Inlumia

[Inlumia]

Name: Inlumia

Character Source: Original (Testing out a character idea for a webcomic)

Character history:
Inlumia is a wondering Shadow Mage, trained in necromancy, Shadow Magic and Demonology. However, coming to the Omniverse weakened his power.
He is a devoted follower of the School of the Dark, which despite it's name is a very nice group who seeks to aid those
cast out into the darkness by society as a whole. He is a trickster, a schemer and a chaotic who loves to see what he can stir up. He can also be bloody stubborn when it comes to battle of wills.
He also carries a Katana with him. When he came to the Omniverse he managed to focus his will on the sword so much Omni let him keep it, at a price of 1000 OM

Appearance: Nondescript. His clothing is just dark enough to blend with shadows, but bright enough to not make it look
like he was trying to. They are plain enough to avoid drawing attention, but also stylish and fashionable enough to not make him considered unacceptable at high society functions.
His hair is a shade some would call dirty blond, and others a light black. He is about 6 foot tall.

He carries a Katana with him at all times.

Powers (1100):
(burst movement; basic 800)
He can channel his spiritual power through his Katana, letting him strike at twice the normal speed he would use
He can call one of his totems for increased speed for short periods and to jump very high (super jumping; basic; 300)

Dead Man's tales: (purely RP) He can sense, and communicate with spirits. If they agree, he can bind them to something linked to them, their deaths or their graves and carry them with him. He intends to help them find peace, or to recruit them to his faith, depending on what he considers best for them. (The fact he can speak with them while others can't see them can lead to people thinking he is talking to himself, or insane.)

Proficiencies (1000):
Physical

Moves (600):
Katana (300) Skilled with using his katana
Duel daggers (300) Skilled with using daggers in a fight (not including using them as throwing daggers.)

Spent:2700 (3700 if you include the Katana at the start, which I do)

Items: Dark clothing
1 Katana

Stats
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

[Omni]

Hi there!

Powers, proficiencies and items are limited to those you can find on those pages. You'll want the Physical Strength proficiency (1000 OM) and the Stealth Power (1200 OM). Moves are where you make up your own stuff, including original items like katanas. See Moves for more info.

For Shadow Walk as a move you will need one of these powers: Disassemble, Phasing or Teleportation. Teleportation will be needed if you want to disappear from one shadow and reappear from another somewhere else.

Dead Man's Tales is free so long as it's just for roleplaying fodder.

Sword Spirit looks like a Power-Up. You can't buy Power-Ups until you hit level 2, I'm afraid.

Soul Wound is too overpowered. See the moves pages for more details on balancing attacks.

Please go through the list again and make a new sheet. I'd recommend a thorough read of the rules pages. More details on your character's appearance (hair colour, height etc) would also be appreciated unless you'd prefer to find a character picture.

[Inlumia]

Found those parts just after my first post and edited in a quick notice up top saying I made a mistake and to hold of reviewing it. Your post came up while I was fixing, so you probably found it just before the first edit.

I have greatly changed it to get things into proper order, and the only thing I am not sure about in Small Blades. Just as I am typing this it occurred to me I might have to make it 600 OM, due to the fact that 2 blades can be used at once.

[Omni]

Most of it looks good now.

For Small Blades, you can have two blades at once count as a single 300 OM move. For example, you could have 'Dual Daggers' be a single move at 300 OM. However, you can only have one type of weapon per move. Daggers and scalpels would be two different moves, for example, costing 300 OM each (or under the same move for 600 OM). Also, if you want some of the blades to be throwable, you'll need the Ranged Proficiency. You should have plenty left over if you want to buy those.

I'll let you decide what to do and rework your sheet. Just let me know when you're ready.

[Inlumia]

Just the fighting daggers

[Omni]

Bam. Here is your roster. Please copy and paste it to a new topic in the rosters forum entitled Inlumia. I'll change your account name. Welcome to the Omniverse!

Name: Inlumia
Level: 1
Spent OM: 2700
Proficiencies: (1000) Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (1100) Burst Movement (800), Basic Super Jumping (300)
Moves: (600) Katana (300), Dual Daggers (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

[Inlumia]

Um, you missed Super Jumping (300) in powers

[Omni]

Ah, right, missed the extra bits there. Added.