08-05-2014, 10:33 AM
Time to work off this RP'ing rust.
![[Image: Blackfire.png]](http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101229051943/teentitans/images/f/f6/Blackfire.png)
Character name:
Blackfire
Character source:
DC Universe
Character history:
Komand’r is the firstborn of King Myand’r and Queen Lund’r of Tamaran. She was the first princess born into a royal family in over one hundred years. Her birth marked the most joyous moment in the history of the Tamaranean race, although on the contrary, it was also the worst day in the races history. During a celebration in honour of her birth, the Tamaranean’s were attacked by the Citadelian’s, a race formed with one goal, to conquer planets. The Citadelian Empire infiltrated planet Tamaran, destroying their capital, the western Tamaran City of Kysar. The Tamaran’s managed to defeat the invaders, losing three thousand members of their race in the process.
Komand’r experienced a very traumatic childhood, constantly frowned upon by people who perceived her as a constant reminder of the tragedy that struck their planet on the day of her birth. Even worse, she was crippled by a childhood illness that prevented her from absorbing ultraviolet radiation, which was required in order to fly. Her inability to fly was another excuse for the people of Tamaran to despise her. It made her feel like an outcast among everyone else that were all capable of flying. In order to please his people, King Myand’r resorted to drastic measures, denying Komand’r of her birthright as the next Queen of Tamaran. To her disgust, Komand’r’s status and the privileges as the heiress descended to her younger sister Koriand’r.
Komand’s self-pity eventually turned into resentment towards everyone, including her family. The only person that showed her affection was her father’s right-hand man Tyrand’r. He was also the only person who felt sympathy for her. As the King’s advisor, he tried to persuade Myand’r to allow Komand’r of her birthright, but to no avail. At that moment, he lost all respect for Myand’r.
Komand’r’s feelings towards her sister became evident when she and Koriand’r were sent for combat training with the Warlords of Okaara, attempting to kill Kori during a sparring session. The Warlords, appalled by the elder sister’s actions, decided to expel her. Tyrand’r convinced the King not to punish Komand’r for her rash actions and proposed to mentor Myand’r’s eldest child, in order keep her out of trouble, to which the King agreed.
Tyrand’r promised Komand’r that she would one day be the Queen of Tamaran. He also stated in order for that to happen, she would have to obey his commands, which included putting up with her family, to Komand’r’s displeasure.
A few days after Komand’r’s 19th bitrthday, Tyrand’r asked for the Kings permission to travel across the universe with his eldest daughter as a birthday gift. Myand’r approved, with the condition that a reasonable amount of his strongest men accompany them on their tour, which Tyrand’r accepted.
The King was unaware of his most trusted man’s real motive. After the duo disposed of their Kings men, they travelled to the Vega Star system. Once there, Tyrand’r and Komand’r offered a proposition to the Citadelians, promising to give them Intel on the Tamaran’s defences, on the condition they only get to control a quarter of Tamaran’s planet under Komand’r reign as queen. After back and forth negations, the Citadelian leader, Lord Damyn accepted the offer.
Rather than use their time to travel the universe, the duo spent their time among the Citadelians, familiarising with their lifestyle while planning the invasion on planet Tamaran.
Thanks to the Intel, the Citadel defeated the Tamaran race with ease.
Komand’r acted swiftly as the new queen of Tamaran, forcing her parents and brother (who refused any part of her regime) into exile, and enslaving her sister.
Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength – 1000 OM
Ranged Proficiency – 1000 OM
Area Attack Proficiency – 600 OM
Area Shield Proficiency – 400 OM
Remote Control Proficiency – 600 OM
Starting Powers:
Super Jumping (Basic) 300 OM
Master Acrobat – 400 OM
Starting Moves:
Starbolts – 300 OM
Blackfire infuses energy into her palms, which forms into purple chi and then released as projectiles towards a target or multiple targets, exploding upon impact.
Starshield – 300 OM
Blackfire summons energy, which cloaks around herself. It is a purple energy field that repels physical attacks, for instance elemental, or energy beams.
Writing example:
Komand’r’s Journal
(Simply the greatest journal of all time.)
If I wrote an autobiography, or had the patience to keep track of my life on a daily basis with notes in a journal, it would be like nothing you have every read before. The content would shock and appal you to the extent that you would assume certain parts were exaggerated.
That is false.
The events that have transpired in my life are not fictional; they are factual. If it were fictional, it would not be an autobiography!
Day 1: Chapter 1
On the 20th of May MCMXCI, a child was born, not a typical child, a child of great significance. I was privileged to have been born into the royal family of King Myand’r and Queen Lund’r of Tamaran. What made the occasion unique was not just the fact that I was their firstborn; I was not a boy. I became the first firstborn daughter born into a royal family for over a century. This marked the grandest and joyful occasion in the races history. Unfortunately, that did not last long. I stress the words constructed in the previous sentence because the happiness lasted less than twenty-four hours. My existence into this universe was supposed to be the greatest day in Tamaran history, but on the contrary, it marked the worst day in the history of the Tamaran race. Why was this so?
Firstly, my race was attacked by our archenemies, the Citedelians, a hideous race of creatures from the Vega Star system. Although we defeated them, we lost a large portion of our capital and three thousand inhabitants. Due to that terrible event unfolding on the day of my birth, I was left to bear the blame. Even worse, I was born handicapped without the capability of absorbing ultraviolet radiation, unlike any of my kind, including kin. Unfortunately, this also meant that I was the only Tamaran incapable of flying.
Character name:
Blackfire
Character source:
DC Universe
Character history:
Komand’r is the firstborn of King Myand’r and Queen Lund’r of Tamaran. She was the first princess born into a royal family in over one hundred years. Her birth marked the most joyous moment in the history of the Tamaranean race, although on the contrary, it was also the worst day in the races history. During a celebration in honour of her birth, the Tamaranean’s were attacked by the Citadelian’s, a race formed with one goal, to conquer planets. The Citadelian Empire infiltrated planet Tamaran, destroying their capital, the western Tamaran City of Kysar. The Tamaran’s managed to defeat the invaders, losing three thousand members of their race in the process.
Komand’r experienced a very traumatic childhood, constantly frowned upon by people who perceived her as a constant reminder of the tragedy that struck their planet on the day of her birth. Even worse, she was crippled by a childhood illness that prevented her from absorbing ultraviolet radiation, which was required in order to fly. Her inability to fly was another excuse for the people of Tamaran to despise her. It made her feel like an outcast among everyone else that were all capable of flying. In order to please his people, King Myand’r resorted to drastic measures, denying Komand’r of her birthright as the next Queen of Tamaran. To her disgust, Komand’r’s status and the privileges as the heiress descended to her younger sister Koriand’r.
Komand’s self-pity eventually turned into resentment towards everyone, including her family. The only person that showed her affection was her father’s right-hand man Tyrand’r. He was also the only person who felt sympathy for her. As the King’s advisor, he tried to persuade Myand’r to allow Komand’r of her birthright, but to no avail. At that moment, he lost all respect for Myand’r.
Komand’r’s feelings towards her sister became evident when she and Koriand’r were sent for combat training with the Warlords of Okaara, attempting to kill Kori during a sparring session. The Warlords, appalled by the elder sister’s actions, decided to expel her. Tyrand’r convinced the King not to punish Komand’r for her rash actions and proposed to mentor Myand’r’s eldest child, in order keep her out of trouble, to which the King agreed.
Tyrand’r promised Komand’r that she would one day be the Queen of Tamaran. He also stated in order for that to happen, she would have to obey his commands, which included putting up with her family, to Komand’r’s displeasure.
A few days after Komand’r’s 19th bitrthday, Tyrand’r asked for the Kings permission to travel across the universe with his eldest daughter as a birthday gift. Myand’r approved, with the condition that a reasonable amount of his strongest men accompany them on their tour, which Tyrand’r accepted.
The King was unaware of his most trusted man’s real motive. After the duo disposed of their Kings men, they travelled to the Vega Star system. Once there, Tyrand’r and Komand’r offered a proposition to the Citadelians, promising to give them Intel on the Tamaran’s defences, on the condition they only get to control a quarter of Tamaran’s planet under Komand’r reign as queen. After back and forth negations, the Citadelian leader, Lord Damyn accepted the offer.
Rather than use their time to travel the universe, the duo spent their time among the Citadelians, familiarising with their lifestyle while planning the invasion on planet Tamaran.
Thanks to the Intel, the Citadel defeated the Tamaran race with ease.
Komand’r acted swiftly as the new queen of Tamaran, forcing her parents and brother (who refused any part of her regime) into exile, and enslaving her sister.
Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3
Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength – 1000 OM
Ranged Proficiency – 1000 OM
Area Attack Proficiency – 600 OM
Area Shield Proficiency – 400 OM
Remote Control Proficiency – 600 OM
Starting Powers:
Super Jumping (Basic) 300 OM
Master Acrobat – 400 OM
Starting Moves:
Starbolts – 300 OM
Blackfire infuses energy into her palms, which forms into purple chi and then released as projectiles towards a target or multiple targets, exploding upon impact.
Starshield – 300 OM
Blackfire summons energy, which cloaks around herself. It is a purple energy field that repels physical attacks, for instance elemental, or energy beams.
Writing example:
Komand’r’s Journal
(Simply the greatest journal of all time.)
If I wrote an autobiography, or had the patience to keep track of my life on a daily basis with notes in a journal, it would be like nothing you have every read before. The content would shock and appal you to the extent that you would assume certain parts were exaggerated.
That is false.
The events that have transpired in my life are not fictional; they are factual. If it were fictional, it would not be an autobiography!
Day 1: Chapter 1
On the 20th of May MCMXCI, a child was born, not a typical child, a child of great significance. I was privileged to have been born into the royal family of King Myand’r and Queen Lund’r of Tamaran. What made the occasion unique was not just the fact that I was their firstborn; I was not a boy. I became the first firstborn daughter born into a royal family for over a century. This marked the grandest and joyful occasion in the races history. Unfortunately, that did not last long. I stress the words constructed in the previous sentence because the happiness lasted less than twenty-four hours. My existence into this universe was supposed to be the greatest day in Tamaran history, but on the contrary, it marked the worst day in the history of the Tamaran race. Why was this so?
Firstly, my race was attacked by our archenemies, the Citedelians, a hideous race of creatures from the Vega Star system. Although we defeated them, we lost a large portion of our capital and three thousand inhabitants. Due to that terrible event unfolding on the day of my birth, I was left to bear the blame. Even worse, I was born handicapped without the capability of absorbing ultraviolet radiation, unlike any of my kind, including kin. Unfortunately, this also meant that I was the only Tamaran incapable of flying.
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