JackFrost, I'm calling you out!

[Retane]

I'm tired of you dragging me down! You're dead weight and its time to remove you like the cancerous bastard you are!

That's right! I'm tired of hearing "Stop going into shit alone and blah blah blah!"

Fucking letting real life get the way of keeping the Horsemen active... such a waste of my time!

I challenge you to a fight to the death you ice humping prick!

My stipulations are as follows:

Since you think lower numbers will hurt me, : Lets make it 600-800 Word Limit
. 5 Posts EACH

Judge will be chosen at your and my discretion, But I was thinking of asking Ciara or my usual Default, Alex. Personally I don't care as long as it's someone that I can talk into not grading my grammar so harshly>_>

Other then that, everything else is fair game...

WHAT SAY YOU?????

[Jack Frost]

I am calling for a judge who grades on grammar for fights. I am taking volunteers as well. Me and Ret will choose.

[Retane]

Still a bafoon. They HAVE to Judge the FOUR CATEGORIES like anyone else.

BUut, what I'm asking is that we pick someone thats not a flippin' Grammar Nazi. Stupid

[Jack Frost]

My point is proven^^^. Oh stop resisting the inevitable Ret, no matter what we judge on, I will RECK you. ^3^

[Thaal Sinestro]

I'll grade it lol

[Jack Frost]

Added to the list^. Ignore Retane's next comment...

[Retane]

NOT NO, BUT HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wait, are you serious?

[Thaal Sinestro]

I'll grade it, sure. And here's a real de facto Grammar Policy for you to chew on, so you have a really obvious, non-objectionable grade on it:
# of BIG grammar and spelling errors / 300 words = your Grade

[Sasuke Uchiha]

BUut, what I'm asking is that we pick someone thats not a flippin' Grammar Nazi. Stupid

Did someone say... Nazis?

[Dark Link]

BUut, what I'm asking is that we pick someone thats not a flippin' Grammar Nazi. Stupid

Did someone say... Nazis?

Indeed, they did.

[Kirano Jr]

I called it. No pun intended. This is your moment Jack. Go be your own man!

[Tartaros]

BUut, what I'm asking is that we pick someone thats not a flippin' Grammar Nazi. Stupid

but yeah I'd judge it Jack frogc00l

[Magus]

BUut, what I'm asking is that we pick someone thats not a flippin' Grammar Nazi. Stupid

but yeah I'd judge it Jack frogc00l

[Retane]

Myself and Jack Frost have agreed that the Judge will be Thaal.
We agreed that there isn't an exact timeline where this has to be finshed, because of his school and me trying to get back to work, but one can't be constantly slack.
Moves are allowed to be purchased at any time(because getting a kickass idea can be fun to RP in fights)

Let the battle begin...

[Thaal Sinestro]

This is my grading format. If you got any gripes, let me know, but it's worked pretty well for me in the past. I normally add an "Audience" segment that's just the reader's opinion on the thing, but I think it's better for multiple graders.


Description and Clarity:
This section covers how effectively the writer created the world around the reader. Making sure that the reader can understand what is being described, using vivid or appropriate descriptions of items, events and people in the story and having good word choice all go into this section of the review. Note that using “purple prose” is not always effective, nor is consistently using flat, dry description. A writer that gets a good score in this section draws the reader into the world and allows them to see through the eyes of the character/narrator.

Voice:
No two writers write in the same style, nor should they. Even individual stories call for individual writing styles, a mood that creates a tinted lens through which the story is viewed. This is traditionally called the “voice” of the writer and it is a very important part of writing. A writer with a high score in this considers tone, pacing and including/disincluding detail throughout the entire story.

Character:
Character development, the actions and motivation of characters and dialogue are all important in this section. The goal is to create “round” characters as opposed to “flat” ones. Making the people in your writing seem real, not just archetypes following a plot progression is the goal here. The writer should consider who the people they are writing as are as individuals, why they take certain actions, their personal problems and boons, how they interact with the world around themselves and how they approach problems are all considerations for a writer in this section. Note that not all GOOD characters are LIKABLE characters. If you really hate a character that’s well written, this section deserves a good score!

Story:
Every body of creative writing, no matter how short or long, follows a storyline. How well the themes, events, messages and twists grab the reader is what makes the difference between a decent story and a great story. The writer must capture the reader’s attention hold it with the actions of characters and the world around them. This isn’t to say that a writing must be packed with action or intrigue, even something as simple as eating breakfast can be made into a great story. The presentation of events and how those events tie into the writer’s voice is what makes it good reading.

Grammar and Spelling:
This is the clerical work of the body of work. Spelling, punctuation, grammar and anything else that can be considered technical goes into this section. Generally every major grammatical error per 500 words moves this section down one grade.

[Retane]

Thought you had to use the Judge card, but whatever. It's fine for me-ish

[Thaal Sinestro]

Thought you had to use the Judge card, but whatever. It's fine for me-ish

There's no official judging card, at least none in the Rules. I just feel like I'd know how to grade you better with this than the one that Gil used for your other fight, but if you'd rather I used the other I can do that.

[Retane]

You're fine. Lol. and Gil, used the same one Alex Used in my BS fight, and in my Malefactor Quest... I tihnk?

[Dark Link]

Just to add, it is completely up to each individual judge how they want to grade something. Just because we staff tend to employ a fairly similar grading approach doesn't mean that anyone else has to as well. We just prefer to keep things relatively uniform for simplicity's sake.

[Retane]

Since THe INtro had been added, and I have got some confusion on somethngs... Just KNow that I agreed to everything up to pretty much everything that happened in the INtro...

I got a 10/10 From Kenny...

AGAIN... in the end of this... DEATH HAPPENS