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ShadeClaw's Join Form
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Character name:
Dawnika Snow

Character source: Original

Character history:
Dawnika hails from the realm of the elements, Quotin. Quotin is a seperate universe from the human world most people know. One filled with monsters, demons, angels, elves, dwarves, and many other creatures. The specific realm she is from Xenithia, the country of the shadows. Her species is specifically known as Akame, or "The Red Eyes". She was a political leader, none other than a princess, before she was called to the Omniverse. Dawn has lived most of her life in seclusion inside the Umbra castle in Nyx, the capital of Xenithia. Therefore, she has no friends that she left behind.

"I fell asleep the day after our final battle with the War of the Elements. Now I am here. I have three possible guesses as to why I am here: one, I have begun to dream; two, I have been assassinated in my sleep and this is afterlife; or three, this is completely real and I am in another universe." Dawn knew other universes ecisted since Quotin is connected to the human's universe by qa symbiotic relationship, but she never knew universes could be transversed. " I guess the simple questions are what are you, where are we and why am I here?"

Physical Description:
Dawnika is the age of 19 in human years. (Akame's scale for age differ from that of humans.) She stands at an average height of 5' 4" and weighs in at 115lb. The most definable aspect of her being is her red eyes. Next, would have to be her attire. She certainly stands out given the face she seem to only wear a skirt and a shirt that is a size and a half too big for her. One of its sleeves hangs off her shoulder on her left side. She doesn't even wear shoes or boots of any kind, completely barefoot. Her hair is a little shorter than shoulder length. The bangs cover up most of her face, so to most humans she would look mostly emotionless or creepy. Her build is most closely around lean. She's neither musclar, nor is she anywhere having a "few extra pounds. Lastly, she is ampidexrious.
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Stats:

ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength - 1000 OM

Starting Powers:
Burst Movement - 800 OM, Shapeshifting - 1400 OM, Master Acrobat - 400 OM

Starting Moves:
Kagetsume (Katana) - 300 OM
The signature weapon used by Dawnika Snow. It gets it's Japanese name from the nick name of it's weilder, ShadeClaw. This blade has ended many lives in her home universe. The blade has a reach of 3' 4" from hilt to point. The blade was normally made of a material from Xenithia called Mun, however her transfer to a new universe has changed the blade to Black Steel instead. It is just a simple sword that can be swung, no special powers.

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#2
Everything here looks good, but the move you put up here wouldn't really need to be bought, but since you said it requires more movement and power than just regular slashes, it will count as a move. However, it's price and description are fine. I would, however, add in how many slashes this move consists of (just for clarity's sake).

Your sword needs to be a move itself - Pricing and Writing moves - as weapons themselves are classed as separate moves. A basic sword is generally counted as a basic move, but I will need you to describe the sword itself in the description.
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#3
Ok, let me make some edits. Thanks Smile
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#4
just a quick comment, maybe instead of the move put the blade that she uses

edit: or even as a seperate move
edit edit: minato already said this... dont know how i didnt see it, sorry:oops:
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#5
Done. I also added master acrobat to her powers.
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#6
Approved, I will get you set up shortly, but before I do that, we generally have our account names the name of our Characters, so you'll need to have your name changed to Dawnika Snow
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#7
Then make it so, Minato. Dem rhyme skills is boss.
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#8
Name: Dawnika Snow
Level: 1
Spent OM: 3900
Proficiencies: (1000); Physical Strength (1000),
Powers: (2600); Burst Movement (800), Master Acrobat (400), Shapeshifting (1400)
Moves: (300); Kagetsume (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3

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