Official Move Approval IV

[Harry Potter]

Shield Charm (600) Requirements- Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize

Harry's primary means of active defense. Harry knows this spell so well that he uses it non-verbally and almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it, though he must be holding his wand. Harry creates an invisible shield of magical force about two feet in diameter directly in front of the wand. This shield is roughly the shape of a half sphere. This invisible shield stops or slows any force from its front side. He can maintain this shield for 1 second at a time, and can use it an unlimited number of times per day. This spell is not very draining, but becomes more draining if Harry casts it many times in a short period, or if protecting against strong attacks. This shield might not be strong enough to deflect all attacks. Harry's DEF is 3; this spell negates up to 3 points of attack. So, a character with 4 attack who shoots a gun at the shield would do damage to Harry as though they had 1 ATK.

This shield is stationary once cast.

The alternative use of this spell is to cast it on any space or person within thirty feet of Harry, and shield that person or space instead.

Harry can only have one shield charm active at a time.

Ok, trying again, changed ares are bolded.

[Tearen Wover]

(I know Waltzing Enigma was approved, I just prefer to keep both in the same post for logging purposes.)

The Waltzing Enigma

Tier 1 Assist - 1000 OM

Tearen takes three seconds to imbue his halberd with telekinetic force and a rudimentary intelligence, allowing to move and attack on its own. Enigma floats through the air and responds to mental commands from Tearen, so using this technique puts a strain on his physical and mental endurance. Though Enigma does can move freely while animated, it is not particularly graceful, so its attacks tend to be clumsy and heavy. Still, Tearen can make great use of Enigma by flanking his opponents and keeping them on guard against two physical attackers.

ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 0



Reciprocating Maelstrom (Requires Physical Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency, Homing Proficiency, Telekinesis, Burst Movement) - 600 OM

Tearen takes a moment to hastily distance himself from his opponent before spinning around once, flinging Enigma at the enemy. The Halberd moves at about the same speed as a fast sprinter, and spins at high speed as it closes in. Though the force behind it is not great, the speed of the cyclical strikes is often enough to harry even the most skilled of defenders. After striking the opponent five times (even if the attacks are blocked), Enigma stops its rotation and flies back to Tearen’s hands.

Tearen can move while the halberd is airborne, and can fling the weapon in such a way that its rotation is either vertical or horizontal. Enigma can only travel to the limit of Tearen's telekinetic range. Though he is able to move, he must concentrate on the move and cannot use his telekinesis for any other purpose during this attack, though overall this move is not terribly draining. If he stops concentrating, Enigma automatically returns to him, regardless of what stage of the attack it is in. The primary purpose is to distract and intimidate.

[Desman Black]

Elemental Cutlass (Requires Physical Strength Proficiency)-300 OM
A Cutless made of the same energy as Des' shots, thus also allowing it to change color depending on the dominant element (which again, is just fodder); becurse of the fact that the energy doesn't need to be condensed in this form, the sword is only semi-opaque. The form is based primarily off of a 19th century french naval cutlass but it does have a few changes, like how the blade is two and half to three inches at the widesy point, and 11 at it's longest. Needs 0.5 second of concentration to summon but doesn't need any concentration to maintain once summoned. Despite it's unusual material, it's feels much like a regular sword to hold and be hit by.

[Jacket]

Tier 1 Power Up: (1000)
Aubrey Mask

ATK: +1
DEF: +2
SPD: N/A
TEC: +2

[Jack Darby]

Bo-Staff (300, Physical Strength.) 

A Bo Staff that is made out of a black metal. This bo-staff has gray and purple trim to it.  This bo-staff is simply good for melee combat, and doesn't require much exertion or concentration to summon or use. It's not very taxing, equivalent to a very light work out when it is summoned. This staff can clash with energy weapons or enchanted weapons without breaking. 

Lightning Blast (300, Ranged Proficiency) 

One of the capabilities Warren recreated for himself. This possesses electricity akin to a Tazer, but it is more of an electrical energy blast. It travels as fast as an arrow, has a range of 50 feet and does a mild amount of damage. This is mildly taxing on his energy reserves, and doesn't take much time to charge, having a 3 second charge time. it isn't very damaging, but it is very accurate. This requires both hands, and shoots out of the right wrist of his suit, or out of the palm of his hand if he is not wearing his suit. 

Fire Blast (300, Ranged Prof.): 

This requires both hands, and shoots out of the right wrist of his suit, or out of the palm of his hand if he is not wearing his suit. A cousin to the Lightning blast, this has a range of 50 feet. It travels at the speed of an arrow, and has a three second charge time. It isn't very damaging, only doing mild damage. But it is very accurate. This is mildly taxing on his energy reserves, the equivalent of a light work out. 

Super Bowl Ring (Ranged Proficiency, 300):   

A super bowl ring is a weapon of immense power from Warren's homeworld. This can shoot purple thin wire like beams out of energy from it. The blasts do moderate damage. They aren't very taxing, and are about as draining as a light workout. The Super Bowl Ring is worn by him on his right index finger. This can be used as a covert weapon by Warren. The beams travel at the speed of an arrow, and have a range of thirty five feet. The beams lack the power to do any serious harm, being limited to only moderate damage. This can do a shot every seven seconds.  

NFL-R: (Flavor Item):  

The NFL-R is the source of Warren's abilities when he is in the Omniverse. It allows him to summon his suit of armor onto him, or take it off. It can also fire the Fire Blast and Lightning Blast out of it, as well as any other beam moves he gets besides Chaos Burst. The NFL-R appears to be a gray, purple and black watch on his right hand when he's not transformed. 

[Omni]

Shield Charm (600) Requirements- Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize

Harry's primary means of active defense. Harry knows this spell so well that he uses it non-verbally and almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it, though he must be holding his wand. Harry creates an invisible shield of magical force about two feet in diameter directly in front of the wand. This shield is roughly the shape of a half sphere. This invisible shield stops or slows any force from its front side. He can maintain this shield for 1 second at a time, and can use it an unlimited number of times per day. This spell is not very draining, but becomes more draining if Harry casts it many times in a short period, or if protecting against strong attacks. This shield might not be strong enough to deflect all attacks. Harry's DEF is 3; this spell negates up to 3 points of attack. So, a character with 4 attack who shoots a gun at the shield would do damage to Harry as though they had 1 ATK.

This shield is stationary once cast.

The alternative use of this spell is to cast it on any space or person within thirty feet of Harry, and shield that person or space instead.

Harry can only have one shield charm active at a time.

Ok, trying again, changed ares are bolded.

Approved.

[Omni]

(I know Waltzing Enigma was approved, I just prefer to keep both in the same post for logging purposes.)

The Waltzing Enigma

Tier 1 Assist - 1000 OM

Tearen takes three seconds to imbue his halberd with telekinetic force and a rudimentary intelligence, allowing to move and attack on its own. Enigma floats through the air and responds to mental commands from Tearen, so using this technique puts a strain on his physical and mental endurance. Though Enigma does can move freely while animated, it is not particularly graceful, so its attacks tend to be clumsy and heavy. Still, Tearen can make great use of Enigma by flanking his opponents and keeping them on guard against two physical attackers.

ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 0



Reciprocating Maelstrom (Requires Physical Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency, Homing Proficiency, Telekinesis, Burst Movement) - 600 OM

Tearen takes a moment to hastily distance himself from his opponent before spinning around once, flinging Enigma at the enemy. The Halberd moves at about the same speed as a fast sprinter, and spins at high speed as it closes in. Though the force behind it is not great, the speed of the cyclical strikes is often enough to harry even the most skilled of defenders. After striking the opponent five times (even if the attacks are blocked), Enigma stops its rotation and flies back to Tearen’s hands.

Tearen can move while the halberd is airborne, and can fling the weapon in such a way that its rotation is either vertical or horizontal. Enigma can only travel to the limit of Tearen's telekinetic range. Though he is able to move, he must concentrate on the move and cannot use his telekinesis for any other purpose during this attack, though overall this move is not terribly draining. If he stops concentrating, Enigma automatically returns to him, regardless of what stage of the attack it is in. The primary purpose is to distract and intimidate.

Seems like this would only cost 300 to me. If the 600 is because of the vertical/horizontal-ness, I still don't think it needs 600. Otherwise you're good.

[Omni]

Elemental Cutlass (Requires Physical Strength Proficiency)-300 OM
A Cutless made of the same energy as Des' shots, thus also allowing it to change color depending on the dominant element (which again, is just fodder); becurse of the fact that the energy doesn't need to be condensed in this form, the sword is only semi-opaque. The form is based primarily off of a 19th century french naval cutlass but it does have a few changes, like how the blade is two and half to three inches at the widest point, and 11 at it's longest. Needs 0.5 second of concentration to summon but doesn't need any concentration to maintain once summoned. Despite it's unusual material, it's feels much like a regular sword to hold and be hit by.

Fixed a typo and approved.

[Omni]

Tier 1 Power Up: (1000)
Aubrey Mask

ATK: +1
DEF: +2
SPD: N/A
TEC: +2

You're good.

[Omni]

Bo-Staff (300, Physical Strength.)

A Bo Staff that is made out of a black metal. This bo-staff has gray and purple trim to it.  This bo-staff is simply good for melee combat, and doesn't require much exertion or concentration to summon or use. It's not very taxing, equivalent to a very light work out when it is summoned. This staff can clash with energy weapons or enchanted weapons without breaking.

Lightning Blast (300, Ranged Proficiency)

One of the capabilities Warren recreated for himself. This possesses electricity akin to a Tazer, but it is more of an electrical energy blast. It travels as fast as an arrow, has a range of 50 feet and does a mild amount of damage. This is mildly taxing on his energy reserves, and doesn't take much time to charge, having a 3 second charge time. it isn't very damaging, but it is very accurate. This requires both hands, and shoots out of the right wrist of his suit, or out of the palm of his hand if he is not wearing his suit.

Fire Blast (300, Ranged Prof.):

This requires both hands, and shoots out of the right wrist of his suit, or out of the palm of his hand if he is not wearing his suit. A cousin to the Lightning blast, this has a range of 50 feet. It travels at the speed of an arrow, and has a three second charge time. It isn't very damaging, only doing mild damage. But it is very accurate. This is mildly taxing on his energy reserves, the equivalent of a light work out.

Super Bowl Ring (Ranged Proficiency, 300):  

A super bowl ring is a weapon of immense power from Warren's homeworld. This can shoot purple thin wire like beams out of energy from it. The blasts do moderate damage. They aren't very taxing, and are about as draining as a light workout. The Super Bowl Ring is worn by him on his right index finger. This can be used as a covert weapon by Warren. The beams travel at the speed of an arrow, and have a range of thirty five feet. The beams lack the power to do any serious harm, being limited to only moderate damage.

How fast can he fire shots?

NFL-R: (Flavor Item):  

The NFL-R is the source of Warren's abilities when he is in the Omniverse. It allows him to summon his suit of armor onto him, or take it off. It can also fire the Fire Blast and Lightning Blast out of it, as well as any other beam moves he gets besides Chaos Burst. The NFL-R appears to be a gray, purple and black watch on his right hand when he's not transformed.

[Jack Darby]

What is the max speed you would allow on the shots, Omni? I am trying to give him some moves that are fairly versatile but powerful.

[Omni]

Uh ... somewhere around 1-2 seconds per shot sounds reasonable for that move. It really depends on how powerful you want it to be. Higher rate of fire = lower damage per shot.

[Jack Darby]

The original move has been edited.  Also Omni, mind if I add the word App to Lightning Blast and Fire Blast in my roster? 

Sword of Conquest (300, Physical Strength): 


The sword of conquest is a sword that is a twin to the sword Excalibur. It has gray, purple and black trim.  This sword can clash with light-sabers, and enchanted weapons. The sword is very durable, and a powerful weapon in it's own right in that it can do medium damage. This sword takes about six seconds for him to summon it to his hand.

[Jim Raynor]

I'd like to change my Super Attack if possible. It will still do the same thing, but the way it's performed is different.

Move in question:
Fel Beam (Tier 1 Super Attack) (requires Ranged, Area Attack)- Illidan rapidly funnels fel magic into his body, forcing his eyes and tattoos to shine. Green vapour trails from his hands, and after four seconds, he throws both hands forward, palms facing each other, fingers curled. A bright green beam of concentrated magic issues forth, travelling at the speed of an arrow. The beam is six feet in diameter. On impact, a small explosion occurs. 

New move:
Eye Beam (Tier 1 Super Attack) (requires Ranged) - Illidan rapidly funnels fel magic into his body, forcing his eyes and tattoos to shine. After four seconds, he leans his head towards his target and fires two bright green beams of fel from his eyes. The beams are as wide as Illidan's eyes but travelling as a pair means their effective width is the distance from one end of one eye to the other (around seven or eight inches). The beams travel at the speed of an arrow. On impact, a small explosion occurs.

[Omni]

The original move has been edited.  Also Omni, mind if I add the word App to Lightning Blast and Fire Blast in my roster? 

Just a quick clarification, does that mean the first shot takes 7 seconds to charge up, or the first shot is instantaneous but takes 7 seconds to fire another?

No problem on that second thing.

Sword of Conquest (300, Physical Strength): 


The sword of conquest is a sword that is a twin to the sword Excalibur. It has gray, purple and black trim.  This sword can clash with light-sabers, and enchanted weapons. The sword is very durable, and a powerful weapon in it's own right in that it can do medium damage. This sword takes about six seconds for him to summon it to his hand.

Sure. I'm going to say that the summoning time is fairly negligible to the move's power here, since it can then be kept out for an unlimited time so, if you want to resubmit that with a quicker summon I don't mind (or if you want to keep it a more-powerful-than-average melee weapon you could add more downsides).

[Omni]

I'd like to change my Super Attack if possible. It will still do the same thing, but the way it's performed is different.

Move in question:
Fel Beam (Tier 1 Super Attack) (requires Ranged, Area Attack)- Illidan rapidly funnels fel magic into his body, forcing his eyes and tattoos to shine. Green vapour trails from his hands, and after four seconds, he throws both hands forward, palms facing each other, fingers curled. A bright green beam of concentrated magic issues forth, travelling at the speed of an arrow. The beam is six feet in diameter. On impact, a small explosion occurs. 

New move:
Eye Beam (Tier 1 Super Attack) (requires Ranged) - Illidan rapidly funnels fel magic into his body, forcing his eyes and tattoos to shine. After four seconds, he leans his head towards his target and fires two bright green beams of fel from his eyes. The beams are as wide as Illidan's eyes but travelling as a pair means their effective width is the distance from one end of one eye to the other (around seven or eight inches). The beams travel at the speed of an arrow. On impact, a small explosion occurs.

Sounds fine to me. Approved!

[Jack Darby]

It means each of the shots takes seven seconds, Omni. As to the Sword of Conquest, what would you recommend downside wise?

[Omni]

If you could add that to the description, then approved!

Flavor-wise ... a dark sword could start to hurt him more the longer he has it out, and/or be more difficult to de-summon. Lemme have a swing at it.

The sword of conquest is a sword that is a twin to the sword Excalibur. It has gray, purple and black trim.  This sword can clash with light-sabers, and enchanted weapons. The sword is very durable, and more powerful even than its twin. This sword takes about six seconds for him to summon it to his hand, visible by a coalescing of purple flame into a black shape that fades to reveal the sword. The longer its held, the more powerful it becomes (1.1x after the first minute, 1.2x after the second minute, etc, up to 2x), but at a cost to the holder. It drains the user's life force, at the same time cementing its hold on this world. De-summoning the sword takes six seconds, but this increases by one for every minute it gets to exist in this plane.

[Jack Darby]

I like your version of the Sword of Conquest. We'll go with that if you're okay with it.

A super bowl ring is a weapon of immense power from Warren's homeworld. This can shoot purple thin wire like beams out of energy from it. The blasts do moderate damage. They aren't very taxing, and are about as draining as a light workout. The Super Bowl Ring is worn by him on his right index finger. This can be used as a covert weapon by Warren. The beams travel at the speed of an arrow, and have a range of thirty five feet. The beams lack the power to do any serious harm, being limited to only moderate damage. Each of the shots takes about seven seconds to perform.

[Omni]

Both approved at 300 then.