Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Jack Darby]

Turning this quest in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...2#pid96482

Is it long enough?

[Amaterasu]

Okay then! I am hereby turning in Cold is the Void, the Frozen Fields Void Quest.

As a note to the quest-grader: I recommend reading the entire thread to understand the bigger picture, and would be happy to provide background if it is needed. The above link links to the 4th post of the thread where the actual quest begins.
The word count is kept track of at the bottom of the post, I used MS Word and Google Docs. I hope not to have made any errors. If I did not, the total wordcount clocks in at 29.542, so... be sure to bring some time and a cup of tea if you want to read it in one sitting :frogpipe:

It should be noted that I did purposedly not mention Sapphirion and the Blue Dragonflight yet even though they are part of the Void Quest. In order to avoid writing myself into a corner that I will be stuck in if the quest is not deemed to be sufficient as-is, I will write about them in later posts. If the quest is approved as it is I will of course still include them to some amount! But if it is not, I will have something to write about - Amaterasu's, Oki's, Fiara's and Urist's final challenge to get to the Void Gate, so to speak.

[Jade Harley]

@Warren Zimmer:

The Sorcerer’s Apprentice
Location: Dalaran, Camelot
For those with magical potential, there are many avenues of progression in the wonderland known as Dalaran. If you prostrate yourself before the council as a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom, you may be lucky enough to be assigned a Master, one of the senior practitioners of Dalaran. The Master in question will depend on your particular gifts or personality. As an apprentice, your day-to-day life may involve intense, harsh schooling, running strange errands, or partaking in even more unusual training activities. If you can prove yourself able to adapt and learn, you will earn both the respect of the High Council and the attention of the Kingdom. As an official part of the Mages' Guild, you will also be able to take on your own apprentices and have a say in city affairs.

It was a good effort, but you have failed this quest. While your word count was above the minimum requirement, you did not follow the guidelines of the quest.

1. The location was supposed to be Dalaran, not a random temple in the woods.
2. Warren did not ask for knowledge because he was a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom.
3. He did not have a clearly defined Master who was a senior practicioner at Dalaran, and stabbing a sorceress through the chest (even if she was not actually slain) is never a good idea, especially if you're seeking to get on their good side.
4. You mentioned a Mages' Institute, but not the Mages' Guild. This is only a minor mistake, but it seems to suggest that you did not read the quest description carefully.

Thank you for your patience!

[Jack Darby]

Requesting that Arle get a writing bonus for her exceptional in my opinion posts in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7829 which are part of a storyline where Warren guides her to Dalaran. This is the first part of it.

[Jade Harley]

Requesting that Arle get a writing bonus for her exceptional in my opinion posts in: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7829 which are part of a storyline where Warren guides her to Dalaran. This is the first part of it.

You both qualify for a Participation Bonus! Yay!

Arle Nadja - 208.13 OM
Warren Zimmer - 117.67

I'll update your logs in a sec! Logs updated!

[The Vision]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6548

Submitting a Complicated Business for Group Bonus.

[Jack Darby]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...0#pid97780 Turning this in for a bonus for Arle.

[Jade Harley]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6548

Submitting a Complicated Business for Group Bonus.

Participation bonus granted!

Sans: 765.08
Captain America: 248.66
Marcus Wright: 154.46
Frisk: 116.89
The Vision: 233.43
Hellboy: N/A. Switched characters.

Log updates pending.

Done - Spur

[Tearen Wover]

My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.

[Jade Harley]

My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.

Quest "Escape from Chaos" completed! Marvelous work, thank you for such an awesome story. If you have any questions about where to go from here, please make a new Help Desk discussion thread.

On top of that, I'd like to nominate Tearen's Underverse thread for an Exceptional writing bonus!

[Arle Nadja]

Hello! I apologize if you're already aware of this, but I noticed that Warren snuck his post in just minutes before you finished writing one of your own and figured it might have gotten lost. I could certainly see myself losing a post because my brain assumes I've replied to anything above my last one. |D

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...0#pid97780

Regardless, I'd like to request a participation bonus for Warren and I in this thread?

[Beta Ray Bill]

I would like a participation bonus for me and Luci completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...2#pid98192

[Ezrihel]

Hello! I apologize if you're already aware of this, but I noticed that Warren snuck his post in just minutes before you finished writing one of your own and figured it might have gotten lost. I could certainly see myself losing a post because my brain assumes I've replied to anything above my last one. |D

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7840&pid=97780#pid97780

Regardless, I'd like to request a participation bonus for Warren and I in this thread?

Arle Nadja- 323 OM
Warren Zimmer- 282 OM

Donezo! -Amaterasu

I would like a participation bonus for me and Luci completing this thread please? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...2#pid98192

Doctor Doom- 127 OM
Luci- 263 OM

Updated! -Amaterasu

[Ezrihel]

My Underverse escape quest is ready for review.

Quest "Escape from Chaos" completed! Marvelous work, thank you for such an awesome story. If you have any questions about where to go from here, please make a new Help Desk discussion thread.

On top of that, I'd like to nominate Tearen's Underverse thread for an Exceptional writing bonus!

Gonna go ahead and calculate this for Jade:

Tearen Wover- 2628 OM (Exemplary)

(This was a wonderful read, Phh! Great job on it. I know it took a while, but it must have been a daunting goal to achieve!)

EDIT: Done! -Amaterasu.

[Beta Ray Bill]

I would like a participation bonus for me and Koal completing this thread please?  http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7752

[The Vision]

Group bonus for Dawn of Justice plox? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7925

[Ezrihel]

I would like a participation bonus for me and Koal completing this thread please?  http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7752

Doctor Doom- 424 OM
Koal- 118 OM

Group bonus for Dawn of Justice plox? http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7925

Harry Potter- 90 OM
The Vision- 118 OM
Captain America- 52 OM

All bonuses in this post added, logs updated! - Jadedit

[Dawnika Snow]

Link to topic - Amnesia
Quest, or Personal Storyline?
Participating characters: Dawnika Snow and Ballad
Total character count: Dawn - 17399, Ballad - 23964
Total word count: Dawn - 3132, Ballad - 4341

[Ezrihel]

Link to topic - Amnesia
Quest, or Personal Storyline?
Participating characters: Dawnika Snow and Ballad
Total character count: Dawn - 17399, Ballad - 23964
Total word count: Dawn - 3132, Ballad - 4341

Did you use wordcounter.net and make sure to take the formatting out? Because I'm getting ever so slightly different totals. 17,378(3,130 words) for Dawn and 23,840(4,340 words) for Ballad.

Dawnika Snow- 174 OM
Ballad- 239 OM

Logs updated! - Jadedit.

[Dawnika Snow]

Link to topic: A Rough Return to the Waking World
Total character count including spaces: 34,650
Total word count: 5760
FOR PERSONAL STORYLINES: Great
Comment: Kelly is killin' it as always. Such intricate prose is nigh impossible to match. It's amazing that he can take 5000 words, slam them together and make it all about waking up. Every word is b-e-autifully designed. I also loved how much he built up his scenerio into Dark Data. Having built that up makes me wanna read his Dark Data stuff if I can find the time. You're doing awesome yo, but I'm still goin' for Ghidorah's neck boi.