02-27-2017, 10:57 AM
Do you have something you'd like feedback on? Leave it here and I'll do just that. I'll be prioritizing completed storylines or single posts since I can give a more complete opinion of something if it's 'finished', but if you REALLY want something else reviewed I'll eventually get to it. Just keep in mind that I'll be doing these in my downtime so don't expect next-day service and if your work is like 50k words it might take a bit longer to get through.
Drop a link here along with anything you think might be helpful to the process. Is there anything (story, characters, etc.) you'd specifically like me to focus on? Let me know.
Just to be up-front, I'm going to try to be pretty honest with my opinions here so please keep in mind that I'm not trying to bruise any egos. I'm not going to be intentionally brutal but I am going to be honest. That said, if you'd like a bit of a gentler approach please say so. I don't want to offend anyone.
Drop a link here along with anything you think might be helpful to the process. Is there anything (story, characters, etc.) you'd specifically like me to focus on? Let me know.
Just to be up-front, I'm going to try to be pretty honest with my opinions here so please keep in mind that I'm not trying to bruise any egos. I'm not going to be intentionally brutal but I am going to be honest. That said, if you'd like a bit of a gentler approach please say so. I don't want to offend anyone.
Daniel Wrote:gonna milk the shit out of those milkies
Gildarts Wrote:Sorry if you got diabetes from this, and sorry again if you were offended by that comment because you do have diabetes.
Alex Wrote:clowns don't have marriage rights
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