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Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic
Link to Thread: [url=http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7138]A Fine City[/url
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters:
Desman Black
Shiotaro Yuki

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 16,315
Shiotaro Yuki: 15,861

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 3,047
Shiotaro Yuki: 2,883

(According to Wordcounter.net)(late theard is late becurse I didn't relize partitaon bonus existed until recently)
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Yuuka KazamiBig Grines is like that one meme like... "How many levels of Omniverse are you on?"

Revan Noctis : Desman what are you currently doing in the omniverse?
Desman Black: I'm faking an engagement to a sex deamon to stop two samurai I accidently summoned whipping them in half, while also trying to stop them from doing the same thing to my best freind who is currently having relations with said deamon, and wh has now accidently summoned his previous girlfreind. So you know... normal stuff
(07-31-2017, 12:46 AM)Desman Black Wrote: Link to Thread: A Fine City
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters:
Desman Black
Shiotaro Yuki

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 16,315
Shiotaro Yuki: 15,861

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 3,047
Shiotaro Yuki: 2,883

(According to Wordcounter.net)(late theard is late becurse I didn't relize partitaon bonus existed until recently)

Participation bonus granted! Logs will be updated momentarily.

Desman: 163.2
Shiotaro: 158.61

LOGS UP8'd - Jadedit!
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Gamzee Makara Wrote:S’aight. After all, dogs have a tendency to motherfuckin’ bite.
Submitting the beach filler episode for Participation bonuses, it’s a doozy, just warning you.

Link: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8614


Chakra 435 words 2,387 characters
Gildarts 30,775 words 171,973 characters
Hiro Protagonist’s ozal- 813 words 4,707 characters
Blink- 2,682 words 14,694 characters
Tearen-1,330 words 7,561 characters

Protoman-1,000 words 5,875 characters

Takezo-4,333 words 23,734 characters

Dust-14,426 words 76,862 characters

Ash-5,531 words 29,640 characters

Desman-2,451 words 13,359 characters

Jak-537 words 2,838 characters

Harry Potter-910 words 5,225 characters

Ice bear- 654 words 3,659 characters
(all of the above were checked via wordcounter.net)

For Cirno according to Wordcounter
Word count: 1,596 words
Character count: 8,633 Character's    

Usopp-        604 words
3227 characters
according to Word    
             
            For Clownpiece:
According to Wordcounter
Word Count: 3208
Character Count: 18143    

Word Count:
Isabelle: 6,014
Guu: 853

Character Count:
Isabelle: 33,266
Guu: 4,802

According to Google Docs
Mark Wrote:"Every story I have told is part of me." -(How I Go) Yellowcard

Link to topic: The Fate of Feelings
Quest or Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Gardevoir(Me), and Umbreon(Secondary to Dust)

Total character count including spaces(according to Wordcounter.net)

Gardevoir: 11,069
Umbreon: 7,725

Total word count(According to Wordcounter.net)

Gardevoir: 2,083
Umbreon: 1,391
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(08-08-2017, 06:32 AM)Gardevoir Wrote: Link to topic: The Fate of Feelings
Quest or Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Gardevoir(Me), and Umbreon(Secondary to Dust)

Total character count including spaces(according to Wordcounter.net)

Gardevoir: 11,069
Umbreon: 7,725

Total word count(According to Wordcounter.net)

Gardevoir: 2,083
Umbreon: 1,391


What! You guys are abandoning Cinnabar to Darkling infestations? How heartless!

From a writing standpoint it was on the whole good. You both want to watch your consistency. Gardevoir, you switched from first to third person sometimes between sentences, which can confuse people quickly. Likewise Dust, you were sometimes calling Eclipse a she, and sometimes an it. Other than that, it was solid enjoyable writing from both of you.

Gardevoir: 110.69 OM
Dust: 77.3 OM

Updated! - Spur
If history is to become legend, it first must be recorded.
At last, we've hit the point where we need judgement to determine what direction to go with the final battle in this quest!

Avast Me Hearties
Star Piece Quest - Vasty Deep

Participating characters: Zack Fair, Caira Ayryn
Total character count including spaces
Zack: 108,192
Caira: 183,850
Total word count
Zack: 19,472
Caira: 33,654

Thank you for your time!
"Any Memeber may weigh in on any topic." - Very well!! All you can do is say no. xD

Destination: Desperation
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal
Participating characters (please list):
Jaixe Furiael
Ash, The Storm Demon

Total character count including spaces:
Jaixe: 45,587 Characters
Ash: 59,453 Characters

Total word count:
Jaixe: 7,973 Words
Ash: 11,059 Words

(I used wordcounter.net)
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Warning: Anything that involves Ash should be rated M. Possibly higher.

Erik Vrell : Ash has a 'love' fourth dimensional shape
Erik Vrell : As in its wide and unfathomable for us mere mortals
Coming to collect that participation bonus. Woop woop. It makes dying more worth it.

The First of Many: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8751

Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal
Participating characters (please list):
Dane Regan
Clownpiece

Total character count including spaces:
Dane Regan: 12,552 Characters
Clownpiece: 6,191 Characters

Total word count:
Dane Regan: 2,194 Words
Clownpiece: 1,102 Words
Edit: It's been pointed out to me that this submission might serve better as fodder for up-and-coming judges, so I've moved it to the 'become a judge' thread.
White Voids and Black Coffee
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Ian Sylvester, Gaston, Chara
Total character count including spaces: 
Ian-1866
Chara-4926
Gaston-7763
Total word count:
Ian-374
Chara-934
Gaston-1411

(Word and character counts done using wordcounter.net)
(08-09-2017, 11:19 AM)Zack Fair Wrote: At last, we've hit the point where we need judgement to determine what direction to go with the final battle in this quest!

Avast Me Hearties
Star Piece Quest - Vasty Deep

Participating characters: Zack Fair, Caira Ayryn
Total character count including spaces
Zack: 108,192
Caira: 183,850
Total word count
Zack: 19,472
Caira: 33,654

Thank you for your time!

You guys should be okay to win this battle with your current word count and writing quality. Let me know when you've completed the thread and who you would like to receive the Violet Star Piece!

(08-09-2017, 11:57 AM)Ash Wrote: "Any Memeber may weigh in on any topic." - Very well!! All you can do is say no. xD

Destination: Desperation
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal
Participating characters (please list):
Jaixe Furiael
Ash, The Storm Demon

Total character count including spaces:
Jaixe: 45,587 Characters
Ash: 59,453 Characters

Total word count:
Jaixe: 7,973 Words
Ash: 11,059 Words

(I used wordcounter.net)

Participation bonus granted!

Jaixe: 455.87 OM
Ash: 594.53 OM

(08-09-2017, 01:26 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: Coming to collect that participation bonus. Woop woop. It makes dying more worth it.

The First of Many: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8751

Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal
Participating characters (please list):
Dane Regan
Clownpiece

Total character count including spaces:
Dane Regan: 12,552 Characters
Clownpiece: 6,191 Characters

Total word count:
Dane Regan: 2,194 Words
Clownpiece: 1,102 Words

Dane Regan: 125.54 OM
Clownpiece: 61.92 OM

(08-10-2017, 12:27 PM)Gaston Wrote: White Voids and Black Coffee
Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Ian Sylvester, Gaston, Chara
Total character count including spaces:
Ian-1866
Chara-4926
Gaston-7763
Total word count:
Ian-374
Chara-934
Gaston-1411

(Word and character counts done using wordcounter.net)

Ian Sylvester: 18.67 OM
Gaston: 77.73 OM
Chara: 49.3 OM

Quote:ALL LOGS UPD8'D! - Jadedit.
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Gamzee Makara Wrote:S’aight. After all, dogs have a tendency to motherfuckin’ bite.
Link to Thread: [M] Torn's Big Break
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters:
Desman Black
Ash
Jak Mar
Torn (jak NPC)
Daxter (jak NPC)
Krack (jak NPC)
Draikin (jak NPC)

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 5,245
Jak Mar: 8,755
Ash:15,080

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 950
Jak Mar: 1,613
Ash:2,844

(According to Wordcounter.net)
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Yuuka KazamiBig Grines is like that one meme like... "How many levels of Omniverse are you on?"

Revan Noctis : Desman what are you currently doing in the omniverse?
Desman Black: I'm faking an engagement to a sex deamon to stop two samurai I accidently summoned whipping them in half, while also trying to stop them from doing the same thing to my best freind who is currently having relations with said deamon, and wh has now accidently summoned his previous girlfreind. So you know... normal stuff
(08-06-2017, 02:20 AM)Sam Wrote: Submitting the beach filler episode for Participation bonuses, it’s a doozy, just warning you.

Link: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8614


Chakra 435 words 2,387 characters
Gildarts 30,775 words 171,973 characters
Hiro Protagonist’s ozal- 813 words 4,707 characters
Blink- 2,682 words 14,694 characters
Tearen-1,330 words 7,561 characters

Protoman-1,000 words 5,875 characters

Takezo-4,333 words 23,734 characters

Dust-14,426 words 76,862 characters

Ash-5,531 words 29,640 characters

Desman-2,451 words 13,359 characters

Jak-537 words 2,838 characters

Harry Potter-910 words 5,225 characters

Ice bear- 654 words 3,659 characters
(all of the above were checked via wordcounter.net)

For Cirno according to Wordcounter
Word count: 1,596 words
Character count: 8,633 Character's    

Usopp-        604 words
3227 characters
according to Word    
             
            For Clownpiece:
According to Wordcounter
Word Count: 3208
Character Count: 18143    

Word Count:
Isabelle: 6,014
Guu: 853

Character Count:
Isabelle: 33,266
Guu: 4,802

According to Google Docs

Well I will give you guys credit, you had just the right levels of plot going on that it really did feel like an anime beach episode mini-season. Nice to see so many people writing together in one thread. Even if the place you guys are vacationing in is on the verge of collapse from darklings. =P

Isabelle: 327.29 OM
Chakravaritan Wu Kong: 28.37 OM (or 14.19 OM post-switch)
Hiro Protagonist: 47.1 OM
Blink: 147.04 OM
Cirno: 86.2 OM
Guu:47.07 OM
Gildarts: 1463.37 OM (congrats on reaching 100K!)
Ice Bear: 36.58 OM
Tearen Wover: 75.63 OM
Clownpiece: 181.49 OM
Usopp: 32.1 OM
Dust: 769.19 OM
Harry Potter: 52.31 OM
Protoman: 58.76 OM
Takezo Shinman: 237.41 OM
Jak Mar: 27.42 OM
Ash: 296.54 OM
Desman Black: 133.59 OM

Your rosters should be updated by someone with the appropriate permissions soon!

Quote:Logs updated! - Jadedit!
If history is to become legend, it first must be recorded.
Tossing in Shadow Dragon Reborn for participation since I think we're all done there.

Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters: Syn Shenron, Yuuka Kazami, Clownpiece, Cirno
Word and Character Counts:

Syn: 2,858 words, 15,019 characters
Yuuka: 3,985 words, 22,022 characters
Clownpiece: 3,490 words, 20,091 characters
Cirno: 2,490 words, 13,112 characters
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Yuuka Kazami Wrote:Do you think Yuuka *aims* the Master Spark? No. She decides which half of the world she wants to fuck.
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Give me a moment to update all these logs and calculate some things, friends.
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New to the Omniverse? Don't be afraid to PM me for assistance!
Gamzee Makara Wrote:S’aight. After all, dogs have a tendency to motherfuckin’ bite.
(08-12-2017, 11:23 PM)Desman Black Wrote: Link to Thread: [M] Torn's Big Break
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters:
Desman Black
Ash
Jak Mar
Torn (jak NPC)
Daxter (jak NPC)
Krack (jak NPC)
Draikin (jak NPC)

Total character count including spaces: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 5,245
Jak Mar: 8,755
Ash:15,080

Total word count: (excluding BBCode, images, etcetera. Please do separately for each member if applicable)
Desman Black: 950
Jak Mar: 1,613
Ash:2,844

(According to Wordcounter.net)

Jak Mar: 98.37 OM
Ash: 150.75 OM
Desman Black: 52.47 OM

Logs are updated!

(08-18-2017, 04:31 AM)Yuuka Kazami Wrote: Tossing in Shadow Dragon Reborn for participation since I think we're all done there.

Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters: Syn Shenron, Yuuka Kazami, Clownpiece, Cirno
Word and Character Counts:

Syn: 2,858 words, 15,019 characters
Yuuka: 3,985 words, 22,022 characters
Clownpiece: 3,490 words, 20,091 characters
Cirno: 2,490 words, 13,112 characters

Syn Shenron: 150.18 OM
Yuuka Kazami: 220.29 OM
Clownpiece: 200.87 OM
Cirno: 131.17 OM

All logs up8'd!
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New to the Omniverse? Don't be afraid to PM me for assistance!
Gamzee Makara Wrote:S’aight. After all, dogs have a tendency to motherfuckin’ bite.
Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 26492 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 5017 (Through WordCounter)
(09-11-2017, 05:39 PM)Aquamarine Wrote: Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 26492 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 5017 (Through WordCounter)

Hey Aqua, sorry but I'm going to ask you to do some more in this one before asking for your OM reward.

The requires word count for this quest  is 5,000 to 10,000 depending on writing quality. While your quality is good, it would need to be exemplary (or with partners) for me to take 50% off of the maximum requirement. As it stands right now, I'd probably be willing to say it's good enough for 25% off the max (7,500), but I would shoot for adding more to this story then just hitting the minimum.

I hope you keep it going.
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(09-11-2017, 06:40 PM)Blink Wrote:
(09-11-2017, 05:39 PM)Aquamarine Wrote: Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 26492 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 5017 (Through WordCounter)

Hey Aqua, sorry but I'm going to ask you to do some more in this one before asking for your OM reward.

The requires word count for this quest  is 5,000 to 10,000 depending on writing quality. While your quality is good, it would need to be exemplary (or with partners) for me to take 50% off of the maximum requirement. As it stands right now, I'd probably be willing to say it's good enough for 25% off the max (7,500), but I would shoot for adding more to this story then just hitting the minimum.

I hope you keep it going.

I guess I'll try to add 2 more posts then, each of them 1000 words. And if I still need to add 500 more words after that for a total of 7500 Words I will mainly do a bit of a epilouge revealing a bit more info on the Machine Spirit AI chip on Aquamarine's arm.
Assuming the quality of writing is solid, I can only knock off 25% of the maximum word count (which would be 7500). Again, I'd like to stress the importance of writing a solid story instead of a minimum word count. If the quality isn't there then we'll require the maximum.
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