Dawnika vs Koal(OOC thread and rules)

[Dawnika Snow]

Simple Rules:

Word Count: 1000/post
Post time: 72 hours from last post
Rounds: 2
SP: On
Damage Meter: On

Judge: Markashi, Fool, Ya Fool!

First post is to Me, courtesy of RNG. Once I post, I will put a link to the fight thread in this thread's original post. If the rules are fair to Koal, I will start my first round post.

[Koal]

Good to go! Good luck!

[Dawnika Snow]

Luck be a Lady to us both.

[Koal]

I've had a development in my personal life that has left me in a.... let's say less than desireable state of mind. I'm probably going to be scare for the next day or two, and I apologize if that hurts the thread.

[Dawnika Snow]

Id be fine with allowing an extension for his post if he happens to miss it.

[Mark]

A little mid-fight update at Dawn's request:

Damage
Dawn: Torn up ankle (Moderate Injury), other accumulated damage from various slashes. 14/20 HP remaining.
Koal: Fractured cheek bone (Serious Injury), other accumulated damage from bulletz. 12/20 HP remaining.

Doing well folks, keep at it. As for waiting a few days, I don't have a problem if Dawn doesn't. Regarding the rules though, the ones here are different than the ones agreed on in the main thread. Renji had set the time per round to be a week, unless I missed something. If I'm understanding things correctly that'll give Koal plenty of time and if it ends up being 2 days/12 days instead of 7 days/7 days, I'm fine with that since you guys got your firsts posts up so quickly.

[Dawnika Snow]

Round 2 end. Awaiting final judgement.

[Mark]

I should likely have a ruling up in <12 hours unless something comes up. Hang tight guyz.

[Mark]

Alrighty, here's the final verdict. Very close fight guys, and I really really appreciate the effort you both put in. It was very entertaining and I enjoyed it thoroughly. The rubric I used below is based on Sinestro's score sheet, so please give that a look over before you get disheartened by the numbers. Just as a TL;DR, I consider 0 to be literally unreadable  (not listed on Thaal's sheet, but that's a personal preference for me) and 5 to be the best possible thing. 2 is site average.

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Round 1
Dawn
Description and Clarity: 2
Voice: 2
Characterization: 2.5
Story: 2
Technical: 2

Koal
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 2
Characterization: 2
Story: 2.5
Technical: 1.5

Round 2
Dawn
Description and Clarity:  2
Voice: 2
Characterization: 2
Story: 2.5
Technical: 2

Koal
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 2.5
Characterization: 2.5
Story: 2
Technical: 1.5

SP/Artefacts Used: None. (+0 points to both sides)

HP Totals
Dawn: 9/20
Koal: 10/20

Dawn Score Total: 21
Koal Score Total: 22.5


Koal is the victor. You may choose to kill or banish your foe.
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[Koal]

Is there a way that I can spare my opponent? Maybe incapacitate them for a period of time?

[Amber Veritz]

I wish to make a short post before Koal. Then he can decide to kill or spare me.

[Mark]

I'm cool with you guys posting any amount of words you need to conclude this.

Also yes, Koal, you can choose to spare her. She'd just be unable to fight in the final brawl.

[Koal]

thank you very much, sir!

(And I'm fine with Dawn posting before me.)