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Joining (Second Character)
#1
Character name:Harry Potter

Character source: The Harry Potter Franchise and related sources

Character history:

Harry James Potter, sometimes called The Boy Who Lived, is a near-messianic figure to a secret society of magic users. He is famous among the wizarding community for twice killing the Dark Wizard known as Voldemort, and, some say, for saving all of magical Britain. When Harry first killed Voldemort, he was a one-year-old infant. Although Voldemort killed Harry's parents that night, Voldemort's curse on Harry rebounded and killed Voldemort instead. Sixteen years later, Harry Potter dueled and killed Voldemort at the Battle of Hogwarts. He is a graduate of Gryffindor House at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, he was the Seeker and Captain of the Gryffindor Quidditch team, the 125th Champion of the Tri-Wizard Tournament, and leader of the resistance group Dumbledore's Army. He vanished at some point in the year 2000, two years after the final defeat of Voldemort, and neither the public nor his close friends and family members know where he is now. But these are all things you can learn from the back of a chocolate frog card.

Harry James Potter is a deeply troubled young man who, due to his bravery and compassion, has already overcome adversities most people will never have to experience in their lifetime. At the time of his abduction into the Omniverse, at age twenty, Harry Potter has already reached a satisfying catharsis to his ongoing battle with Lord Voldemort, and is starting to build the family he never had with his high-school sweetheart Ginny Weasly. Harry Potter is not the shy orphan he was when he walked into Hogwarts at age ten, or the fiery rebel he was when he defied the Ministry of Magic at age fifteen, or even the relentless crusader of righteousness he was when he fulfilled his destiny and defeated Lord Voldemort for good at age seventeen. THIS Harry James Potter is a little more mature, a little less adventurous, and a little more confident in who he is.

Physical Description:

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Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency (1000) Remote Control Proficiency (600) Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600)

Starting Powers: Basic Telekinesis (400), Stealth (1200)

Starting Moves: Stunning Spell (300), Sectumsempra (300), Incendio Oppungo (300)

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Stunning Spell (300) Requires Ranged Proficiency- This spell requires that Harry aim his wand and perform the incantation 'Stupefy', a process which takes three seconds, after which a bullet-sized projectile of red light shoots from the tip of his wand towards where he aims. It moves at about the speed of an arrow. If the projectile hits its intended target, the target is hit with a kind of magical blunt-force-trauma that doesn't leave any recognizable marks. This spell can be cast three times in a ten second period. It has a range of about 100 feet.



Sectumsempra (300) Requires Ranged Proficiency- This spell requires that Harry aim his wand and perform the incantation 'Sectumsempra', a process which takes four seconds, after which a sword-sized projectile of silver light shoots from the tip of his wand towards where he aims. It moves at about the speed of an arrow. If the projectile hits its intended target, the target is gouged with deep wounds. This spell can be cast twice in a ten second period. It has a range of about 60 feet.





Incendio Oppungo (300) Requires Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency- This spell requires that Harry aim his wand and perform the incantation 'Incendio Oppungo', a process which takes six seconds, after which a ball of fire in the shape of a lions head manifests and charges a target. It moves at the speed of a lion. Harry must concentrate on the lion, fueling it and directing it's movements with his wand. If he is damaged or otherwise distracted the spell fails. The lion may attack four times before Harry cannot fuel it any longer. Harry can only cast this spell once per day, as it is very draining.





Summoning Charm (0)- An adaption of Harry's Basic Telekinesis that provides no benefit in combat. Harry names an object, for example a broom, along with the incantation Accio, and an object flies directly into Harry's hand.

Lumos (0)- Creates a small light at the end of Harry's wand.

Opening Charm (0)- A spell that allows Harry to open mundane locks.
#2
Stupefy - You NEED the Debuff proficiency

The Lethality effect on all of your moves is a no go, remove them, or write them appropriately and make your moves variable.

Summoning Charm - Unless you purchase moves, you won't be able to summon anything that could help Harry in battle (Weapons etc.).

Shield Charm - I'm not really sure what you're doing with this, if you want this to be a shield move, you need to purchase it as one.
#3
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#4
Okay, concerns addressed I believe?

Removed Lethality, edited Stupefy so hopefully Debuff proficiency isn't necessary, and removed shield charms for the moment until I think about it a little more.
#5
Name: Harry Potter
Spent OM: 4700
Proficiencies (2200); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize (600), Remote Control (600)
Powers (1600/8000); Telekinesis – Basic (400), Stealth (1200)
Moves (900); Stunning Spell (300), Sectumsempra (300), Incendio Oppungo (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts: None
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 3


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