

Starting Proficiencies: (2600) Physical Prof (1000), Ranged Prof (1000), Remote Control (600)
Starting Powers: (400) Master Acrobat (400)

Starting Moves: (1200)
Pod 042 (Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency - 300)
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2B is accompanied by a standard Yorrha Combat Support Pod, designation 042.
Pod 042 hovers near 2B at all times and cannot act autonomously, instead relying on 2B’s orders to do anything besides following her and attempting to automatically dodge incoming attacks (moving as far away as 10 feet / 3 meters from 2B).
Pod 042 uses moves purchased for 2B, that are labeled to be usable only by the Pod (Pod Programs).
Pod 042 can fire basic machine-gun like fire, although it’s more a tool of distraction than damage. Pod’s targeting is based on 2B’s choice.

The rate of fire is high, at 800 rounds per minute. After emptying its magazine, the pod requires thirty seconds to recharge before it is capable of firing again.

While Pod 042 is firing, 2B is capable of moving as she normally would, but her attacking power diminishes greatly for all other moves.

Pod 042 is an agile little thing, and given its size fairly difficult to hit. While it can handle smaller attacks and lower caliber firearms for a few hits, heavier things such as being crushed by a buster sword attack or shot down via a stronger fire arm are sure ways to deal with the pest.
It takes 2B five seconds to summon a new one due to its intricate mechanisms and programs. These five seconds take the majority of her concentration, leaving her vulnerable to attacks as she is unable to move or defend.


Rate of Fire: 800 rounds per minute
Magazine size: 800
Reload time: 30 seconds
Effective Range: 75 meters

R010: Laser (Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency - 300)

Pod Program R010, usable only by Pod 042.
2B orders Pod 042 to fire a single laser beam at its target.

While initially very weak, this laser beam can be charged before firing in order to increase its power. The weakest variant can be fired instantaneously on command. The laser can be charged for up to ten seconds before it reaches its full power.

Without charging the laser is hardly tiring at all for 2B to use given its weakness.
Half charged, it has an somewhat larger impact on her.
Constantly using the fully charged version would very quickly leave 2B winded and require her to either rest or otherwise regain her energy. Anything upwards of three consecutive uses would have such an effect.

Charging up the laser requires 2B to concentrate upon Pod 042 and its actions, as such preventing her from attacking in other ways, and slowing her movements to a slow walk.

Regardless of how long the laser was charged (if at all), Pod 042 can only use this Pod Program once every 30 seconds.


Virtuous Contract (Physical Strength Proficiency  - 300)
[Image: virtuous_contract.png]
A white katana style sword. First of the two blades 2B wields, suited for fast and agile attacks that rely on their quantity, rather than the power of a single strike.
2B’s combat style is based upon delivering multiple strikes with Virtuous Contract in one hand, before delivering a powerful blow with her other hand wielding Virtuous Treaty.

Virtuous Contract can also be wielded alone without its sister blade, Virtuous Treaty.

Weight: 1,3 kilograms
Blade Length: 65 centimeters
Total Length: 75 centimeters

This move can be used together with 2B’s other melee weapons, as well as the Pod 042 firing. Firing with Pod 042 decreases the damage 2B deals with her other moves. (Further details in Pod 042’s move description.)

Virtuous Treaty (Physical Strength Proficiency - 300)
[Image: virtuous_treaty.png]
A white nodachi style sword. Second of the two blades 2B wields, suited for slow and brutish strikes that rely on the power of a singular strike, rather than their accuracy or quantity.
2B’s combat style is based upon delivering multiple strikes with Virtuous Contract in one hand, before delivering a powerful blow with her other hand wielding Virtuous Treaty.

Virtuous Treaty can also be wielded alone without its sister blade, Virtuous Contract.

Weight: 2,6 kilograms
Blade Length: 90 centimeters
Total Length: 110 centimeters

This move can be used together with 2B’s other weapons, as well as the Pod 042 firing. Firing with Pod 042 decreases the damage 2B deals with her other moves.

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#2
Pod and all of its moves require Remote Control, and you need to include details like "can it be destroyed/disabled" (if not ... it may require rebalancing), and if so, how long does it take to resummon? Probably gonna need more details but that's a start, can look at it afterwards. See Raise Dead for inspiration.

The two swords are fine. Laser looks fine too.
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#3
Added the proficiency as well as details regarding destruction and resummoning. What do you think of the resummoning time and its penalties? Is the time too long or short, and are the penalties to heavy in comparison?
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#4
That seems balanced, although it does contradict an earlier part of the description:

"Pod 042 hovers near 2B at all times and cannot act autonomously, instead relying on 2B’s orders to do anything besides following her."

Maybe make it:

"Pod 042 hovers near 2B at all times and cannot act autonomously, instead relying on 2B’s orders to do anything besides following her and attempting to automatically dodge incoming attacks (moving as far away as 10 feet from 2B)"

Tell me if that sounds alright.
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#5
(05-17-2017, 04:32 PM)Omni Wrote: That seems balanced, although it does contradict an earlier part of the description:

"Pod 042 hovers near 2B at all times and cannot act autonomously, instead relying on 2B’s orders to do anything besides following her."

Maybe make it:

"Pod 042 hovers near 2B at all times and cannot act autonomously, instead relying on 2B’s orders to do anything besides following her and attempting to automatically dodge incoming attacks (moving as far away as 10 feet from 2B)"

Tell me if that sounds alright.

This sounds nice and consistent all around. Making the edit now.
Just to make sure, this covers giving an order like, shoot target X, and the pod will keep firing until told to stop/until it runs out of ammunition, yes?
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Well I'm assuming the base move only has one function "Shoot a target", which can be changed via remote control. So that's 300. I think that answers what you're asking? You wrote the move, but that's how I understand it ... >_>
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(05-17-2017, 04:38 PM)Omni Wrote: Well I'm assuming the base move only has one function "Shoot a target", which can be changed via remote control. So that's 300. I think that answers what you're asking? You wrote the move, but that's how I understand it ... >_>

That's how I understand it as well!
Just making sure we're on the same page 'n both understand it the same way, so no funny business appears later down the road. ^^
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#8
ok den. I think I did this all right? I'll change everything else in a sec.

Name: 2B (2 Buttocks)
Spent OM: 4200
Consumed OM: 0 (for OM spent on items items, or OM permanently lost from respecs or refunding purchases. Still adds towards Spent OM)
Proficiencies (2600); Physical Prof (1000), Ranged Prof (1000), Remote Control (600)
Powers (400/8000); Master Acrobat (400)
Moves (1200); Pod 042 (300), R010: Laser (300), Virtuous Contract (300), Virtuous Treaty (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3
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