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Hana Song (D.Va)
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Character name: Hana Song (alias D.Va)

Character source: Overwatch (Blizzard's Game)

Character history:
(Not written by myself, almost straight copy paste from Blizzard with minor edits to tenses as well as the addition of the ending.)

D.Va was a former professional gamer who now uses her skills to pilot a state-of-the-art mech in defense of her homeland.

Twenty years ago, South Korea was attacked by a colossal omnic monstrosity that rose from the depths of the East China Sea. The massive, lumbering construct caused catastrophic damage to coastal cities before it was driven back beneath the waves. In response, the South Korean government developed a mechanized armored drone unit, called MEKA, to protect urban environments in future engagements with the omnic threat.

The government's fears proved to be well founded, as a disturbing pattern of attacks emerged. Every few years, the monstrosity would rise from the sea to assault South Korea and its neighbors. The omnic learned from these encounters, often reconfiguring itself in a different form and appearing with new weapons and capabilities. Each incident ended in a stalemate, with the monstrosity defeated but not destroyed.

As the omnic continued to adapt, it eventually disrupted MEKA's drone-control networks, forcing the military to place pilots in the mechs. Scrambling to find suitable candidates, the government turned to the country's professional gamers, who possessed the necessary reflexes and instincts to operate the mechs' advanced weapons systems. Top stars were drafted, including reigning world champion Hana Song, also known as "D.Va." Famous for her elite skills, D.Va was a fierce competitor who played to win at all costs, and she had a well-earned reputation for showing no mercy to her opponents.

D.Va saw her new mission as a game, fearlessly charging into battle alongside the rest of her MEKA unit, ready to spring to her nation's defense at a moment's notice. She used to stream her combat operations to her adoring fans, and she used to have a status of a global icon due to the size of her following.

It was at this point, that the omnic attacked Korea once more, and the MEKA were deployed to combat the threat. It was after that fight, as the MEKA were celebrating their victory over the repeating threat and Hana was handing out autographs as well as interviews, that she herself, as well as the machine she piloted, vanished with a bright flash of light. After that, she hasn’t been seen or heard of by anyone.


Physical Description: (originals only)
Reference image:
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Stats:
Mech Form
ATK: 2
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 3
The mech Hana operates. It should be said, that the mech is made from a highly durable material, however, considering it’s a mechanical construct, it has all kinds of joints, that make it possible for stronger beings to possibly tear it apart, for example ripping one of the arms off.

Reference Image:
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Pilot Form
ATK: 1
DEF: 0
SPD: 4
TEC: 5
Hana herself, the pilot of the Mech. An agile young woman with lightning reflexes and a quick wit.


Starting Proficiencies:
Ranged Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
Master Acrobat (400 OM)
Super Jump 30m (500 OM)
Alternate Form - Pilot (2000 OM)

Starting Moves:
Fusion Cannons (Mech Form) (300 OM)
Hanas mech is armed with two fusion cannons that each have three barrels and function via energy, shooting laser-like projectiles that travel with high speed in a rapid fashion, much like a minigun. The specialty about the cannons is, that they require high skill from their operator, each single shot requiring manual execution.
Their range is mediocre at best, as the bullets start to spread out wider and wider, the further the target is, making it to be difficult to land shots into targets at a longer distance.
The cannons operate with the energy provided by the mechs powercore, so they do not require ammunition or reloading.
Reference Video

HB50 Light Gun (Pilot Form) (300 OM)
Hana is equipped with a light, pink coloured pistol designed to protect her should she be separated from her mech.
She usually keeps it on the belt upon her waist, with the reloader right next to it. The weapon functions with energy, shooting laser-like projectiles with high speed and accuracy. The reloader is used to store and charge the empty magazine, whilst she can use the other, charged one to protect herself.
The reloader holds ten full magazine charges, after which Hana has to charge it within the Mech.
Hana carries three magazines with her, one of which is stored in the gun, whilst the other two are stored at the reloader, ready to be swapped out when the magazine in the gun runs out.
The pistol is accurate even at long ranges, if the user has the necessary skills and experience to operate the weapon in such a manner.
There’s also a phone-charm like chain with a pink bunny head hanging from the handle of the gun, decorating it in a cute fashion.
Reference Video

Reference Image
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Alexyana, a friend of mine here on the site, told me about it.
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#2
Hi Hana welcome to the Omniverse! I'm glad Alexyana got you to join us Smile

Just a couple of issues. Nothing too major, just a few minor tweaks.

Alternate forms aren't unlocked until level 2 (which is pretty easy to get if you're decently active). In the mean time you'll have to go with just one form. <!-- l --><a class="postlink-local" href="http://omniverse-rpg.com/assistsandtransformations.php#Assists_And_Transformations">assistsandtransformations.php#Assists_And_Transformations</a><!-- l -->

I can't watch the videos for your moves so I have to go off the descriptions.

Fusion Cannons - How fast is the firerate on these and about how far is effective range? I know you said the range is mediocre, but concrete terms help people understand the full capabilities of your moves. I'd also recommend adding some kind of drawback beyond the shorter range and skill required to use them. Perhaps a spin-up time or a decrease in D.va's mobility? That way the bullets can pack a decent amount of punch, because with a high firerate and no need to reload the bullets themselves would have to be pretty weak to compensate.

HB50 Light Gun - How fast is the firerate and how about far is the effective range? Again, just to help people understand using concrete terms. Other than that this looks good to me.
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Hey!
Thank you for reading through, I'm glad it seems good so far!
As for the mistakes!
Oh, damn, it seems some information I've failed to copy paste, I actually had most of the pistol's things written down already, it seems I just forgot them from here, sorry about that. So, here they are with the changes, right below the next bit!

About the alternate form, I'm sorry, I must've missed that. I guess I'll scrap the pilot form for now, and ehm, save the OM to buy it right away @ level 2. I also have a super move planned that requires it anyway.

Move changes/additions:

Fusion Cannons (Mech Form) (300 OM)
Hanas mech is armed with two fusion cannons that each have three barrels and function via energy, shooting laser-like projectiles that travel with high speed in a rapid fashion, much like a minigun. The specialty about the cannons is, that they require high skill from their operator, each single shot requiring manual execution.
The cannons are designed for close to medium range combat, this means that beyond 15 meters, most bullets will miss a human-sized foe.
It should also be noted, that both cannons can be fired separately, but that firing them slows the mechs movement down. Each cannon slows her by a considerable amount. (Approximately 33% per cannon, so 66% slower when/if firing both.) One more thing worth of mentioning, is that during movement, the cannons drop in accuracy to about 10 meters, from the normal 15.

The cannons operate with the energy provided by the mechs powercore, so they do not require ammunition or reloading.

HB50 Light Gun (Pilot Form) (300 OM)
Hana is equipped with a light, pink coloured pistol designed to protect her should she be separated from her mech. The weapon functions with energy, shooting laser-like projectiles with high speed and accuracy. The pistol much like the mech cannons, requires manual execution for each shot.
She usually keeps it on the belt upon her waist, with the reloader right next to it. The reloader is used to store and charge the empty magazine, whilst she can use the other, charged one to protect herself.
The reloader holds ten full magazine charges, after which Hana has to charge it within the Mech.
Hana carries three magazines with her, one of which is stored in the gun, whilst the other two are stored at the reloader, ready to be swapped out when the magazine in the gun runs out.
The pistol is accurate even at long ranges, if the user has the necessary skills and experience to operate the weapon in such a manner.
There’s also a phone-charm like chain with a pink bunny head hanging from the handle of the gun, decorating it in a cute fashion.

Magazine capacity: 20 ammunition/charges
Fire rate: 7/second 21/3 seconds. (So it takes about 3 seconds to empty a clip, if she decides to shoot it as fast as she can.)
Range: Accurate up to 30-35 meters, if the user has the required skill and experience to operate the weapon. At about 20-35 meter distances, the user has to aim, which means they have to move slower, or come to a complete halt in order for the weapon to retain it’s accuracy. After 35 meters, the accuracy decreases heavily and the projectiles lose effectiveness.
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Quote:Alternate Forms – 2000 OM per
Alternate forms allow you to completely change your base stats – for example, to emphasize speed or power. You can switch in and out of Alternate Forms at will during a fight (the speed of which depends on the SPD of your current form – this takes around five seconds with 0 SPD, a couple of seconds with 5 SPD, or practically instantaneously as SPD exceeds 10) – it does not require an OOC notification like any other Transformation. Additionally, switching to an alternate form does not disable your Power-Ups, so you may sustain a particular Power-Up while switching between multiple forms.

Just like your base form, an alternate form has 10 stats which may be distributed as you wish, with one caveat – no single stat may exceed 5. You choose these when you purchase the alternate form.

Alternate forms are available at level 1. No where in that rule segment does it say you can't have one. In fact, my alt Grimlock got approved with an alternate form for his T-Rex mode. Grimlock's Roster is here.
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After reconvening with Proto, it appears that Trixie is indeed correct despite the rules being a bit murky. Sorry about the misinformation, the alternate form is a-go!

The moves look good to me now.

So you are approved!

Name: Hana Song
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