Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Rave]

So, maybe this is a bit odd but yeah. Bear with me?

When I first joined here I did the Hand of the Empire Faction quest. I completed it but was told to add in more to make it passable. So I did...when I returned yesterday, after over a year of being gone. <_<;;

~LINK~

That's the link to the original grading of the whole thing. At the end is where I was told to mix it up a bit. I hope I did everything right this time, but if there are any worries or problems of course let me know.

[Jade Harley]

Looking for participation bonus for Dawn, Claptrap, Gaige, and myself

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6705

Thank ye kindly.

Bonus granted, congratulations!

Dawn: 174.46 OM

Claptrap: 57.44 OM

Gaige: 114.47 OM

Renji: 204.66 OM

Logs updated!

After a while of procrastination, got a finished thread here.

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...3#pid82203

Actual part where there is participation starts there.

The Future Warrior: 76.83

Nezha: 106.06 OM

Logs updated!

When I first joined here I did the Hand of the Empire Faction quest. I completed it but was told to add in more to make it passable. So I did...when I returned yesterday, after over a year of being gone. <_<;;

~LINK~

Oh my gosh, excellent work! Quest complete! Your reward: +300 OM and increased Influence with the Empire! I'll update your log in a mo'! Log updated!

[Hiro Protagonist]

I'm not sure how to go about this since this is the first time I've done it. Could a staff member evaluate my pursuit thread and determine if I have the right to a challenge?

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...3#pid86843

[Jade Harley]

I'm not sure how to go about this since this is the first time I've done it. Could a staff member evaluate my pursuit thread and determine if I have the right to a challenge?

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...3#pid86843

Permission to challenge granted. I can be the staff member who judges and presides over this fight if need be. Remember to be courteous to your opponent and please attempt to remain in contact to avoid any misunderstandings.

 [spoiler]Once you have the right to a challenge, you must send a PM both to all intended targets and to a staff member stating your challenge, including the name of all intended targets or the base in question. You should also create a new OOC topic for the fight in Omniverse Discussion with the same information. Those involved then have 1 week to respond to the challenge OOC. Those challenged may request to delay the fight for another time or agree to start. However, once the challenge is made neither player may post IC or change locations until either both players have agreed to fight, or until both players have agreed to delay the fight for another time. If the defending player/s does not come online or respond within 1 week, they will forfeit any artefacts they are currently holding, or which are contained within their base. In the case of a non-fight, the attacking player may stage a short "artefact steal" event where they manage to steal the artefact without a real fight - given the non-participative nature of the defender, this should be done with respect towards their character and you should PM a staff member when this post has been made so that they can check there are no liberties taken. 

A player who really does not wish to fight may appeal to staff, especially if they have been targeted by the same player more than once, but it is highly discouraged as a break of IC. Players with a bounty cannot turn down a fight unless they have a legitimate reason, such as having real-life commitments (in which case they should post in the Going Away thread or go into their 'Edit Profile' page and mark themselves as 'Away' with a date of their return.

Once the challenge has been acknowledged, players agree on when to start the fight. A player has up to eight OOC days from the initial challenge in order to prepare themselves for the fight, but it may not be delayed any longer unless agreed upon by both players. From the time the challenge is issued, no involved players may purchase items, powers, or anything else, nor move verses, unless ruled otherwise by the judge. Players may wish to post before the fight begins, setting up the fight in-character, but these posts will not count towards the fight itself. [/spoiler]

[Amber Veritz]

Chaotic Despairity is now finished and ready for the approves(if I pass). I'll take the Red Chaos Emerald kindly.

[The Future Warrior]

My crack at Hand of the Empire is at the point where it's in need of grading and approval to finish.

[Amaterasu]

Chaotic Despairity is now finished and ready for the approves(if I pass). I'll take the Red Chaos Emerald kindly.

With the added wordcount that was discussed through private messages, this quest is good to go! Congratulations :yay:
Your reward is a Chaos Emerald (Red). Your log will be updated shortly.

Done did got it. Log updated!

[Amaterasu]

My crack at Hand of the Empire is at the point where it's in need of grading and approval to finish.

Yup, that's approved for completion! Very nice, rather fluid read with a bunch of interesting characters!

Your rewards are 300 OM, and increased influence with the Empire. I'll get someone to update your log with those, asap.

Updated, yo

[Amaterasu]

Turning in yet another quest for approval!

Into the Hall, in the Frozen Fields.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...5#pid72905
Please and thank you!

[Jade Harley]

Turning in yet another quest for approval!

Into the Hall, in the Frozen Fields.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...5#pid72905
Please and thank you!

Quest completed, great work! Your reward is: 300 OM, Ceremonial Dwarven Weapon or armament (Flavor Item, may be fashioned as a Move), Permission to enter Mithral Hall. I'll update your log in a sec!

[Corporal Light]

Request Participation Bonuses for all involved in this thread: A Cold Cold Path

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6086

[Mark]

Request Participation Bonuses for all involved in this thread: A Cold Cold Path

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6086

Scarecrow: 159
Ascension: 127
Chara: 54
Ballad: 496
Koal: 79
Renji: 73
Dawn: 39
Claptrap: 28

Logs updated.

In a bid to redeem myself, I'd also like to nominate The Dead and the Damned + The Undead Duo for a great bonus, as they belong in the same arc.

Ruby Rose: Ineligible due to not meeting word minimum.
Raal Deathwind: Ineligible due to character switch.
Sans: 208

Log updated. I’ll drop a coin in your ‘Judge’ jar, sir. Your opinion is appreciated.

I'm not sure if I need to put the word counts and calculate the bonus since I'm not a judge yet, but I figured why not. Apologies if I shouldn't, but I figured it'd be nice to help the staff out a little in that matter. You'll have to forgive my little comments on each of them, I couldn't help myself in it.

If anyone's interested, I'll offer up Rolling in the 'Deep for Vincent and To Fell the Fel for Kakashi.

So, after sitting down and having a reading binge, I read both of Mark's threads. I'd like to nominate both of them for bonuses actually.

Great Bonus: To Fell the Fel, This was a nice read, however I wasn't completely mind blown by it, that being said, it was very well written. Speaking for the technical points, you nail them all wonderfully, and I very much love how you displayed characterization of the secondaries, though I do think you could have shown much more of their personalities off. The thread has a lot of action, and you describe it pretty well. All in all, I had fun with it!

7,165 words total, +207.68OM for Great Bonus

Exemplary Bonus: Rolling in the 'Deep, whether it's my love for subterfuge or suspenseful sneaking, this thread was a goddamn blast to read. I just found myself getting into this thread much more than the first one. The suspense was believable, there was just enough action to keep me engaged. The threat to Vincent felt tangible here, and I enjoyed that a lot. Also, just to say, how you show the Commander's reactions just makes the entire situation more "real", in a sense that it shows the consequences of everything (Plus the Commander's annoyance was amusing).

10,584 words total, +610.35OM for Exemplary Bonus

:pink: I appreciate the effort and kind words, friend. I’ll leave this here for the next person as it’s sorta a conflict of interest for me to grade my own work.

[Amber Veritz]

Requesting the Bonus OMs for this thread - Intelligence: Ice

[Celestia]

I'm still new here, so forgive me if I'm doing something wrong, but I'd like to request the participation bonus for myself and Veritas for the completion of A Fresh Start

I'm not sure precisely what the OM gain would be, but the wordcounts are:
Celestia: 2,940
Veritas: 2,310

[Jade Harley]

Requesting the Bonus OMs for this thread - Intelligence: Ice

Amber Veritz: 157.91

Kelly MacAryn: 198.37

I'm still new here, so forgive me if I'm doing something wrong, but I'd like to request the participation bonus for myself and Veritas for the completion of A Fresh Start

I'm not sure precisely what the OM gain would be, but the wordcounts are:
Celestia: 2,940
Veritas: 2,310

Hello and welcome to the Omniverse, Celestia.

Veritas Solaris: 125.62

Celestia: 167.91

I'll update your logs in a second! Logs upd8'd.

[Weiss Schnee]

Requesting participation bonus for Ruby and I for the completion of "The Beach Episode":

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=5856

[Jade Harley]

Requesting participation bonus for Ruby and I for the completion of "The Beach Episode":

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=5856

Weiss Schnee: 125.73
Ruby Rose: 60.24

Logs updated!

[Kelly MacAryn]

Turning in the NukaPepsi Quest for approval. No OM reward for this one - just a whole lot of radioactive soft-drink and delicious corporate VIP status.

[Ezrihel]

Turning in the NukaPepsi Quest for approval. No OM reward for this one - just a whole lot of radioactive soft-drink and delicious corporate VIP status.

Completed mister! Congrats, and great read by the way! ^^

[Ash Williams]

Completed A Light in the Darkness quest.