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Joining as "Makoto Yuki"
#1
Character name: Makoto Yuki

Character source: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3 FES

Character history:

Makoto Yuki's life has changed drastically in the past year or so. More than he would have ever thought it would.

What had originally seemed to be the start of another boring year, spent attending another boring school quickly proved to be so much more.

Shadows.

Rejected parts of the human psyche, given form and set free to feast on the minds of those unfortunate enough to be able to perceive their presence.

But all hope was not lost. There existed a certain group of people, capable of utilizing the only weapon that is effective against the darkness that nests in the human hearts.

Said weapon?

Persona.

And this group? They called themselves S.E.E.S.

And he misses them. Damn, does he miss them.

That year proved to be the most important year in his life, in addition to being the last year in said life.

He met his family in that year. They lived together under the same roof, fought together under the same banner, yet he would not allow them to die together.

So he gave up his life to protect theirs'.

Sacrificing his very soul to act as the golden seal, separating Nyx, The Mother Goddess of The Night, and Erebus, The Manifestation of Humanity's Collective Grief.

If they were allowed to come in contact with each other ever again, all life on Earth would fall.

Heh, guess that's why it's called the fall?

But such trivial thoughts hold little value to the soul laying withing the stone statue in the ethereal realm of the Sea of Souls.

He can only wait.

For the end of everything, perhaps? Or the less likely future where humanity gets rid of its pain, grief and misery.

But until either of these possibilities occur, he was trapped there in his gilded cage which he himself created.

Or at least that's what he thought

Physical Description:
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Stats:

ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies:

-Physical Strength – 1000 OM
-Ranged Proficiency – 1000 OM
-Area Attack Proficiency – 600 OM
-Ranged Materialize Proficiency – 600 OM

Starting Powers:

None.

Starting Moves:

-Lucifer's Blade (600 OM)(Physical Strength):

A magical weapon crafted from the essence of Lucifer himself. A 1.2m long sword with a 1m long blade.
It's light, sturdy and has a sharp double edge and a pointy tip. It's most suitable for flurries of slashes and thrusts, as it's built for speed and maximizing damage through targeting the opponent's weak spots and vital organs. As such it's lacking in weight and opponents with strong defenses are hard to handle.

However is it's made from Lucifer's very own essence, it can be temporarily shrouded by a layer of hellfire, adding an amount of fire damage to the weapon's physical. It can only be used for short bursts, each a precious 5 seconds, so it's best suited for surprise attacks or attacking during an enemy's moment of distraction. In addition it can only be used 5 times in any battle, as it would consume too much of his energy otherwise.

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-Agidyne (600)(Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency):

An explosion of fire, remotely set off by Makoto. It's not especially powerful, but on the flipside the energy required is a relatively small amount and it can be used many times before tiring Makoto. It has a maximum effective range of approximately 60 meters. Casting speed is almost instantaneous, and it can be used against enemies which Makoto can see, or if they're invisible or otherwise hidden from his sight, he will try to estimate their location, using their last known one, though this doesn't always work.. Still and unmoving enemies will almost always be caught in its blast, while moving targets are trickier. Makoto usually tries to predict their current path and cast Agidyne to intercept them, but this doesn't always work against speedier opponents. It can be used against a single target resulting in a powerfull explosion, or affect a bigger area, reducing it's damage but also increasing it's usefulness against weaker enemies or as a distraction.

-Omnipotent Orb (600)(Tier 1 Super Defensive Move):

A magical orb of infinite power, given to him by Elizabeth after battling and defeating her at the top level of the Monad Block, itself the most dangerous block of Tartarus. In his world, the Omnipotent Orb would nullify all physical, magical and elemental damage inflicted on him, with the only exception being damage that's divine in origin. Upon his entrance to the Omniverse however, Omni saw fit to severely limit its effectiveness. Now while it still retains its ability to nullify damage, it currently only possesses one "charge" to be used in battle, giving the user a second or two of unconditional invincibility, effectively blocking one attack of comparable power (Tier 1 Attack). While it's in use, Makoto's body is enveloped by a faint purple aura. Magical and elemental attacks disperse harmlessly upon coming in contact with this envelope, while physical ones lose all momentum and stop suddenly.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

Follow the rules and don't be an ass, got it.
#2
Agidyne doesn't require Ranged Proficiency. Other than that, though, you are approved. Let me know if you want to remove Ranged Proficiency. Otherwise, here is the form:

Name: Makoto Yuki
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4400
Proficiencies: (3200); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600)
Powers:
Moves: (1200); Lucifer's Blade (600), Agidyne (600)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Make a new thread in the Roster forum and copy paste the above form in the first post. I highly recommend using that thread to make additional posts with detailed information regarding your character. I also recommend reading this before doing anything else. Any future purchases will be done here.

Thank you for joining the Omniverse and I hope you will have a pleasant stay here! Smile
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- Carl Gustav Jung

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#3
Just a correction: Agidyne would require Ranged proficiency.

Can I ask that you put its chargeup/activation time in the description?
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#4
Oh, right. Sorry, I was being silly there for a second.
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"To confront a person with his shadow is to show him his own light. "
- Carl Gustav Jung

Ezrihel Wrote:I'm so glad DL linked it
#5
Is this better? Did I do the Super move correctly?
#6
The defence is fine. Given that your attack is a near-instant ranged materialise you need to mention that it's not too strong or say something like "it can very quickly tire him out if used in quick succession". That would balance it.
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#7
If I used your provided example "it can very quickly tire him out if used in quick succession", would it only tire him out if used multiple times rapidly, but not multiple times over the course of the battle, as long as it had a small cooldown period? Do you have any suggestions about how long said period should be?
#8
Well everything will tire you out, the implication is that a move which can be used instantaneously at very little downside is going to be quite draining. Cooldown isn't going to make much difference but you can add one if you want.
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#9
Yes, I meant for example with that particular weakness, it would quickly tire me out if I used the attack three times rapidly, but if used sparingly it would tire me out after five or six attacks, would that work? How would I write that in the description?
#10
I just meant it as an example of how you could write it. Because I mean there's short-term fatigue, where you can catch your breath, and then there's long-term fatigue accrued over the course of a battle. That's what I was thinking of.
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#11
How about if every attack resulted in some short term fatigue, so if used multiple times one after the other, it would exhaust him physically, while if he used one then only fought with his sword till he was ready to use it again, then it would to take a larger number of attacks before he reached the same level of exhaustion. So fewer attacks in a short period of time vs greater number of attacks over the course of the entire battle, though both would produce a large amount of fatigue, the kind that that can't be dealt with in mid-battle (aside from healing or buffs maybe?).

I just used your example of a weakness because it looked like it would fit well, with the move. Should I think of another one?
#12
Edited to hopefully balance Agidyne a bit more.
#13
Bump. (Is this being rude? Should I not do this?)
#14
If it's been a few days ...

It looks fine now. You're good to go. Make sure to read this before posting, and enjoy yourself Smile
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#15
Awesome. About the roster form, it should be different from what Dark Link gave me right?
#16
I'll just edit it with the relevant information and you can tell me later if I messed something up.
#17
Ah yeah.

Name: Makoto Yuki
Level: 1
Spent OM: 5000
Proficiencies: (3200); Physical Strength (1000), Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600)
Powers:
Moves: (1200); Lucifer's Blade (600), Agidyne (600)
Super Moves: (600); Tier 1 Super Defense - Omnipotent Orb (600)
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2
Curious about me and the characters I play? See the 'Staff' page! See also the rosters for my characters Samus Aran or Enel if you'd like to see examples of well-formatted rosters. Hope you enjoy the Omniverse!


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