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Revan Noctis
#1
Character name:
Revan Noctis

Character source:
Original


Character history:
From a land much like Camelot.. a world in a medieval era with kingdoms,wars,  magic and undead. My character was a knight of a glorious kingdom and seemingly died in combat. He had always hoped to become a lord or ruler but had gave that up to help his king defend the land now he is faced with a new chance.
He had in his former world been a commander of a small force yet had been working to become a better leader and more powerful.
On his last mission against an enemy kingdom he was knocked unconscious before awakening in the Omniverse.


Physical Description: (originals only)

Height 1.83 m

Build: Slim
Eye colour: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Ethnicity: White


Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength 

Ranged Proficiency 



Starting Powers:
None

Starting Moves:
Simple move - Long sword - Melee based - swing 300OM
Overall Length with Scabbard: 49cm″
Sword Total Length: 44cm″
Blade Length:33cm″
Handle Length: 11cm″

This sword was used by Revan Noctis in his last battle but had also been used in many battles earlier it is fairly simple with the exception of the handle that had silver added to it with markings that symbolize that he had become a vassal of his former king.

Bow and Arrows

bow made of standard wood but painted black with silver markings similar to the sword
This bow is far newer then the sword and was only given to Revan Noctis in his most recent battle though he had trained with them before he is far less capable with it then the sword
The bow is 1.8 m
165 to 228 m range
an arrow every 10 seconds



I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
Yes

Where did you find us?
RPGfix.com
#2
Hello and welcome to the Omniverse!

History: When exactly in your character's canon was he taken to the Omniverse?

For your moves, we'll need a bit more detail. I'd check out the Moves section of the rules for more on that. There are a few examples of moves there that you can base yours off of as well.
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#3
(10-22-2016, 07:58 AM)Mark Wrote: Hey and Thanks.

Uh so I had it that he was in a battle and was essentially knocked unconscious during it before ending up at the Omniverse.
Other then that not entirely sure what you mean.

Simple move - Long sword - Melee based - swing 300OM

Attack my enemies with my sword.

Simple move - Bow and Arrows - ranged attack -  300OM

Shoot my enemies with arrows.

Super move - Sword Slash - ranged attack - 600OM

Leap at my enemy and hit them with my sword usually to finish them.
#4
That's fine for history, just edit that in.

For your moves, we need a bit more detail:

Long sword: What does it look like? What are the dimensions?

Bow and Arrows: How fast can he fire this? How far can he shoot?

Sword Slash: If this is just an attack where you jump toward them and strike, it wouldn't require Ranged Proficiency. Other than that, it's good.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights

#5
(10-24-2016, 10:25 AM)Mark Wrote: That's fine for history, just edit that in.

For your moves, we need a bit more detail:

Long sword: What does it look like? What are the dimensions?

Bow and Arrows: How fast can he fire this? How far can he shoot?

Sword Slash: If this is just an attack where you jump toward them and strike, it wouldn't require Ranged Proficiency. Other than that, it's good.

Done I think.
#6
Just looking for the information I asked about for the Bow, still. Also, do you want Sword Slash? It hasn't been added to your app so I want to be sure.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights

#7
(10-26-2016, 11:53 PM)Mark Wrote: Just looking for the information I asked about for the Bow, still. Also, do you want Sword Slash? It hasn't been added to your app so I want to be sure.

How is that?
#8
Looks good for the Bow and Arrow move. Are you not taking the Sword Slash Super Move then?

Also, just as an FYI I'll be changing your account name to Revan Noctis when I approve you. Just letting you know so you can still get into your account.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights

#9
(10-28-2016, 12:18 AM)Mark Wrote: Looks good for the Bow and Arrow move. Are you not taking the Sword Slash Super Move then?

Also, just as an FYI I'll be changing your account name to Revan Noctis when I approve you. Just letting you know so you can still get into your account.

eh I just want to start playing lol

Alright I will keep that in mind..
#10
Haha fair enough. When you want to buy it just run it through the Move Approval thread for the official stamp of approval. Otherwise you're good to go!

Name: Revan Noctis
Spent OM: 2600
Proficiencies (2000); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers (0/8000);
Moves (600); Long Sword (300), Bow and Arrows (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts: None
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3


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Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies

Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.

Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights



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