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(Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
This website is reserved for my new webcomic, Omni and Pals! Expect new updates Mondays and Fridays! It's going to be hecka cool! Here's my list of characters:
Omni: God of everything, he's like a player and stuff! But he's also secretly a loser. Everyone knows it, but he pretends no one knows it. It is so much fun!
Guu: Omni's girlfriend, she's kind of there, I don't write girls very well.
Doomguy: OMG, do you remember those old Omni vs Doomguy videos? Those rocked! I thought of this webcomic when revisiting those recently.
Stacy: She's here because lesbians rule! Otherwise, don't expect much from her because I don't write girls very well.
I hope you enjoy the first strip coming soon!
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Sorry, I couldn't get any drawing done today, but here's a transcript for the the loyal Patrons!
Panel 1:
Omni sits on his throne, Guu rests her whole body against the hand rest, her d-cup boobs barely fitting in her bikini top.
Omni: Ah! What a beautiful day to be an asshole!
Panel 2:
Doomguy jumps through the window, shattering glass everywhere. Omni and Guu looked shocked. Guu's boobs bounces.
Panel 3:
DoomGuy points shotgun point blank on Omni's forehead.
Doom Guy: I'm here to kick ass and chew bubblegum.
Panel 4:
Close-up on DG's face.
Doomguy: And I'm all out of bubblegum.
Panel 5:
Doomguy shoots Omni in the face. He falls lifelessly on his throne.
Panel 6:
Doomguy walks away just as Guu and Stacy start making out, touching each other's breasts so eagerly.
Doomguy: Another day, another dead god.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Once again, drawing was an impossibility. Here's my outline for comic #2!
Don't forget to support my patreon!
Panel 1:
Omni and Guu sit a fancy picnic in the rain. Guu's breasts defy gravity.
Omni: It was a beautiful day, but I made it rain, because I can.
Panel 2:
Zoom out to show the picnic from high in the sky.
Panel 3:
A military jet of some military variety is flying through the sky, Doomguy can be seen from the helm.
Panel 4:
Standard shot of Doomguy in cockpit.
Doomguy: Hasta la vista, baby!
Panel 5:
Presses button on joystick thingy.
Panel 6:
Missile falls through the sky.
Panel 7:
Explosion.
Panel 8:
Doomguy looks into the fourth wall from the cockpit.
Doomguy: I guess his religion was just the bomb.
Panel 9:
Guu/Stacy porn scene (Patreon rewards exclusive)
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
My motivation to draw wil come eventually, so keep hyping up that first strip! Here's my script for strip #3! I hope you like it, I wrote a woman in it as practice!
And don't forget to support my Patreon!
Panel 1:
Omni is sitting at a fancy party surrounded by snooty people people in suits. Guu in a virgin killer sweater is nearby examining her nails.
Omni: ...so I said, pass me the cavier or you die!
Snooty people: Hohohohohohohohohoho
Guu: Good one honey.
Panel 2:
Monster truck drives in.
Panel 3:
Party freezes to look at said truck.
Panel 4:
Doomguy leaps out and lands perfectly on the ground.
Panel 5:
Doomguy throws a granade.
Doomguy: Time to rock this joint!
Panel 6:
Omni catches it.
Panel 7:
Explodes.
Panel 8:
Doomguy raises his arms in the air.
"Let's have an orgy!"
Panel 9:
Orgy scene exclusive for Patreons.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
This is the script for page #4. I decided to make this one kind of personal, something that has been going on in my life. I hope you appreciate it.
Panel 1:
Omni and Doomguy are staring each other in the eyes. DG has a submachine gun, Omni has a rubber ducky.
Panel 2:
Omni points at Davidson Kunler, creator of Omni and Pals.
Omni: Isn't that Davidson Kunler?
Doomguy: The creator of Omni and Pals? I love that webcomic.
Panel 3:
Davi-kun walks down a lonely street in a trench coat and trilby hat.
Omni: It's such a shame that he can't find a girlfriend.
Doomguy: If only woman had the respect to fully realize his genius and talents.
Panel 5:
Omni and Doomguy look down at the ground sad.
Omni: I'm not sure I could match him in manliness.
Doomguy: Same here, and I'm me... speaking of which...
Panel 6:
Doomguy shoots Omni in the face.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
For those of you complaining that I don't draw anything FUCK OFF!
Now here's page #5! I got to practice my womans writing!
Panel 1:
Guu is taking a shower, steam just barely hiding her naughty bits. Uncensored version Patreon exclusive.
Panel 2:
Guu walks out of the shower in a towel,
Guu: Honey? Are you there?
Panel 3:
Guu glances over Omni's bullet ridden body.
Panel 4:
Close up on Omni's bullet ridden body.
Panel 5:
Guu looks away from the body and looks towards the doorway.
Guu: Honey? Are you home?
Panel 6:
Stacy walks into the bathroom in her own towel.
Stacy: Aww, did you already shower? I was hoping to join.
Panel 7:
Guu embraces Stacy.
Stacy: I could use another one.
Panel 8:
Guu and Stacy make out in the shower. Again, uncensored version Patreon exclusive.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Page #6 transcript! All characters are copyright me! Do no steal!
Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are hanging out with Omni who has been slice in half.
Guu: This is the best day ever my love.
Panel 2:
The pair look towards a stranger.
Stacy: Who is that?
Panel 3
Close up on the stranger. He is a tall guy with a black trench coat and red eyes that glow ehn hes mad. nad he has a scythe that also is a gun and he has white hair with a scar over his right eye.
Panel 4:
The Stranger stands amongst the two women.
Stranger: I am Revow Neruet, I am Doomguy's brother. I have come to steal Guu away from Omni!
Panel 5:
The two girls look at him dumbfounded.
Panel 6:
Guu finally speaks up.
Guu: You do know I'm a hardcore lesbian who is only dating Omni to hide the fact I'm dating Stacy, right?
Panel 7:
Close up on the stranger's stern face.
Panel 8:
Close up on the stranger's horrified face.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
My first fanart! This is amazing!
![[Image: omni_nd_pals_w_my_oc_by_tearen_and_zearen-db1qgg7.jpg]](http://pre10.deviantart.net/719e/th/pre/i/2017/068/e/1/omni_nd_pals_w_my_oc_by_tearen_and_zearen-db1qgg7.jpg)
Quote:Art by Tearen Wover
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Page #7 script is here! I hope to get some drawing done tomorrow! Just you wait!
Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are both dressed in borat's swimsuit who is sitting with Omni who's head has been impaled on a pike.
Guu: It is quite the beautiful day.
Panel 2:
A waiter approaches.
Waiter: Excuse me, but you must be properly dressed to attend this party.
Panel 3:
Close up of Stacy.
Stacy: We're dressed.
Panel 4:
Waiter shakes his head.
Waiter: Not you two madams.
Panel 5:
The two girls look at Omni, who is per usual, naked.
Panel 6:
Guu is slipping pants onto Omni's corpse.
Stacy: I tend to forget he's naked. You would think I would have spotted a penis at some point.
Guu: His penis is there, somewhere.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Page #8 I'm practicing my foreshadowing! Please tell me how I'm doing!
Panel 1:
Guu and Stacy are at the mall, trying on skimpy clothes while Omni lies dead on the floor.
Guu: I've been feeling sick lately. Must be a bug going around.
Panel 2:
Doomguy busts into the store.
Doomguy: Prepare to die Omni!
Panel 3:
The girls barely look up from their clothes.
Stacy: You already killed him.
Panel 4:
Doomguy rubs his chin.
Doomguy: What? He's usually back by now.
Panel 5:
Doomguy is dragged off by security.
Doomguy: Wha- LET GO OF ME!
Panel 6:
Doomguy/Police rape scene Patreon exclusive.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
Page #9, trying something new today. Tell me if you like!
Panel 1:
Stacy walks into the apartment.
Panel 2:
She sees Guu who is wearing a turtleneck.
Stacy: Guu! Is there something wrong? I thought it was bikini day!
Panel 3:
Guu suddenly looks sad at her feet.
Guu: It's nothing, I just kind of didn't feel like it today.
Panel 4:
Stacy holds Guu by the shoulders and looks her in the eyes.
Stacy: Did something happen. Please tell me.
Panel 5:
Guu is silent for a moment.
Panel 5:
She finally speaks.
Guu: I have Cancer. The doctor said I only have 6 months to live.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 03-09-2017
#10 is a go! I feel like this one is very original.
Panel 1:
Stacy runs through hospital doors in a panic.
Panel 2:
Stacy talks to the receptionist who points her to the left.
Panel 3:
Stacy talks to a doctor.
Panel 4:
Stacy stands above a defeated Guu, laying face down in tears on her hospital mattress.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 05-08-2017
I know it's been a while since my last comic transcript, but I've been busy drawing! I tried to draw comics, but it turned into porn.
Anyways, here's #11!
Panel 1:
Stacy hold and anemic Guu, she's trying to look into her eyes, but they are faded.
Panel 2:
Guu: I'm-I'm not ready to die.
Stacy: You're going to make it, please, just fight it.
Panel 3:
Guu's frail body fights against her as she speaks out her words.
Guu: Stacy, I.... love....
Panel 4:
Beeping machine goes flat
Stacy: Guu? Guu! No! Guu!
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 05-08-2017
Comic #12! I hope you like it!
Panel 1:
A funeral service is being held at the top of a hill. A small handful of people are gathered.
Panel 2:
Stacy, wearing a respectful black bikini looks downwards.
Panel 3:
Headstone reads "Guu and Omni, wife and husband, lovers and loved. To death did they part."
Panel 4:
Stacy's face is covered in tears now, she brings a hankerchief up to blow her nose.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 05-08-2017
Sorry updates are slow, I've been kind of depressed lately. Don't know why.
Anyways, #13.
Panel 1:
Stacy stands before a podium, looking over the crowd of people.
Stacy: Guu, she was my most special-
Panel 2:
Stacy breaks out crying, the minister comes in from the left.
Panel 3:
Stacy lightly pushes him away, insistant to keep talking.
Panel 4:
Stacy: She was my most special friend. Even if I knew it wouldn't last. I would-
Panel 5:
She sniffs heavily, tears still rolling down here face.
Stacy: -I would have done it all anyways.
Panel 6:
She runs off from the podium, sobbing uncontrollably.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 05-08-2017
Comic #14
Panel 1:
Stacy is at the visitation room in the nearby police station. She's separated by glass, speaking on a phone with Doomguy.
Panel 2:
Doomguy holds the phone to his air while staring off into space.
Panel 3:
Stacy is watching him, worried.
Stacy: Doomguy? Are you okay?
Panel 4:
He just continues looking off, not evening paying attention to her.
Panel 5:
She looks even more visibly upset.
"What did they do to you?"
Panel 6:
DG is still in his own little world.
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Tearen Wover - 05-08-2017
Comments Section:
Xx_RealIchigo_xX said:
Oh no davidson! Why r u depresed?
((((?I would give money for your patreon if have any sorry lol
RE: (Webcomic) Omni and Pals! - Guu - 05-08-2017
Thank you for the concern kind follower, I feel better.
Comic #15 is here
Panel 1:
Stacy walks up to her apartment.
Panel 2:
She finds an eviction notice on the door.
Panel 3:
Inside, she checks her piggy bank, empty.
Panel 4:
She weeps at the kitchen table. A photo of her and Guu looming over her.