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The First Avenger Returns
#1
Character name: Captain America (Steve Rogers)


Character source: Marvel Comics


Character history:
A true Living Legend, Captain America has experienced a World War, a Civil War and an Infinity War. This version of Cap is taken from just before the Marvel Now installations. He is primarily drawn from the stories written by Ed Brubaker.


Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:1
SPD:3
TEC:3


Starting Proficiencies:


Physical Strength-1000 OM


Ranged Proficiency-1000 OM


Debuff Proficiency-1000 OM


Burst Movement- 800 OM


Starting Powers:


Starting Moves:


Shield Throw (Ranged Proficiency) 300:
Cap flings his shield forward, trusting in his tactical awareness to guide his throw. It can ricochet off of a single object or enemy before  returning to his hand with superhuman accuracy.


Charging Star (Physical Proficiency) 300:
 With a burst of speed, Cap dashes forward, shield held before him like a battering ram. He can move up to 50 ft within 3 seconds. It can leave him mildly winded.


Vibranium Shield (Physical Proficiency) 300:
 Composed of a balance of steel alloys, adamantium, vibranium, and Uru metals, Cap’s shield is virtually unbreakable. It can absorb powerful impacts, dispersing the vibrations and protecting Cap from powerful attacks. It can be used as a melee weapon, and to defend against and deflect attacks. It measures in at 2.5 ft. in diameter and weighs 12 lbs. It can be fitted on his arm or strapped onto his back.


Super Move - Crippling Strike (Physical Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) 600:
 Utilizing his enhanced senses and tactical awareness, Captain America notices and exploits a moment of weakness, delivering a crushing blow with enough force to weaken his enemy’s reaction time and endurance. This attack is powerful enough to damage stone. This strike can drain Cap substantially, given the massive amount of effort put behind it. The disorientation lasts for a minute or so, depending on his opponent’s durability.


I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.


Where did you find us?
I've been here before, but i originally found you guys browsing on Google.


So I made this character beforehand, even submitting a sheet like this. However, I became inactive rather soon due to personal issues. I hope I can get back into the swing of things, despite my newbie status.
From Hawaii, With Love
[Image: W4PxwDv.jpg]
"Joe: You're gonna get the most dramatic entrance, dramaticc with two c's
Dust: you know what else has two C's?
Joe: What?
Dust: chicken nuggets"
#2
Why are you submitting a new joining form? isn't your character already approved? From like... 10 months ago. Did you want to start over?
#3
(06-30-2016, 09:45 AM)Daniel Wrote: Why are you submitting a new joining form? isn't your character already approved? From like... 10 months ago. Did you want to start over?

Kind of, yes. I talked to a friend and he suggested that I do this. I got stuck i the middle of a really short story with someone that no longer exists, so I honestly want to completely reboot what I was doing. Plus, now that I talked to some people, I have a better understanding of the moves system, so I added some things that weren't there before.
From Hawaii, With Love
[Image: W4PxwDv.jpg]
"Joe: You're gonna get the most dramatic entrance, dramaticc with two c's
Dust: you know what else has two C's?
Joe: What?
Dust: chicken nuggets"
#4
You're missing a stat

Shield Throw - You need to state how far Cap can throw his shield.

Charging Star - I'm assuming that you're using burst movement with this, if so, please list it as a requirement.

Super Move - Even on a super move, A debuff that lasts for a minute is too long, please lower the time significantly.

You've spent too much OM. You only get the starting 5K but you've spent 5300.
#5
Character source: Marvel Comics


Character history:
A true Living Legend, Captain America has experienced a World War, a Civil War and an Infinity War. This version of Cap is taken from just before the Marvel Now installations. He is primarily drawn from the stories written by Ed Brubaker.


Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:2
SPD:3
TEC:3


Starting Proficiencies:


Physical Strength-1000 OM


Ranged Proficiency-1000 OM


Debuff Proficiency-1000 OM


Starting Powers:

Burst Movement-800 OM

Starting Moves:


Shield Throw (Ranged Proficiency) 300:
Cap flings his shield forward, trusting in his tactical awareness to guide his throw. It can ricochet off of a single object or enemy before returning to his hand with superhuman accuracy.He can throw his shield up to 25 ft.

Vibranium Shield (Physical Proficiency) 300:
Composed of a balance of steel alloys, Adamantium, Vibranium, and Uru metals, Cap’s shield is virtually unbreakable. It can absorb powerful impacts, dispersing the vibrations and protecting Cap from powerful attacks. It can be used as a melee weapon, and to defend against and deflect attacks. It measures in at 2.5 ft. in diameter and weighs 12 lbs. It can be fitted on his arm or strapped onto his back.


Super Move - Crippling Strike (Physical Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) 600:
Utilizing his enhanced senses and tactical awareness, Captain America notices and exploits a moment of weakness, delivering a crushing blow with enough force to weaken his enemy’s reaction time and endurance. This attack is powerful enough to damage stone. This strike can drain Cap substantially, given the massive amount of effort put behind it. The disorientation lasts for up to 10 seconds, depending on his opponent’s durability.


I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.


Where did you find us?
I've been here before, but i originally found you guys browsing on Google.
From Hawaii, With Love
[Image: W4PxwDv.jpg]
"Joe: You're gonna get the most dramatic entrance, dramaticc with two c's
Dust: you know what else has two C's?
Joe: What?
Dust: chicken nuggets"
#6
Super Move - 10 seconds is probably a little too low for a super move, you could make it 15 seconds.
#7
(07-01-2016, 07:55 PM)Daniel Wrote: Super Move - 10 seconds is probably a little too low for a super move, you could make it 15 seconds.

Character source: Marvel Comics


Character history:
A true Living Legend, Captain America has experienced a World War, a Civil War and an Infinity War. This version of Cap is taken from just before the Marvel Now installations. He is primarily drawn from the stories written by Ed Brubaker.


Stats:
ATK:2
DEF:2
SPD:3
TEC:3


Starting Proficiencies:


Physical Strength-1000 OM


Ranged Proficiency-1000 OM


Debuff Proficiency-1000 OM


Starting Powers:

Burst Movement-800 OM

Starting Moves:


Shield Throw (Ranged Proficiency) 300: 
Cap flings his shield forward, trusting in his tactical awareness to guide his throw. It can ricochet off of a single object or enemy before returning to his hand with superhuman accuracy.He can throw his shield up to 25 ft. 

Vibranium Shield (Physical Proficiency) 300: 
Composed of a balance of steel alloys, Adamantium, Vibranium, and Uru metals, Cap’s shield is virtually unbreakable. It can absorb powerful impacts, dispersing the vibrations and protecting Cap from powerful attacks. It can be used as a melee weapon, and to defend against and deflect attacks. It measures in at 2.5 ft. in diameter and weighs 12 lbs. It can be fitted on his arm or strapped onto his back.


Super Move - Crippling Strike (Physical Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) 600:
Utilizing his enhanced senses and tactical awareness, Captain America notices and exploits a moment of weakness, delivering a crushing blow with enough force to weaken his enemy’s reaction time and endurance. This attack is powerful enough to damage stone. This strike can drain Cap substantially, given the massive amount of effort put behind it. The disorientation lasts for up to 15 seconds, depending on his opponent’s durability.


I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.


Where did you find us?
I've been here before, but i originally found you guys browsing on Google.
From Hawaii, With Love
[Image: W4PxwDv.jpg]
"Joe: You're gonna get the most dramatic entrance, dramaticc with two c's
Dust: you know what else has two C's?
Joe: What?
Dust: chicken nuggets"
#8
Name: Captain America
Level: 1
Spent OM: 5000
Proficiencies: (3000); Physical Strength (1000), Debuff Proficiency (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers: (800/8000), Burst Movement (800)
Moves: (600); Shield Throw (300), Vibranium shield (300)
Super Moves: T1 Super Move – Crippling Strike (600)
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 3


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