Retane

[Retane]

Character name:Retane

Character source: DBZ/ChubbsDBZ

Character history:Retane, a canon Namekian warrior from Dragon Ball Z, who became his own character in the Chubbs Universe.The warrior was more of a Neutral character who did what ever he did, only because he wanted to. A former member of the Horsemen, the Namek is about to find himself in a new universe.

Stats:
ATK:3
DEF:1
SPD:3
TEC:3

Starting Proficiencies:Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600),Remote Control Proficiency (600)

Starting Powers:None

Starting Moves:
Energy Blast: A standard staple in his own Universe, Retane creates a blast of energy in his hand that ranges in size from that of a base ball to that of a basketball. It takes little to no time to create and while its not the full force of his power,. it can pack a whallop.

Writing example: If I need a peice....THen Google Retne and Chubbs or Maleficus Nova and Chubbs

[Retane]

Red.



It was a color that symbolized and screamed out for alertness. Be it derived in the form of 'seeing red', which meant that a person had snapped and was in angry state; Or perhaps the color of many of the sapein races blood after it is spilled and conects with the oxidized nature of the elements. It also was a sign of exit.



And an Exit it had been, as the time neared and Maleficus had to get them all off the ship. He pulled out the final porta capsulel and released it...


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Nova looked down from a hill. Not only him, but everyone else was tired and out of breath. Nova had never felt so weak, but it seemed that it was Tamsin, closest to him that was taking it the hardest. her close were soaked and she was nearly in tears. Maleficus looked back ane it was Retane and Enroshia that met him. Enroshia had been the one to transport them all to safety. His cloth was red and after using a green protal and having Retane appear it was nearly obvious. Mal Nova had wondreed if it was a self destruct portal.



"I can't create to many portals without burning energy", The white haired mystic spoke as the son of Retane grasped his neck, but he never flinched, "So it had to tire you out. Don't you think Retane would ahve been alot stronger then he was if it wasn't so taxing?"



Nova looked to Retane who had straightened himself and realized that it could have been most taxing on him.



"She's sick and dying you fucking moron! It's her god damned soul thats being attacked more then anything. Don't you get it? The signs of her purest dedication anI determintion were there for you! You're just to fucking stupid! I never should have never saved your fucking life back then!" Enroshia went for his blade, but a hand slightly faster then his or more anticipating, caught it. Enro looked down not to find Retane's, but Desoin's. Retane stood close between the two, but he said nothing. Enroshia ripped himself from the Jade Fiend's grip who had been taken aback by those words.



A portal opened before anyone could speak and Enroshia was gone.



"He's actually wore out." Desoin and Nova looked to Retane, "He taxed himself greatly to get me here along with himself. He doesnt create the portals with the exeption of moving himself. Add that with making Three portals keys and getting everyone to safety. It's wore him out. And not many want to be seen tired."



Desoin looked puzzled for a moment but nodded, "He's faster then me."



The Rogue turned his attention away, knowing he was to tired to argue and could only do what he should have always been doing, He scooped Tamsin up, though she tried to argue, and materialized his own cloak. atop of her. She muttered somethng in the end as Nova and all but Desoin, Talysyn, and Retane remained. Talysyn would have went but the skill wasn't in her capabilities.



The Mystic and Namek looked on after them. "Will she be ok?", Came the fiery young lass.



Retane didn't move as he looked on, after the pain he knew he had caused.Somewhere deep down inside he wanted to explode, but he knew he had to watch it all over again.



Desoin turned to the girl and a tear that seemed to seperate itself from the raindrops, told her all she could ever know.



Talysyn fell to her knees and wept.

[Omni]

I will leave this until you've completed the form.

[Retane]

There ya go. It says I dont need to start with a power.

[Ganondorf]

You need to provide a description of your move: Basic Energy Blast. Needed parts include: size, speed, approximate damage, approximate energy drain. Etc.

[Retane]

Oh didnt know. Hows that?

[Ganondorf]

Because a basic energy blast for you is different from a basic energy blast from myself, or Samus, or even Harry. Describing your moves ensures that anyone you write with knows what you're capable of.

[Retane]

So is that good or no? Also I tihnk I need it priced

[Omni]

As a heads up, you don't have Physical Strength (1000) right now so you won't be able to do hand-to-hand combat with any degree of effectiveness, which you'll probably want as a DBZ character (just guessing here). I'd suggest swapping out Ranged Materialise and Remote Control and picking them up once you actually need them for a move unless you're planning on grabbing new moves for them right away.

Energy Blast is approved at 300. Just letting you know as well it's a fixed-damage kind of thing, not like DBZ where you can charge it up to increase the power. That'd be 600 or more depending on the range of power.

Let me know if you want to keep those current proficiencies. If that's okay, I'll set you up.

[Retane]

Yeah its just a Standard Energy Blast. I'll pull a few Hundred to a Few thousand of OM from what I have written on paper. I'll Grab the physical Prof After IM set up and I'm sure I can use the Shadow Mist

[Ganondorf]

Post the following into a Thread with your Character Name on the Roster Board. You're now good to roleplay.


Name: Retane
Level: 1
Spent OM: 2500
Proficiencies: Ranged Proficiency (1000), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600),Remote Control Proficiency (600)
Powers: None
Moves: Energy Blast (300)
Super Moves: None
Transformations: None
Summons: None
Items: None
Bases: None
Unlocks: None
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 1
SPD: 3
TEC: 3