Rogue discussion

[Albert Wesker]

As I am curious (and enjoy feedback and such thing), I thought I might drop this down here. This being, of course, muh thread, here: Rogue

Primarily I'm just wondering if anyone has been reading this horrible comedy of word vomit that I've been writing and, if you have, what your thoughts are on it. A simple "it's a good" or "it's trash, stop it" would be enough for me, but any further thoughts or feedback are also appreciated.

Any ideas on just where, exactly, this clusterfuck is headed would also be something I'm curious about, as it has sort of derailed from the original idea I had in mind (which was already vague enough) and taken a different route to get there. Which I'm very amused and happy with, don't get me wrong, as unplanned things coming up in loose plans for sequences of events are always a hoot, y'know?

ON YET ANOTHER NOTE....with how loose the planned sequence of events is, I have ample room for including other things (such as the run-in with a firewell, which was an idea courtesy of Mark which spawned an entire post and a half all by itself just from a quick mention), so if you have any idea-fuel to toss onto the literary fire, I would likewise welcome it.

Enjoy the horrible comedy of errors on display, if you so choose, folks. :frogpipe:

[Carmelita]

I like it. It's decently well written, and it's a spike of activity in a rather inactive part of the site.

I like the way you'd set it up. I was expecting you to be going somewhere with it, but if you don't have a goal in mind might I suggest our secondary protagonist come to a conclusion about his purpose? It seems like a voyage of self discovery, in some ways.

[Moon]

I agree with Carmel's sentiments completely. And since I don't have anything else to add, I'll leave it at that. I'll come back if something else decides to pop into my head.