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Joining: Desman black
#1
Character name:Desman 'Des' Black

Character source:Original

Character history:Des's memories before coming here are somewhat mangled, him having memories of visues infected VR sytems, computor programs and being a pirate-based super hero, the only recurring theme is that he was a guinius in robotics and medical professions, and losing some limbs then becoming a robot; though the latter has differnt reasons.
His world, or what he can remember of it, is very similar to our own, except where techology is sightly more advanced.
Des's exact point in his life he came from is somewhat ambiguous but the most accurate would probably be just before trying to return home after he was stranded in a apocalyptic demension, where he faced in inner demons and finally started to open up to people.[Around 3-4 years after his first life-chaging event]

Physical Description: A meltellic red robot whose height and weight are 3"11' and 100kg repectively. Des' body is made up of a mixture of tungstan and aluminium. Other them the cannon on his right arm and having wheels instead of legs, he is fairly humanoid in shape. He also has a hump on his back that acts like a backpack.[spoiler][Image: ZMPoOGm.jpg][/spoiler] 
Stats:
ATK:3
DEF:4
SPD:1
TEC:2

(4700)

Starting Proficiencies: (1000 spent)
(1000)Ranged Proficiency


Starting Powers: (3400 spent)
(1400)Enhanced Senses-basic
(1000)Fusion-basic
(1000)Sybiosis

Starting Moves: (300 spent)
(300)Elemental Shot (Requires Ranged Proficiency): A shot made of pure energy around 6-7 inches in diameter with an effective range of about 2.5 m. It is shot from Des's arm cannon, can be shot while moving but gives -0.5 speed form the first to last shot. Vissualy simmiler to a kamahamaha wave, except without the tail and chages colors depending on the dominent element in the area (technically doesn't effect the shot becurse of what is treated as "fluff information" in the omniverse but does change the elemental allightment of shot). Can be aimed while standing still and can shot 1 shot per second for 3 secs, requires 1 second charging time between rounds. Moves slightly slower then a bullet. Only requires focus when aiming and drains stamina slightly, effects become noticeable after 6 rounds.

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Where did you find us? Was searching google for a new RPing site.
#2
Hello there! Your joining form is mostly perfect, there are just a few things I need you to specify:

Character history: Please tell us the exact point in Desman's history where he was brought to the Omniverse.


Quote:Starting Moves: (300 spent)
(300)Elemental Shot (Requires Ranged Proficiency): A medium Damage shot made of pure energy shot from Des's arm cannon that can be shot while moving. Vissualy simmiler to a kamahamaha wave, except without the tail and chages colors depending on the dominent element in the area. Can be aimed while standing still.

How long does it take for a shot to be fired? How fast does a shot travel (fast as an arrow? a bullet? something else?)? Does Des move at a normal speed while preparing to fire this, or is he slowed somewhat?

Explain the color changing aspect a bit more, please. Does the dominant element in the area have any part in the effects the beam? If you want the beam to remain priced at 300 OM, I'd recommend saying that the element does not change the effects of the beam at all.

Also, I would recommend that you remove the "medium Damage" part of the description, since moves are dependent on the stats of the character they're striking.
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#3
Almost done! Does Des need to focus a great amount to execute this move or is it 'fire and forget'? What is the effective range of this move? How big is the round/blast? Is there any kind of stamina drain (does Des tire after using this move a lot)?
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#4
Bump.
#5
Approved!

Name: Desman 'Des' Black
Spent OM: 4700
Proficiencies (1000); Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers (3400/8000); Enhanced Senses Basic (1400), Fusion Basic (1000), Symbiosis (1000)
Moves (300); Elemental Shot (300)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts:
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 2

Please make a new thread in the Roster forum with the name of your character as the title and copy and paste the above into the first post. It is also highly recommended that you make more posts within your own roster that detail any extra information about your character that you wish to include for the benefit of others. Any future purchases can be made in your log, here.
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