"Firewall" Discussion Thread

[Kyle Crane]

Hey, guys!

Well, I decided to create a discussion thread for Firewall.
IT'S ME
So, yeah, discuss below!

Posts so far: 2
Rough estimate words per post: 750
Current location: An unknown building in tier 6. Kinda near an elevator.

[Kyle Crane]

Hello...? Anyone care...?

Posts so far: 4
Rough estimate words per post: Now more varied, anywhere between 500 and 1000.
Current location: The streets of tier 6. Near an elevator.

[Blink]

I appreciate that you are writing longer posts. I'm not saying that longer is always better, but you're clearly fleshing out your character and your story a lot more then you used to as The Flash. There is no question that you've improved ten fold since I saw you in DA last year. You really read other people's work and aspire to do better based on that. I didn't read it in detail, but what I skimmed, I was impressed just based on the improvement in a relatively short amount of time.

Keep in mind this is a solo story. Also remember that it is one thread among dozens of active ones. You're gonna write some stuff that people don't read. Try to write for yourself, knowing that eventually as you interact with more people (and you update your roster with your history), more and more people will go back and check it out over time. Don't be discouraged if people aren't commenting on it.

Also, something a lot of people do is make a C&C thread in Creative Corner. Not a bad idea if you're looking for criticism. That's more for your writing and less for your story, though.