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huhuhu i'm dumb and i love switching: Peter Parker
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CHARACTER NAME: Peter Parker

CHARACTER SOURCE: Marvel (Cinematic Universe)

CHARACTER HISTORY: Born in Queens, Peter Parker was easily part of the borough. Middle class, barely holding his own at times, living with his aunt and uncle, bullied for his general flightiness... Things weren't easy, but they sure as hell could have been worse. Of course, this was a bit helped by the fact that he was quite the prodigy when it came to science and physics. He was smart enough to make it into a gifted science school, despite his family's poor income. But that's when everything changed for him. A radioactive spider bit him on the hand, gifting him proportional strength comparable to a spider, as well as some other features such as being able to cling to walls with his fingertips.

Tragedy struck a week later, where Peter let an armed robber run right by him, not bothering to help at all. Said robber returned only a day afterwards and killed his Uncle, Ben. Aiming to avenge him, Peter decided to become a hero like he was now able to, looking out for the little guy and protecting Queens in a homemade costume. Time passed and he became more and more well known, becoming known as the Spider-Man due to his selfmade web-shooters.

Over time, Peter made himself known to the Avengers, specifically Tony Stark, who figured out his identity and sought him out for a mission during the events of the Sokovia Accords awaiting signing. Tony provided Peter with an upgraded suit, and the two went to Germany, where they faced off against Captain America and his crew. Afterwards, he went back to Queens and continued in his hero ways. Along the way, he faced off against the Vulture, losing Stark's trust and suit in the process, before gaining them both back. Since then, he's been swinging around Queens, stopping crime as he goes. This continued until one day...

He disappeared.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
[spoiler]Peter:
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Spider-Man (Stark Suit): [Image: file-20170626-315-1h7k01d.jpg?auto=format&q=45&w=754]
Spider-Man (Homemade Suit):
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STATS:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3

STARTING PROFICIENCIES: Physical Strength (1000 OM), Ranged (1000 OM), Debuff (1000 OM)

STARTING POWERS: Master Acrobat (400 OM), Basic Super Jumping (300 OM)

STARTING MOVES:

Webs (600 OM) [Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, and Master Acrobat]:
Using a metallic wristband and a chemical mixture of his own design, Peter's created fairly simple designs for projecting the chemical substance at high speeds. So basically, shooting webs. The wristbands aren't exactly astronomically advanced, just a metal band around his wrist, with a canister and a button on the underside. He presses it with his fingers, and the webs come out of a hole facing out, about as fast as an arrow would fly. These are mainly used for two different functions: short bursts, or long strands.

Short bursts are simply that, short bursts. Their primary function is to entrap singular body parts, sticking them to whatever's nearby, or forcing them to work around having a body part stuck. Of course, this webbing isn't unbreakable, but it takes a decent amount of strength to break them off. That being said, they cut rather easily, meaning with a sharp object on hand, you can cut loose rather quickly.

Long strands, on the other hand, are used as a mode of transportation, such as a zipline or swinging from one structure to another. A much simpler application, but a much more useful one for everything outside battle. These webs can travel around 100 feet, to accompany their home turf, NYC.

Peter is very adept at creating his webbing, but he doesn't have an infinite amount per cartridge. After about a minute and a half of constant use in battle (forty-five seconds for each hand, but this is merely aesthetic), he will run out, meaning he has to spend thirty seconds putting in and setting his cartridges, meaning he can't use his webbing at all. In addition to this, Peter has to wait almost a second (around three fourths) before he can shoot webbing after he's shot one, as his shooters re-pressurize.

USED OM: 4300 OM

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us? Google again, lol

I'd like my display name to be Peter Parker.
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#2
Hello! I see that you have two accounts! Are you not using the Sonic the Hedgehog account?
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Always Outnumbered, Never Outgunned
#3
I completely forgot I still had this account, so I made it and then noticed Flynn. Needless to say, mistakes were made. I'll be using this account, my bad for the mistake. ^^'
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(06-08-2018, 09:18 PM)Flynn McAllistair Wrote: I completely forgot I still had this account, so I made it and then noticed Flynn. Needless to say, mistakes were made. I'll be using this account, my bad for the mistake. ^^'

No worries! Just double checking! Someone from our Joining Department will be handling your application very soon! Welcome to the Omniverse once again!
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Always Outnumbered, Never Outgunned
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Heyo, welcome back to the OV! For the most part your app looks great, but a couple questions on your move:

1. It would be helpful if, in the future, you listed what proficiencies and powers are required for your moves. This one I assume is Ranged, Debuff, and possibly Master Acrobat for the second part?
2. An actual speed on how fast the webs are shot, at least in the realm of "as fast as an arrow", "as fast as a thrown object", etc. would be quite helpful.
3. Is there any downtime between firing them, or just his reaction time?
4. A maximum length for the long ones would also be pretty helpful.

Or, if you'd prefer to work this out in Move Approval, let me know and I'll get your log and roster reset.
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Yuuka Kazami Wrote:Do you think Yuuka *aims* the Master Spark? No. She decides which half of the world she wants to fuck.
#6
No worries, I gotcha!

1. Yep, all that sounds correct! I'll try to write that down in the future, thanks for the reminder.
2. I'd say that it's about as fast as an arrow! Nowhere close to a bullet, anyway. ^^'
3. He does have to let the pressure build back up in his shooters first, so I'd say maybe three fourths of a second before he can shoot another web? It doesn't sound like much, but it'd definitely add up. I'm pretty sure that it's instant in the movies, but I'm gonna nerf it a bit.
4. I think about 100 feet, just about? That's about how long NYC streets are, and I'm trying to keep him accurate for the most part!

All of this has been added to the move, thank you so much! Big Grin
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Alrighty, I've checked with the move staff and you're all good then. Your log, which you should link in your mini-profile, is here. Go ahead and create a new Roster thread for him with his name over here, with this as the first post.

Code:
Name: Peter Parker
Spent OM: 4300
Consumed OM (0): (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Powers (700/8000): Master Acrobat (400), Basic Super Jumping (300)
Moves (600): Webs (600)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items (0):
Artefacts: None
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3

I'll contact one of the upper staff to get your name changed- and if you have any more questions, feel free to let me or one of them know! Hope to see you around!
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Yuuka Kazami Wrote:Do you think Yuuka *aims* the Master Spark? No. She decides which half of the world she wants to fuck.
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Name changed!
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