The King of Heroes hath cometh

[Gilgamesh_1]

Character name: Gilgamesh

Character source: Fate franchise

Character history: End of Fate/Stay Night – Unlimited Blade Works route

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies:
- Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM)
- Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600 OM)
- Remote Control Proficiency (600 OM)
- Debuff Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
- Advanced Telekinesis (1000 OM)

Starting Moves:
- Quick Shots [Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Advanced Telekinesis] (300 OM)
After opening the Gate of Babylon behind him, Gilgamesh is able to shoot a barrage of up to 20 weapons at his opponent.

-Enkidu [Debuff Proficiency] (300 OM)
Once activating it, numerous segments of chains instantly appear to wrap around the opponent in order to bind them for his projectiles. It appears directly from inside the Gate of Babylon that opened around his enemy. He generally binds the opponent's weapon, limbs, shoulders, neck, and abdomen, rendering them immobile.







Writing example: (Taken from a dead DBZ RP site which I participated for about a month before it died and this RP is still saved on my computer)

The sky was dark, ominous. The middle of the night revealed no light and very little color. The dry soil was cracked with exhaustion, the skies above looming menacingly over the parched land below. The sky was black, but in the horizon there was a deep, violent shade of purple blooming on the skyline. It was the color of power, the color of thunder. The earth shook tremendously as the first rumble was unleashed. The air seemed charged with electricity, ready to zap at any moment. The entire atmosphere seemed to be supercharged, ready to light up into a chaotic frenzy. There was a tinge of desperation in any inhabitants in the area. But there was one very bold individual who did not flee. Knelt down, shadowed against the black of the night, Grantz remained poised and tense, her body stiff and unmoving. His bulky figure was mostly hidden by the darkness around him, but in a flash of lightning he was illuminated sharply. His gold eyes were shut.

The power here was unimaginable. The power here was beautiful. The power here was lustful. It wanted something - everything. It did not give, it took. It was unafraid of anything. It shattered everything. The very charge of this place made the dark spirit freeze, his muscles locked together as he inhaled the air itself. He sampled electricity on the breeze, a warning of what was to come. He let a slow breath squeeze out of his tight lungs, and the drums began playing as the thunder began shaking the land around him. The very force of it was unimaginable. He had chosen the right place - the perfect place - the best place he could've to come tonight. Because he was feeling power hungry.

There was deadening silence.

BOOM. The earth trembled. The sky shuddered. And his eyes snapped open to reveal perfectly golden irises and pupils dilated to the highest degree. With a movement akin to a dancer, he leapt from his tightened position, launching himself upon two firmly planted feet. The sky seemed to be close to shattering - the force of the thunder now was unthinkable - lightening flashed, revealing his bulky, illuminated shape, eyes wide with some otherworldly power.. Power which he wanted - power which he consumed, power which revitalized him, power which made him stronger than he ever had been before. In this land, in this chaotic land, he was in his element. His lips peeled apart in a smirk to reveal white, dangerous teeth. Here, he would get what he wanted. Here, he would revitalize himself, dipping into depths of his power. Tonight, Grantz would be reborn.

"Let loose..", he whispered, his voice rising above the winds circulating around him in what was to be a terrible thunder storm. He tilted his head heavenwards, welcoming the onslaught of lightning that ripped across the sky. He lifted his hands up, as if to beckon the raw electricity, in it's purest form down to him. He growled, his voice low. "You understand me. You are like me. We are one. This place - this place – this power- I need it - let me have it -" He jumped away with sharp, cultivated movements. The thunder screamed in the sky. The power Grantz had long since felt was building in him like a time bomb. He was about to explode. He could hold no more. He had never felt more alive, or more dangerous, in his entire life. The thunder bellowed. The sky trembled. The earth cried. "If you do not know me, heavens, you know me now!" he growled madly in the gale-like wind up into the sky. "I am Grantz," he whispered. The world around him seemed to still for a breath. "And there is nothing to stop me now."








I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Ganondorf]

If possible, go into better depth with your character history. Not everyone has played Fate. Or you can post a link to the relevent information.

Both your moves require more detail.

For Quick Shots: What weapons are being fired? Is this a "power" move, or a quick-fire move? The latter will either need to be a less-damaging move, or will take some time to summon. Is the gate opened behind Gilgamesh, or behind his opponent? Up to 20 weapons means it the fire rate is variable, or so it reads to me. In that case, it would likely be at least 600 OM. It also will only need Ranged Proficiency and Ranged Materialize. The other proficiencies, based on your description, are unnecessary.

For Enkidu: You'll also need to use Ranged Materialize for this attack. A description of what the Gate of Babylon looks like would be nice. Will also require your concentration to maintain the grapple and/or be able to be broken with strength and/or be a heavy energy drain. Immobilizing techniques are extremely powerful, especially those that do so instantly.

[Gilgamesh_1]

Yea, I'm planning to put his history and explanation about his skills in the roster thread upon acceptance. As I will write in even more detail about his "Gate of Babylon" later, in short, while it is called a gate, it's actually just an invisible portal that appears behind Gilgamesh. It is some sort of a vault that stores unlimited amount of weaponry such as swords, halberds, spears, axes, maces, etc. He basically "launches" the weapons towards his enemy in a straight line pattern.

So my idea regarding my character is, since being able to fire a barrage of unlimited amount of projectiles is waaay waaay forbidden in a game like this, I am going to make him weaker after arriving in Omniverse, thus making him only able to shoot up to 20 projectiles at his opponent. The same goes to Enkidu. With that being said, I also want to make them a Super Move later on, basically a stronger version of both of them which is at least have the potency a bit closer to the anime.

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This is a perfect moment in the anime which both Gate of Babylon and Enkidu were used at the same time.

I am open to more corrections and suggestions before fixing my application.

[Omni]

What Ganon basically wants is for you to put that stuff explicitly in the description. This is A: so that we know the Omniverse version is balanced, and B: so that other players have quick reference for fights.

History sounds fine as long as you can flesh it out from that description in your roster. For moves, though, you'll need to include 'game' details like: can Gilgy move while he's using the attack? Does he have to channel for a few seconds or do they activate immediately? Can he pour more power into the attacks to make them more powerful (ie, can he choose to fire only a few weapons to conserve energy) or is it fixed, the same every time?

[Gilgamesh_1]

Okay, so how about this?

- Quick Shots [Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency] (300 OM)
Gilgamesh opens an "invisible door" behind him that allows for the contents from the other side to pass through upon the user's command. The items that pass through the gate form ripples in the empty air as they appear. Gilgamesh is able to immediately summons weapons from within and shoot a barrage of up to 20 weapons at his opponent in a straight line pattern. The down side of this move is that Gilgamesh cannot move during the duration of the attack. The only real energy usage lies with the Gate of Babylon's activation cost while the cost of energy used to fire the weapons as projectile is pretty low and due to the static energy cost nature of the move, he can't charge the the move to make it stronger.

Side note: Actually the idea behind not giving a fixed number of how many projectiles are purely RP purpose since I might RP him as underestimating his opponent so he fires only a single projectile and things like that. Oh and with the nature of the move I might swap Remote Control Proficiency with Area Attack Proficiency and give it to this move.

-Enkidu [Debuff Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency] (300 OM)
Once activating it, numerous segments of chains instantly appear to wrap around the opponent in order to bind them for his projectiles. It appears directly from inside the Gate of Babylon that opened around his enemy. He generally binds the opponent's weapon, limbs, shoulders, neck, and abdomen, rendering them immobile. Unlike his bounded opponent, Gilgamesh is free to move around during the duration of the move. If the opponent has the same ATK stat or lower than Gilgamesh, they won't be able to move for one turn, if the opponent has 1 ATK stat higher than Gilgamesh, they can attack but unable to move, if the opponent has 2 or higher ATK stat than Gilgamesh, they will be able to break free.

[Omni]

You didn't include all the details I asked:

History sounds fine as long as you can flesh it out from that description in your roster. For moves, though, you'll need to include 'game' details like: can Gilgy move while he's using the attack? Does he have to channel for a few seconds or do they activate immediately? Can he pour more power into the attacks to make them more powerful (ie, can he choose to fire only a few weapons to conserve energy) or is it fixed, the same every time?

[Gilgamesh_1]

Can Gilgy move while he's using the attack?
Nope for Quick Shots, yes for Enkidu

Does he have to channel for a few seconds or do they activate immediately?
Immediately

Can he pour more power into the attacks to make them more powerful (ie, can he choose to fire only a few weapons to conserve energy) or is it fixed, the same every time?
Energy-wise fixed and can't make it more powerful and the quantity of projectile shot doesn't affect the energy spent. It's the same whether he shot one or 20 projectiles.

[Omni]

yep, you need to put that stuff in the move descriptions

[Gilgamesh_1]

Edited.

[Omni]

Kay.

Quick Shots is variable (1-20) so I'm putting it at 600.
Enkidu I'm putting at 300. Bear in mind that weaker opponents might still break free, it'll just take longer.

You're now set up! Welcome officially! *curly bow* Please post this roster as a new topic entitled 'Gilgamesh' on the rosters forum and begin roleplaying at your leisure! I've removed Remote Control Proficiency for now as you were about 100 over and it's not required for either of your current moves, you can buy this if you want once you hit 5100 OM.

Name: Gilgamesh
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4500
Proficiencies: (2600); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Powers: (1000); Advanced Telekinesis (1000)
Moves: (900); Quick Shots (600), Enkidu (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

[Gilgamesh_1]

Since Telekinesis is actually not needed for my moves, can I change my proficiencies and powers into this instead?

Name: Gilgamesh
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4400
Proficiencies: (3200); Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600), Debuff Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers: (300); Super Jumping [Basic] (300)
Moves: (900); Quick Shots (600), Enkidu (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:

Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

[Omni]

No problem.