I need crowd source help...

[Trixie]

I'm trying to make my roster as complete and as thorough as I could make it so if someone needs a crash course into the world of Trixie and her equipment it does just that.

My roster link is below my avatar. What I need help with is if there is something I've missed that could help you write her that is not written there. Any comments and corrections are welcome. As a side of effect of my coming off a potent anti-psychotic called Seroquel and moving to Lithium I've lost some of my eye sight so my proof reading can be sub par as my eyes don't focus like they did say 6 months ago.

I'm just looking for several sets of eyes and several types of minds to be like "Well if I were to write her I'd want to know this" or "Yeah you've covered everything. Relax bitch."

Thanks.

[Galel Baraz]

I have only two things to point out.

1. It isn't made abundantly clear whether or not she is STILL as ruthless and cruel as she was pre-omniverse. I'm leaning towards a yes, but if I were to write Trixie, I'd want that to be clarified.
2. The Nightsisters of Dathomir don't show up until 4,700 years after Trixie is sucked into the Omniverse. (This is a minor lore gripe, I'm a lore nut. It doesn't REALLY matter, I'm just finicky about that kind of stuff).

Aside from that, your roster is a solid read and serves as an excellent crash course in 'Trixie'.

[Gilgamesh]

the only thing I would add is Links to your current Omniverse Stuff

[Trixie]

I have only two things to point out.

1. It isn't made abundantly clear whether or not she is STILL as ruthless and cruel as she was pre-omniverse. I'm leaning towards a yes, but if I were to write Trixie, I'd want that to be clarified.
2. The Nightsisters of Dathomir don't show up until 4,700 years after Trixie is sucked into the Omniverse. (This is a minor lore gripe, I'm a lore nut. It doesn't REALLY matter, I'm just finicky about that kind of stuff).

Aside from that, your roster is a solid read and serves as an excellent crash course in 'Trixie'.

Point 1: I can fix that. Good point. I re-read her personality section and I agree.

Point 2: Yeah...about that. I'm a lore nut too and I totally stretched it. You caught me. I'm operating under the assumption that Dathomir was still there (of course) and that the old Sith Empire discovered it as well.

[Trixie]

the only thing I would add is Links to your current Omniverse Stuff

See? This is why I need you guys. I was going to do that, but forgot!

[Galel Baraz]

Point 2: Yeah...about that. I'm a lore nut too and I totally stretched it. You caught me. I'm operating under the assumption that Dathomir was still there (of course) and that the old Sith Empire discovered it as well.

Totally fine. I really only noticed it because I once played SW:TOR on an RP server, and I knew someone who played a Night Sister. Wasn't that good at it.

[Trixie]

Point 2: Yeah...about that. I'm a lore nut too and I totally stretched it. You caught me. I'm operating under the assumption that Dathomir was still there (of course) and that the old Sith Empire discovered it as well.

Totally fine. I really only noticed it because I once played SW:TOR on an RP server, and I knew someone who played a Night Sister. Wasn't that good at it.

I get ya. Dathomir was my favorite planet in SWG and I played SW:TOR too. PvP server though.

[Trixie]

I updated her personality a bit. I may rewrite it, but I think it flows okay.

[Trixie]

I'm trying to make my roster as complete and as thorough as I could make it so if someone needs a crash course into the world of Trixie and her equipment it does just that.

My roster link is below my avatar. What I need help with is if there is something I've missed that could help you write her that is not written there. Any comments and corrections are welcome. I'm just looking for several sets of eyes and several types of minds to be like "Well if I were to write her I'd want to know this" or "Yeah you've covered everything. Relax bitch."

Thanks.

Necro for opinions.