The Joker

[Chloe Price]

Character name: The Joker

Character source: DC Comics

Character history: So, you want to know how I got my smile and my charming looks? Well, I can't tell you specifically...Sometimes I remember it one way, sometimes I remember it another...If I'm going to have a past, I want it to be multiple choice! But, what I can tell you is, I used to be boring, but then I fell into a vat of chemicals. My skin was bleached, and my hair became green. One look in the mirror, and I embraced the madness.

I first gave that flying rodent, Batman, a good runaround in day 1. I even gave him the name! I went toe-to-toe with the Fatman and his sidekick, Slobbin, more times then I can count.

Eventually, I shot and paralyzed the Bratgirl. And she came back as Oracle! Why bother paralyzing someone if they're just gonna keep fighting anyway? Oh well...I wasn't there when it happened, anyway. Because Omni brought my smiling face to the Omniverse...Much to the horror of everyone in it.

Physical Description:


Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies: Ranged Attack Proficiency(1000), Physical Attack Proficiency(1000), Debuff Proficiency(1000), Area Attack Proficiency(600)

Starting Powers:

Starting Moves:

BANG! Flag Gun: A basic, black handgun with a BANG! flag on the end. Despite the flag, it actually shoots bullets. There's about 2 seconds in between shots. Can fire 10 shots before having to reload. Kinda average firepower. (300)

Laughing Gas Grenade: A thrown, lime green grenade with the Joker's face on it. It explodes into a ton of Laughing Gas, leaving whoever's hit uncontrollably laughing. Not the best on the terms of 'making you die,' but will leave people vulnerable to further attacks. The spray of gas has a radius of about 5 feet, and the effect of the gas lasts for 10 seconds. The gas does not effect you if you hold your breath. (300)

Crowbar: It's an 18 inch, silver colored crowbar. There's a blood splatter on the head. (300)

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[Minato Namikaze]

Laughing Gas Grenade - How much laughing gas does it produce? (as in, what is the Area of Effect?)

Crowbar - Yes, you need more information. Crowbars can vary in length and general appearance. So you'll need to be a little more descriptive than saying 'It's a crowbar'.

History - Also, your character doesn't bring themselves to the Omniverse, Omni does. So you may want to re-word that little section.

As for your appearance, an Image is fine. It'd be nice to know how tall he is though

[Chloe Price]

Laughing Gas Grenade - How much laughing gas does it produce? (as in, what is the Area of Effect?)

Crowbar - Yes, you need more information. Crowbars can vary in length and general appearance. So you'll need to be a little more descriptive than saying 'It's a crowbar'.

History - Also, your character doesn't bring themselves to the Omniverse, Omni does. So you may want to re-word that little section.

As for your appearance, an Image is fine. It'd be nice to know how tall he is though

For the Laughing Gas Grenade, I meant the laughing gas has a radius of 5 feet, not the actual grenade.

Same with Crowbar, didn't think about that.

For History, don't forget that it's told in the Joker's perspective, and Joker is absolutely insane. So, he may remember it wrong. Either way, I can re-word it.

[Minato Namikaze]

BANG! Flag Gun - Are you sure you want this gun to only fire rounds that Travel 20 feet? that doesn't really sound very effective or realistic, It can act like a normal gun, the flag would just be for novelty and fodder.

Laughing Gas - How long do the effects last? if they hold their breath, will it still effect them?

[Chloe Price]

BANG! Flag Gun - Are you sure you want this gun to only fire rounds that Travel 20 feet? that doesn't really sound very effective or realistic, It can act like a normal gun, the flag would just be for novelty and fodder.

Laughing Gas - How long do the effects last? if they hold their breath, will it still effect them?

Once again, edited the thing now. Also, the flag IS just for RP fodder. I just have no knowledge of guns or how far they fire.

[Minato Namikaze]

Is the gun a modern day gun, or is it more like a revolver?

[Chloe Price]

Is the gun a modern day gun, or is it more like a revolver?

Modern-day handgun.

[Minato Namikaze]

Well then, Modern-day hand gun bullets can travel quite far. But you could probably just assume it'd act like a normal gun. So you can remove the bullet travel distance if you want.

As for the description of the gun, is there any other changes that Joker may have made to it? Like, little personalized changes?

[Chloe Price]

Well then, Modern-day hand gun bullets can travel quite far. But you could probably just assume it'd act like a normal gun. So you can remove the bullet travel distance if you want.

As for the description of the gun, is there any other changes that Joker may have made to it? Like, little personalized changes?

The flag is the only alteration the Joker has made to the gun.

[Minato Namikaze]

30 seconds is way too long for a normal move, even for a super move it'd be pushing it. You'll need to reduce it

[Chloe Price]

30 seconds is way too long for a normal move, even for a super move it'd be pushing it. You'll need to reduce it

I cut the time in half on the debuff. Is it any better?

[Minato Namikaze]

Hrmm... 15 seconds is still quite a bit too long. I'd say 5 - 10 seconds.

[Chloe Price]

Hrmm... 15 seconds is still quite a bit too long. I'd say 5 - 10 seconds.

Okay.

Now, is that the last problem? I'm kinda anxious...This is the first time I've figured out what my character will be doing BEFORE actually sending him off.

[Minato Namikaze]

No, you are approved, I will have someone write up your Roster. It'll be posted shortly. thank you for being patient

[Gilgamesh]

Name: The Joker
Level: 1
Spent OM:4200
Proficiencies(3600)hysical Proficiency(1000), Ranged Proficiency(1000), Debuff Proficiency(1000), Area Attack Proficiency(600)
Powers():
Moves(600): BANG! Flag Gun(300), Laughing Gas Grenade(300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

[Chloe Price]

Name: The Joker
Level: 1
Spent OM:4200
Proficiencies(3600)hysical Proficiency(1000), Ranged Proficiency(1000), Debuff Proficiency(1000), Area Attack Proficiency(600)
Powers():
Moves(600): BANG! Flag Gun(300), Laughing Gas Grenade(300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

...I know this is kinda nitpicking, but you forgot the Crowbar in the Moves section.
Either way, thanks for the approval!