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I'd love for someone to give me some extensive critique. Just click on my character profile under my avi and select any one of my threads located on my roster. Everything I have ever written on the Omniverse is there for you to chose from, from oldest to latest and it's been a while since I had some really constructive critique, so, hit me with it!
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First off, Sasuke. I appreciate your critique on my thread so I think I'll repay you with some of my critique.
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Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)
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Anyone? Anyone at all? =/
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Because you are you....i will take some time out of my busy gaming schedule tonight and write something down ^^
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@Sasuke: Though, in all seriousness, you're one of the more popular writers on the site. I'm glad you've become a regular. <3
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