Rin's joining Application

[Rin]

Character name: Rin

Character source: Original

Character history: Rin was your normal, crazy, incest loving, Hobbit fanfiction OC. That was until she broke out of the sight and staged a coup with the deleted OC's in the sites garbage. Casualties were high, but Rin alone managed to escape through the external links wall. Since then, she has been wandering about the internet, enjoying the new and ever-changing landscape. (If you're really bored and interested in reading the whole story: Four-Chapter Fanfiction)

Physical Description: Rin has a wolfish face, dark skin, and emerald green hair. Though she is a dwarf and short, true to OC fashion she still retains the ideal teenager body image of thin and graceful. Despite her intended story being The Hobbit, she has adopted a steampunk style of outfit. (originals only)

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies: Physical Strength, Area Attack Proficiency

Starting Powers: Burst Movement, Basic Regeneration

Starting Moves: 
Sphere Blast - An Area Attack, Sphere Blast sends out a sphere of kinetic/white energy to cause damage to the surrounding area. It takes 30sec to 1min to charge. Side effects include nausea and fatigue (throwing up is not uncommon after using this attack).
Deus ex Machina - A variation on the Sphere Blast. Generally used to escape tough situations or defeat large groups of enemies. Charge takes 2-5min. Side effects include extreme nausea or loss of consciousness.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Where did you find us? Referred by The Humble Sage.

[Mark]

The IP address for this account matches The Humble Sage. Since you're a friend of his that makes sense, but we'll need proof that you're separate people. The easiest way to do this is to take a picture of the two of you side-by-side holding signs with your characters' names on them. You can blur your faces of course. You can PM the picture to myself or if you're more comfortable, to one of the site Admins (Omni or Alex).

As for your history, when exactly was Rin taken to the Omniverse?

For you moves, give this a read and try to hit all of the bullet points.

[Rin]

The IP address for this account matches The Humble Sage. Since you're a friend of his that makes sense, but we'll need proof that you're separate people. The easiest way to do this is to take a picture of the two of you side-by-side holding signs with your characters' names on them. You can blur your faces of course. You can PM the picture to myself or if you're more comfortable, to one of the site Admins (Omni or Alex).

As for your history, when exactly was Rin taken to the Omniverse?

For you moves, give this a read and try to hit all of the bullet points.

Ah yeah that makes sense. I'll grab a pic once he gets back and send that to you.

A few weeks after escaping into the internet. I can add that in.

Re-specified Moves
Regular Move:
Sphere Blast [300 OM] - A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max 3ft radius. It is an area attack and effects everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 5-10sec to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user can use minimal movement to dodge attacks for example but for the most part must be stationary. The user must focus on the charging, but after release no concentration is necessary. After effects include nausea and fatigue to the user that last between 10-30 seconds. To the observer, Sphere Blast appears as a mostly translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by clasping hands together in front of the chest and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit by a large blunt object, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.
Special Move:
Deus ex Machina [1SP + 600 OM] - A more powerful variation of the Sphere Blast. A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max of 7ft radius. It is an area attack and effect everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 30sec to 1min to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user MUST remain stationary and focused while charging the attack. After effects include extreme nausea and potentially loss of consciousness. Deus ex Machina appears as a barely translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by planting the feet firmly on some stable surface, clasping hands together in front of the chest, and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit with a large solid block of ice, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.

Sorry if my explanations suck, The Humble Mage is the one with the head for rules, I don't naturally think in specifics of combat unfortunately, though I'm trying to improve.

Just let me know if there's anything else I need to work on and I'll get to it. Thanks!

[Rin]

The IP address for this account matches The Humble Sage. Since you're a friend of his that makes sense, but we'll need proof that you're separate people. The easiest way to do this is to take a picture of the two of you side-by-side holding signs with your characters' names on them. You can blur your faces of course. You can PM the picture to myself or if you're more comfortable, to one of the site Admins (Omni or Alex).

As for your history, when exactly was Rin taken to the Omniverse?

For you moves, give this a read and try to hit all of the bullet points.

I have the picture, but I don't have the ability to PM or access my PMs so I can't send it to you. Is there another way to prove it or can you give me access to PMing? Sorry to make this even more difficult :\

[Daniel]

I've activated your account so that you can send Mark the PM he needs to continue with approval. should be fine now

[Rin]

I've activated your account so that you can send Mark the PM he needs to continue with approval. should be fine now

Awesome! Thank you so much!

[Mark]

Daniel is the best.

The IP address for this account matches The Humble Sage. Since you're a friend of his that makes sense, but we'll need proof that you're separate people. The easiest way to do this is to take a picture of the two of you side-by-side holding signs with your characters' names on them. You can blur your faces of course. You can PM the picture to myself or if you're more comfortable, to one of the site Admins (Omni or Alex).

As for your history, when exactly was Rin taken to the Omniverse?

For you moves, give this a read and try to hit all of the bullet points.

Ah yeah that makes sense. I'll grab a pic once he gets back and send that to you.

A few weeks after escaping into the internet. I can add that in.

Re-specified Moves
Regular Move:
Sphere Blast [300 OM] - A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max 3ft radius. It is an area attack and effects everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 5-10sec to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user can use minimal movement to dodge attacks for example but for the most part must be stationary. The user must focus on the charging, but after release no concentration is necessary. After effects include nausea and fatigue to the user that last between 10-30 seconds. To the observer, Sphere Blast appears as a mostly translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by clasping hands together in front of the chest and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit by a large blunt object, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.
Special Move:
Deus ex Machina [1SP + 600 OM] - A more powerful variation of the Sphere Blast. A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max of 7ft radius. It is an area attack and effect everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 30sec to 1min to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user MUST remain stationary and focused while charging the attack. After effects include extreme nausea and potentially loss of consciousness. Deus ex Machina appears as a barely translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by planting the feet firmly on some stable surface, clasping hands together in front of the chest, and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit with a large solid block of ice, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.

Sorry if my explanations suck, The Humble Mage is the one with the head for rules, I don't naturally think in specifics of combat unfortunately, though I'm trying to improve.

Just let me know if there's anything else I need to work on and I'll get to it. Thanks!

No problem! It's a learning process to write up moves so we don't expect perfection right off the bat.

For the basic form of Sphere Blast, is there an overall stamina drain? Or does the nausea get worse the more often he does it?

For the Super Move version, you don't need such a long charge time. As it costs SP in combat, you can get away with doing larger amounts of damage with fewer downsides. You could actually keep the charge the same as the regular version if you want. If for some reason you prefer the longer charge time, I'm fine with that also =P. Just letting you know. Also as a minor clerical thing, you don't need to list the SP cost in the move description, just put 'Tier-1 Super Move' and everyone will know what you mean.

EDIT: Also, you don't need the crippling nausea or unconsciousness either for the Super if you don't want it. Just 'really tiring' is fine.

[Rin]

Daniel is the best.


No problem! It's a learning process to write up moves so we don't expect perfection right off the bat.

For the basic form of Sphere Blast, is there an overall stamina drain? Or does the nausea get worse the more often he does it?

For the Super Move version, you don't need such a long charge time. As it costs SP in combat, you can get away with doing larger amounts of damage with fewer downsides. You could actually keep the charge the same as the regular version if you want. If for some reason you prefer the longer charge time, I'm fine with that also =P. Just letting you know. Also as a minor clerical thing, you don't need to list the SP cost in the move description, just put 'Tier-1 Super Move' and everyone will know what you mean.

EDIT: Also, you don't need the crippling nausea or unconsciousness either for the Super if you don't want it. Just 'really tiring' is fine.

Okay good. Thanks for understanding XD

It makes sense to have after effects build for each use of the sphere blast. I'll add that in.

Humble Sage was saying the same thing. So I'll probably decrease the charge time to the same as the sphere blast. The crippling nausea/unconsciousness is really more of a characteristic of the troupe I'm making fun of so I think I'll keep it in as a possibility, but add 'really tiring' to the list of possible effects in case it's not being used at the end of the fight or something like that.

Thanks for letting me know about how to write up the teir-1 thing as well, that makes more sense.

Here are the official revisions I italicized what I changed:
Regular Move:
Sphere Blast [300 OM] - A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max 3ft radius. It is an area attack and effects everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 5-10sec to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user can use minimal movement to dodge attacks for example but for the most part must be stationary. The user must focus on the charging, but after release no concentration is necessary. After effects include nausea and fatigue to the user that last between 10-30 seconds, effects will stack when used repeatedly. To the observer, Sphere Blast appears as a mostly translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by clasping hands together in front of the chest and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit by a large blunt object, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.
Teir 1 Special Move:
Deus ex Machina [600 OM] - A more powerful variation of the Sphere Blast. A sphere of energy originating from the user and expanding outwards to a max of 7ft radius. It is an area attack and effect everything within the area, excluding Rin herself. It takes 5-10sec to charge, less than 1 second between release and dissipation. It cannot be aimed. The user MUST remain stationary and focused while charging the attack. After effects include really tiring, and potentially extreme nausea or loss of consciousness if it's near the end of the fight. Deus ex Machina appears as a barely translucent shell of white energy. It is performed by planting the feet firmly on some stable surface, clasping hands together in front of the chest, and focusing the 'chi' of the user into an outward attack. Getting hit with the sphere blast feels like getting hit with a large solid block of ice, varying in density depending on the targets defense. The move has a fixed method of use.

Thanks for getting back to me so quickly on this

[Mark]

Beautiful. Good to go!

Name: Rin
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4600
Proficiencies: (1600); Physical Strength (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers: (2100/8000), Burst Movement (800), Basic Regeneration (1300)
Moves: (300); Sphere Blast (300)
Super Moves: (600); Deus ex Machina (600) 
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

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