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Rafael Esquivel / Unicron
#1
Current OM: 8621,12  

Due to a recent donation today this swap is possible. 

CHARACTER NAME:  Rafael Esquivel / Unicron 

CHARACTER SOURCE: TFP - My Personal AU 

CHARACTER HISTORY:  Rafael Esquivel was a regular human who encountered a Cybertronian named Bumblebee. Unfortunately in doing so events were set in motion that would change his life forever and not for the better. For little did Humanity know bzt their home was actually the body of Unicron the Chaos Bringer. As a result when Megatron used Dark Energon he was forced to blast at Jack Darby but missed. The blast hit Rafael. This infused him with a copy of the mind of Unicron. When Mech which was a group of humans who were more of a militia took the T-Cog of Bumblebee that allowed him to go into car mode,  Rafael struck a bargain with the copy of Unicron inside of his head. In return for allowing Unicron to stay inside of him, and keeping the secret, Unicron would help Rafael protect humanity from the Decepticons. Given the age of the Chaos Bringer, the Chaos Bringer decided that it would bring more chaos to see what would happen if he did as Rafael wanted, and so he agreed. 

Unicron helped Rafael out by building a plasma blaster out of an Energon Cutter, and one of the riflles used by the Mech Agents. This was offered to them in return for the T-Cog of Bumblebee. After retrieving the T-Cog,  Unicron returned to the Autobot Base where he surgically reinstalled the T-Cog inside of the Transformer. Once that had been done, a battle that Miko convinced Rafael to sneak away with had an accident, an accident that nearly killed Rafael. It was at this point that Rafael was brought to the Omniverse. 

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:

[Image: TFP---Raf_1289400621.jpg] 

 



STATS:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:  Physical Strength - 1000 OM.   Area Attack (600)  Area Defense (400)    Debuff Proficiency (1000)  Buff Proficiency (400) 

STARTING POWERS:
Master Acrobat - 400 OM 
Insight - 1600 
Telepathy - 1500

STARTING MOVES:
 
Neural Net Contact (Flavor Move):  Due to being stuck inside his body, Unicron can project his thoughts, and neural impulses for other people around him to hear, as if he were actually talking with them. 

 
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#2
Bumping upon completion.
#3
Rafthew asked me to post here confirming that he donated - I can confirm that he did!
Curious about me and the characters I play? See the 'Staff' page! See also the rosters for my characters Samus Aran or Enel if you'd like to see examples of well-formatted rosters. Hope you enjoy the Omniverse!
#4
Can you... extrapolate on your history? It's a bit on the short- and confusing side (at least for me). Like, that first sentence makes little sense to me. Who is Rafael? Some dude? Some cybertronian human? Who is Unicron?

You don't have any Alternate Forms or Shapechanging, but you keep making mention of alternate forms?

How long is the sword?

You'll likely need more drawbacks on the buff if you want it to seemingly have infinite duration based on location. You'll need to revist the drawbacks for the Debuff, as I'm quite certain that having a particular item out doesn't qualify as a drawback for the sakes of balancing moves.
#5
I've decided that Raf/Unicron don't need moves to start out with, as that will save them OM later to put into Stat Points, and if need be I could always purchase the moves later. As for the "Alternate Forms" it's not really an alternate form per say, just a difference of when Raf or Unicron is in charge, so people can clearly tell who is in charge at the time. It does not provide any stat boost or enhancement of any kind. However, I have removed that.
#6
Bumping since it has been three days, and the edits are completed.
#7
Bumping once more. Hope to play as him today.
#8
Sorry for the delay. I'll get someone to continue working on the move for you. Below is your Roster. I'll get your Log setup here in a second. 

Name: Rafael Esquivel 
Spent OM: 6,900
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (3400): Physical Strength (1000), Area Attack (600),  Area Defense (400), Debuff Proficiency (1000), Buff Proficiency (400) 
Powers (3500/8000): Master Acrobat (400), Insight (1600), Telepathy (1500)
Moves (0):
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts: 
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4
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