Sabriel

[Sabriel]

Character name: Sabriel

Character source: Original

Character history:
Sabriel's a rare spectator of this Omniverse as she came from a realm born where people intertwined one another's fate and bodies without a moment of hesitation. In her world the normal affectionate touching of lips and hands merely acting as a catalyst for her transformations. She was born rather normal in the Hymm verse she was once denizen to. She enjoyed her life in the Hymm, another woodwind breezing through the orchestra as she passed through rather simple life. However, one day everything changed simply plucked like that of a toy form a child's pin. Her entire world was changed and left with a realm of uncertainty. Her first actions in this world being to check whether her body was still capable of merging, but alas she had no companions in this crazy world.

Physical Description: Her appearance is that of any normal human girl cute skinny and over all attractive to the eye. For those whom sought out a feminine companion. Generally she wears a strange uniform of sort colored with scarlet and azure upon snow white silk. IT appears almost as a cross between a military and school uniform as students were one in the same. Magenta eyes stare out from beneath her blue bangs off tied to the side by her ponytail which she wears.

Stats:
ATK: 1
DEF: 4
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies:
Melee Proficiency : (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
Fusion   (1000)
Symbiosis(1000)
Phasing  (1200)
Starting Moves:

Crescent Dagger Weapon (300): Sabriel is normally a pacifist unwilling to do much of anything in combat as she finds it rather pointless. Her dagger however is quite capable of slicing through her foes or for the simple use of chopping bread as she more commonly uses it for. The blade shimmers like that of crescent moon reflecting off the lake surface. The dagger reaches a third of a meter, shorter than most swords, but long enough for defensive purposes.
Appearance: This dagger has gradual curve along the length of the blade arching like that of a crescent moon from it's hilt that connects straight through the blade. The inner portions of the crescent acting as the sharp blade like that of a sickle. Upon the blade is picture of old times with a goat running away from a creature of unknown form symbolizing the sacrificial use of this blade.



Total OM Use : (4500)

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
I solemnly swear I'm up to no good, (but yes I read the rules and conduct)


Where did you find us?


Manta told me.

[Minato Namikaze]

Any weapons that you want your character to use must also be purchased as a move. So you will need to purchase your Dagger.

[Sabriel]

Changed slash into the dagger

[Minato Namikaze]

Crescent Dagger - " and and loses it's magical charge if the user has used it for four posts in a row to attack. It loses it's sharpness and becomes blunt." This doesn't need to be a thing.

Also, what does it look like? You told us how long the blade is, and that is glows like the moon, but I need a physical description of the dagger.

[Sabriel]

Added appearance.

[Minato Namikaze]

Intimate Union - This just sounds like the way you're going to roleplay Symbiosis/ Fusion. You don't need a move to utilize those powers.

Crescent Dagger - Saying that it takes a certain amount of posts to use up the magic charge isn't specific enough. Rather than giving us an amount of posts, just give us an amount of time, or an amount of attacks you can perform with the Dagger before it becomes useless.

Edit - Also, how long would it take to recharge the magical charge?

[Sabriel]

Posted changes

[Minato Namikaze]

Quted from the Rules section on Moves.

We always prefer descriptions to be as literal as possible. Saying "this lasts a round" is very vague because depending on the writers, post length et cetera, a "round" might be 1 minute or 10 minutes. Therefore, put durations in literal time.

Saying that you can use your dagger for a certain amount of posts is too vague, please clarify

Intimate Union - This just sounds like the way you're going to roleplay Symbiosis/ Fusion. You don't need a move to utilize those powers.

Crescent Dagger - Saying that it takes a certain amount of posts to use up the magic charge isn't specific enough. Rather than giving us an amount of posts, just give us an amount of time, or an amount of attacks you can perform with the Dagger before it becomes useless.

Edit - Also, how long would it take to recharge the magical charge?

[Sabriel]

Got rid of the Dagger Time Limit altogether, along with the Intimate Union.

Is there anything else?

[Minato Namikaze]

You are approved. Also, if you'd like to add in the description of how your character uses Fusion/ Symbiosis, in your roster, then that would be fine.

Name: Sabriel
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4500
Proficiencies: (1000); Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (3200/8000), Fusion - Basic (1000), Symbiosis (1000), Phasing (1200)
Moves: (300); Crescent Moon (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 1
DEF: 4
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

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