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(Webcomic) Omni and Pals!
#1
This website is reserved for my new webcomic, Omni and Pals! Expect new updates Mondays and Fridays! It's going to be hecka cool! Here's my list of characters:

Omni: God of everything, he's like a player and stuff! But he's also secretly a loser. Everyone knows it, but he pretends no one knows it. It is so much fun!

Guu: Omni's girlfriend, she's kind of there, I don't write girls very well.

Doomguy: OMG, do you remember those old Omni vs Doomguy videos? Those rocked! I thought of this webcomic when revisiting those recently.

Stacy: She's here because lesbians rule! Otherwise, don't expect much from her because I don't write girls very well.

I hope you enjoy the first strip coming soon!
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#2
Sorry, I couldn't get any drawing done today, but here's a transcript for the the loyal Patrons!


Panel 1:
Omni sits on his throne, Guu rests her whole body against the hand rest, her d-cup boobs barely fitting in her bikini top.

Omni: Ah! What a beautiful day to be an asshole!



Panel 2:
Doomguy jumps through the window, shattering glass everywhere. Omni and Guu looked shocked. Guu's boobs bounces.


Panel 3:
DoomGuy points shotgun point blank on Omni's forehead.

Doom Guy: I'm here to kick ass and chew bubblegum.


Panel 4:
Close-up on DG's face.

Doomguy: And I'm all out of bubblegum.


Panel 5:
Doomguy shoots Omni in the face. He falls lifelessly on his throne.


Panel 6:
Doomguy walks away just as Guu and Stacy start making out, touching each other's breasts so eagerly.

Doomguy: Another day, another dead god.
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#3
Once again, drawing was an impossibility. Here's my outline for comic #2!

Don't forget to support my patreon!


Panel 1:
Omni and Guu sit a fancy picnic in the rain. Guu's breasts defy gravity.

Omni: It was a beautiful day, but I made it rain, because I can.


Panel 2:
Zoom out to show the picnic from high in the sky.


Panel 3:
A military jet of some military variety is flying through the sky, Doomguy can be seen from the helm.


Panel 4:
Standard shot of Doomguy in cockpit.

Doomguy: Hasta la vista, baby!


Panel 5:
Presses button on joystick thingy.


Panel 6:
Missile falls through the sky.


Panel 7:
Explosion.


Panel 8:
Doomguy looks into the fourth wall from the cockpit.

Doomguy: I guess his religion was just the bomb.


Panel 9:
Guu/Stacy porn scene (Patreon rewards exclusive)
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#4
My motivation to draw wil come eventually, so keep hyping up that first strip! Here's my script for strip #3! I hope you like it, I wrote a woman in it as practice!

And don't forget to support my Patreon!


Panel 1:
Omni is sitting at a fancy party surrounded by snooty people people in suits. Guu in a virgin killer sweater is nearby examining her nails.

Omni: ...so I said, pass me the cavier or you die!

Snooty people: Hohohohohohohohohoho

Guu: Good one honey.


Panel 2:
Monster truck drives in.


Panel 3:
Party freezes to look at said truck.


Panel 4:
Doomguy leaps out and lands perfectly on the ground.


Panel 5:
Doomguy throws a granade.

Doomguy: Time to rock this joint!


Panel 6:
Omni catches it.


Panel 7:
Explodes.


Panel 8:
Doomguy raises his arms in the air.

"Let's have an orgy!"


Panel 9:
Orgy scene exclusive for Patreons.
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#5
This is the script for page #4. I decided to make this one kind of personal, something that has been going on in my life. I hope you appreciate it.


Panel 1:
Omni and Doomguy are staring each other in the eyes. DG has a submachine gun, Omni has a rubber ducky.


Panel 2:
Omni points at Davidson Kunler, creator of Omni and Pals.

Omni: Isn't that Davidson Kunler?

Doomguy: The creator of Omni and Pals? I love that webcomic.


Panel 3:
Davi-kun walks down a lonely street in a trench coat and trilby hat.

Omni: It's such a shame that he can't find a girlfriend.

Doomguy: If only woman had the respect to fully realize his genius and talents.


Panel 5:
Omni and Doomguy look down at the ground sad.

Omni: I'm not sure I could match him in manliness.

Doomguy: Same here, and I'm me... speaking of which...


Panel 6:
Doomguy shoots Omni in the face.
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#6
For those of you complaining that I don't draw anything FUCK OFF!

Now here's page #5! I got to practice my womans writing!


Panel 1:
Guu is taking a shower, steam just barely hiding her naughty bits. Uncensored version Patreon exclusive.


Panel 2:
Guu walks out of the shower in a towel,

Guu: Honey? Are you there?


Panel 3:
Guu glances over Omni's bullet ridden body.


Panel 4:
Close up on Omni's bullet ridden body.


Panel 5:
Guu looks away from the body and looks towards the doorway.

Guu: Honey? Are you home?


Panel 6:
Stacy walks into the bathroom in her own towel.

Stacy: Aww, did you already shower? I was hoping to join.


Panel 7:
Guu embraces Stacy.

Stacy: I could use another one.


Panel 8:
Guu and Stacy make out in the shower. Again, uncensored version Patreon exclusive.
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#7
Page #6 transcript! All characters are copyright me! Do no steal!


Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are hanging out with Omni who has been slice in half.

Guu: This is the best day ever my love.


Panel 2:
The pair look towards a stranger.

Stacy: Who is that?


Panel 3
Close up on the stranger. He is a tall guy with a black trench coat and red eyes that glow ehn hes mad. nad he has a scythe that also is a gun and he has white hair with a scar over his right eye.

Panel 4: 
The Stranger stands amongst the two women.

Stranger: I am Revow Neruet, I am Doomguy's brother. I have come to steal Guu away from Omni!


Panel 5:
The two girls look at him dumbfounded.


Panel 6:
Guu finally speaks up.

Guu: You do know I'm a hardcore lesbian who is only dating Omni to hide the fact I'm dating Stacy, right?


Panel 7:
Close up on the stranger's stern face.


Panel 8:
Close up on the stranger's horrified face.
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#8
My first fanart! This is amazing!

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Quote:Art by Tearen Wover
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#9
Page #7 script is here! I hope to get some drawing done tomorrow! Just you wait!


Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are both dressed in borat's swimsuit who is sitting with Omni who's head has been impaled on a pike.

Guu: It is quite the beautiful day.


Panel 2:
A waiter approaches.

Waiter: Excuse me, but you must be properly dressed to attend this party.


Panel 3:
Close up of Stacy.

Stacy: We're dressed.


Panel 4:
Waiter shakes his head.

Waiter: Not you two madams.


Panel 5:
The two girls look at Omni, who is per usual, naked.


Panel 6:
Guu is slipping pants onto Omni's corpse.

Stacy: I tend to forget he's naked. You would think I would have spotted a penis at some point.

Guu: His penis is there, somewhere.
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#10
Page #8 I'm practicing my foreshadowing! Please tell me how I'm doing!


Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are at the mall, trying on skimpy clothes while Omni lies dead on the floor.

Guu: I've been feeling sick lately. Must be a bug going around.


Panel 2:
Doomguy busts into the store.

Doomguy: Prepare to die Omni!


Panel 3:
The girls barely look up from their clothes.

Stacy: You already killed him.


Panel 4:
Doomguy rubs his chin.

Doomguy: What? He's usually back by now.


Panel 5:
Doomguy is dragged off by security.

Doomguy: Wha- LET GO OF ME!


Panel 6:
Doomguy/Police rape scene Patreon exclusive.
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#11
Page #9, trying something new today. Tell me if you like!


Panel 1:
Stacy walks into the apartment.


Panel 2:
She sees Guu who is wearing a turtleneck.

Stacy: Guu! Is there something wrong? I thought it was bikini day!


Panel 3:
Guu suddenly looks sad at her feet.

Guu: It's nothing, I just kind of didn't feel like it today.


Panel 4:
Stacy holds Guu by the shoulders and looks her in the eyes.

Stacy: Did something happen. Please tell me.


Panel 5:
Guu is silent for a moment.


Panel 5:
She finally speaks.

Guu: I have Cancer. The doctor said I only have 6 months to live.
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#12
#10 is a go! I feel like this one is very original.


Panel 1:
Stacy runs through hospital doors in a panic.


Panel 2:
Stacy talks to the receptionist who points her to the left.


Panel 3:
Stacy talks to a doctor.


Panel 4:
Stacy stands above a defeated Guu, laying face down in tears on her hospital mattress.
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#13
I know it's been a while since my last comic transcript, but I've been busy drawing! I tried to draw comics, but it turned into porn.

Anyways, here's #11!


Panel 1:
Stacy hold and anemic Guu, she's trying to look into her eyes, but they are faded.

Panel 2:
Guu: I'm-I'm not ready to die.

Stacy: You're going to make it, please, just fight it.

Panel 3:
Guu's frail body fights against her as she speaks out her words.

Guu: Stacy, I.... love....

Panel 4:
Beeping machine goes flat

Stacy: Guu? Guu! No! Guu!
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#14
Comic #12! I hope you like it!


Panel 1:
A funeral service is being held at the top of a hill. A small handful of people are gathered.

Panel 2:
Stacy, wearing a respectful black bikini looks downwards.

Panel 3:
Headstone reads "Guu and Omni, wife and husband, lovers and loved. To death did they part."

Panel 4:
Stacy's face is covered in tears now, she brings a hankerchief up to blow her nose.
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#15
Sorry updates are slow, I've been kind of depressed lately. Don't know why.

Anyways, #13.


Panel 1:
Stacy stands before a podium, looking over the crowd of people.

Stacy: Guu, she was my most special-

Panel 2:
Stacy breaks out crying, the minister comes in from the left.

Panel 3:
Stacy lightly pushes him away, insistant to keep talking.

Panel 4:
Stacy: She was my most special friend. Even if I knew it wouldn't last. I would-

Panel 5:
She sniffs heavily, tears still rolling down here face.

Stacy: -I would have done it all anyways.

Panel 6:
She runs off from the podium, sobbing uncontrollably.
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#16
Comic #14


Panel 1:
Stacy is at the visitation room in the nearby police station. She's separated by glass, speaking on a phone with Doomguy.

Panel 2:
Doomguy holds the phone to his air while staring off into space.

Panel 3:
Stacy is watching him, worried.

Stacy: Doomguy? Are you okay?

Panel 4:
He just continues looking off, not evening paying attention to her.

Panel 5:
She looks even more visibly upset.

"What did they do to you?"

Panel 6:
DG is still in his own little world.
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#17
Comments Section:

Xx_RealIchigo_xX said:
Oh no davidson! Why r u depresed? Sad((((?
I would give money for your patreon if have any sorry lol
And, we dream of home I dream of life out of here Their dreams are small My dreams don't know fear I got my heart full of hope I will change everything No matter what I'm told How impossible it seems We did it before And we'll do it again We're indestructible Even when we're tired And we've been here before Just you and I
Don't try to rescue me I don't need to be rescued
#18
Thank you for the concern kind follower, I feel better.

Comic #15 is here


Panel 1:
Stacy walks up to her apartment.

Panel 2:
She finds an eviction notice on the door.

Panel 3:
Inside, she checks her piggy bank, empty.

Panel 4:
She weeps at the kitchen table. A photo of her and Guu looming over her.
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