Darkshire - The Breach OOC fight thread

[Gamzee Makara]

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Calling. What have I done?

[Dave Strider]

[Sarah Kerrigan]

I would just like to mention that i didnt intend for my super to really affect Strazio, Hiro, and Kerrigan. I assumed they were further away than Dave and I. But I mean If anyone would like to write my attack touching your guys fight no harm done or anything. I just had no idea you guys were that close

I also assumed so. Kerrigan, Hiro, and Strazio's fight's getting pretty mobile.


Posted, by the way, guys.

[Strazio Rockwell]

Calling and posting.
Using Avatar of Anger (Tier 1 Powered-up form) for this round so -2 SP for me.
Also using my Overcharge move which I can only activate again if I choose to take 2 points of self-inflicted damge.

[Sarah Kerrigan]

That would make it so that everyone has posted, then. Just one more round left.

[Ezrihel]

Strazio's post is the beginning of round three. As in, his post is the first post of round three. (Sorry Straz, you missed the deadline.) So you guys can go ahead and start posting on round three. The end of Round three will be February 19th at 1PM EST.

[Strazio Rockwell]

Wouldn't I just get a score penalty for being late rather than forfeiting an entire round?

[Sarah Kerrigan]

Well, on that note, will we get a scorecard/notes for round 2?

[Hiro Protagonist]

Yeah I'm still waiting on that to see what I need to improve on in my final post.

[Ezrihel]

Round Two Results

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Sarah, you're doing better than before, and I know Sarah (IC) isn't really ever super stressed feeling, or feeling like she might lose, but I liked the little bit of a desperation "front" she put on when she felt trapped. You did have a few of those strange formatting issues again though. If you're typing your post up in google docs and pasting it over, be sure to properly space on the site, because Docs will skip you down a line when the page breaks, but that formatting doesn't carry over to OV. Make sure you preview your post before posting as well.

For everyone: you should try to improve your scale. Make it feel like their is a huge noisy battle going on around you. I want to be reminded of the swords and guns and clubs being thrown around around you. I want to know how chaotic and jumbled everything is. I want to see secondaries get in the way and get rekt by your primes. I need to be convinced that this is a nitty gritty dirty battle field. I want to know that your characters are fighting for their homes, their lives, everything they stand for and hold dear (or hate and want to destroy for whatever reason). I should be convinced that this is important to each and every one of your characters. This is the biggest point thus far.
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[Sarah Kerrigan]

Sarah, you're doing better than before, and I know Sarah (IC) isn't really ever super stressed feeling, or feeling like she might lose, but I liked the little bit of a desperation "front" she put on when she felt trapped. You did have a few of those strange formatting issues again though. If you're typing your post up in google docs and pasting it over, be sure to properly space on the site, because Docs will skip you down a line when the page breaks, but that formatting doesn't carry over to OV. Make sure you preview your post before posting as well.

I did not know about this! thank you for informing me, as I do type up in Goodocs!

[Hiro Protagonist]

Well, it's the day before the deadline and I am absolutely slammed until tomorrow afternoon, so I am pre-emptively requesting an extension so we don't lose a post to lateness again.

[Dave Strider]

Yeah, seconding that. Seems most of us are mostly just available on weekends xD

[Gamzee Makara]

calling

[Ezrihel]

I'm granting a three day extension as per request. Round three deadline is now February 22nd, at 1PM EST.

[Sarah Kerrigan]

calling.

[Sarah Kerrigan]

Posted (actually posted a fair while ago, but my message here didn't send).
Dave and Hiro should be the only 2 left? I think?

[Kopaka]

Distribute appropriately

[Sarah Kerrigan]

you have my gratitude, these look amazing!

[Harlan Higgs]

Calling