ALT: Veldriss (This is Ebony's Alt)

[Veldriss]

Character name: Veldriss

Character source: Original character

Character history: Veldriss is a half Dark Elf (Dunmer), half Black Dragon, the first born of Shadow and Astrid, her parents. She is well travelled, having been to multiple areas, before returning to her own universe for a time. It was during her latest trip through a new area, where she would have died to a sword through ther chest, had Omni not summoned her to the Omniverse.

Physical Description: 
Yes, I am aware that this picture is of a canon character, but seeing as I am no good at art, it was the closest I could find that fit her looks as written. She is actually an OC though.


Stats:
ATK:5
DEF:1
SPD:1
TEC:5

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency (1000)

Starting Powers: None, Stat Upgrade +2, (3000 OM)

Starting Moves: (900) Barrett M82A-1 (300)

This is a .50 caliber sniper rifle, semi automatic, one bullet per trigger pull,emptying the clip in 10 seconds with a ten round clip, and taking 5 seconds to switch in another clip. At 57 inches long including a 29 inch long barrel, this gun is heavy, weighing in at 30.9 pounds, and as such is a sniper weapon, not a close quarters one, as its best set-up is on a flat surface, where you do not have to hold its weight. If used free hand, it is very tiring, not to mention its heavy recoil. To balance the unwieldiness of the weapon, it has tremendous power and range, sending a 660 grain bullet downrange at 2,800 feet per second (1,900mph), at a with a effective range of slightly over a mile at 5,900 feet, with a maximum range of approximately four miles at 22,349 feet before the bullet would no longer do any damage if it hit anything. It is also extremely accurate [b]It is also equipped with a Armasight Zeus Pro 640 2-16x50mm Thermal Imaging Weapon Sight, to assist the aim of the user, magnifying the image by up to 16 times at long distances.[/b]


IMI Desert Eagle (300)

This is a .50 caliber pistol, semi automatic, one bullet per trigger pull, with a seven round clip, emptying the clip in 7 seconds, and taking 5 seconds to switch in another clip. It is 14.75 inches long, with a ten inch long barrel, ,and weighs in at 4.4 pounds. It fires a three hundred twenty five grain bullet at 1,670 feet per second (1,100mph) to an effective range of 75 feet, with a maximum range of 600 feet before the bullet would no longer do any damage if it hit something. As a pistol, it is more effective at close range, and rapidly decreases in effectiveness at anything past the initial seventy-five feet. It has standard iron sights as well.


Benelli M4 (300 OM)

This is a 12 gauge shotgun, semi automatic, one bullet per trigger pull, with an eight round internal tube magazine, ,taking eight seconds to empty the magazine, and ten seconds to switch the magazine once empty. It is 34.8 inches long, with an 18.5 inch barrel, and weighs nine pounds. It fires a 12 gauge slug of 730 grains at a velocity of 1400 feet per second (950 mph) to a maximum range of 160 feet, making this an intermediate range weapon, though deadly at short range due to the size and power of the projectile. Other types of ammunition may be used, though I am going with the slugs for this iteration of the weapons, perhaps will buy others later. It has only iron sights as well, as it is not a long range weapon.




These are straight from the wiki on the weapon.

I know that this will probably require some editing before being OK'd. Any help is appreciated


I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. yup

Where did you find us? This is Ebony's second character, for getting to 8000 om.

[Veldriss]

Bumping this, since it has been almost 72 hours since it was posted

[Daniel]

You need to re-write your move and give it a proper description. If you need help, you can take a look at other joining form and there's a moves guide in the help desk.

[Veldriss]

I have edited my move and the changes are BOLD text, let me know if this works or not.

[Daniel]

Don't forget that the strength of a firearm isn't normal until you have 5 ATK, also, the effectiveness of the weapon will also be dependent on an Enemy's DEF. So it's probably not going to be as effective as the description says, and it definitely will not leave large holes in most other primes.

[Veldriss]

The hole in the target was used as reference to a paper target, and used as a matter of accuracy, not power. Basically, for a gun to function, it is a question of both the gun's accuracy as well as the shooter's ability, and this one is very accurate, so long as the shooter is skilled.

[Daniel]

Barret M82A-1 - This still won't take a large chunk out of Primes. The Thermal Imaging will not give you any sight on foes that aren't standing in your line of sight (so people that are hiding behind things will not be picked up by the thermal scope) unless you purchase enhanced senses and, even then, it will only work to the maximum range of said power.

For all your weapons - how long does it take to empty their magazines/ shot capacity? How long does it take to reload?

[Veldriss]

Changes are posted, and as for the Barret, ,I already said I was aware of that. Again, I was talking about accuracy, not power.

[Daniel]

History - I'm going to need a little more than just "She had been in her own universe, doing her own thing, when Omni brought her to the Omniverse." for your history.

[Daniel]

Approved, but please expand on your character's history in your Roster. Someone will be along with your roster, hopefully, shortly. If not, I'll do it when I get up in the morning.

[Mark]

Here you are:

Name: Veldriss
Spent OM: 4900
Proficiencies (1000); Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers (0/8000);
Moves (900); Barrett M82A-1 (300), IMI Desert Eagle (300), Benelli M4 (300),
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts:
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Bases (0);
Unlocks (3000); First Stat Increase (1000), Second Stat Increase (2000)
Base stats:
ATK: 5
DEF: 1
SPD: 1
TEC: 5

Your log can be found here.