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John Connor test posts
#1
The future has not been written. There is no fate but what we make for ourselves."

The timeline had been screwed with... John stared at a computer typing up information about Skynet and much more. He was the chosen one, the leader, the one that was supposed to lead the human resistance against Skynet... But how was he going to do this now that ... he never finished his trailing thoughts as he disappeared from where he was at.

That's when panic began to arise among the human resistance..
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After arriving in the Omniverse:

John felt himself falling... into nothing... A white space with some strange fountain. His eyes quickly moved to the area and he started to panic.. "No... NO! I have to go home! The Human Resistance needs me!"

He stopped in his tracks trying to catch his breath when a creature began to introduce himself

Quote:My name is Omni. This is not the world you know."

"This is the Omniverse. You interest me, so I have made you part of it. The Omniverse is a place that reflects the wishes of those who are part of it. But! There are rules. I will explain them only once, so listen carefully.”

A white orb arrived in John Connor's hands and John looked up at the strange god named Omni. "I interest you, what sick joke is This?"

“This is Omnilium. It’s what ties the Omniverse together. Without it, you are nothing. With it, anything you desire can be yours. But you will need more than this. If you desire it enough, you will find it. You will find that using it comes naturally. Just think of what you desire most.

John looked at the orb "You mean money, right?" "this is all a dream... I'll wake up and i'll be back home right?"

“You will not be alone in the Omniverse. There are others. Of course, they, too desire Omnilium. Do not fear death. For as long as you interest me, you will be reborn.

“That’s all you need to know right now. You’ll figure out the rest soon enough. I’ll be watching … and waiting.”

Ok, let me get this straight? You rip me from my mom and my friends and this war against Skynet for this?"- Oh... wait.. I suppose terminators not chasing me is a good thing, right?"

No response...

John stared at the god creature named Omni "I get it, I'm dead right?"

....

"Come on, SAY something!"

I hate not being responded to...

John stood there frustrated...
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#2
I like John Connor, and the beginning is short and sweet. The beginning sentence added a good hook for the reader's mind to grapple with and hinge on.

Question: which movie have you take him from, I'm not sure I know his age?
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"I have never met a strong person with an easy past." -Atticus
#3
I'm either wanting to bring John in as a young adult or adult here.

He sort of sounds teenagerish here though.

Either Terminator: Sarah Connor Chronicles or adult John Connor.
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#4
Woo!!

Can't wait to see your choice, he has a lot of potential and not just in coruscant, as for age. Both would be interesting, it might just be interaction based for the effects of your choice
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#5
Should be kind of interesting though, It's going to be hard to have him compete with a lot of people with powers here though XD
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#6
That's true, but just get him the BFG. -crossing fandom lines-
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#7
*hint hint* Either that or swipe that BFG from Doomguy

Not really.
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#8
Don't forget, you can't change the intro to the omniverse and you can't interact with omni besides thinking to yourself...
#9
:wha:
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#10
I'm kidding!!!!
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#11
Apparantly my keyboard doesn't like typing the word 'Can't' that's multiple times now....

Edited my reply to have the correct wording
#12
Alright, i was curious. I'll take out the omni part then ^_^"
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