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Axorn, King of the Draconians
#1
Character name:
Axorn Gonin

Character source:
Original, used in previous role-plays on other sites

Character history:
Axorn is from Tranquility, a future version of the Earth as we know it. The continents of the world have reformed over time into a new Pangaea-like landmass with small islands off to the side. The world has an array of technology used by it's inhabitants ranging from medieval to futuristic.

Axorn was born under Draconian King Shlone and Draconian Queen Breala. He had a brother named Kronax, who was 10 years older than Axorn. During the first five years of his life he lived a happy and innocent life with his family and grew an interest in human machinery and technology, much like his older brother Kronax. Together, they were able to create a powerful sword that was able to fire crystals that when activated, cause the cells of the living thing they're touching to kill themselves. They also were able to steal blueprints for a powerful armor from the Dragons, which they built and named "Dragonweave" armor. His happy life was about to take a drastic turn as the tensions between the Dragons and the Draconians were brewing and the two parties were on the verge of war. The only thing preventing it was that neither Breala nor the Dragon Queen at the time, Issilda, wished to engage in battle. Shlone, having a general hatred of dragons, used her sly tongue to trick Breala into declaring war on the dragons by saying that one of her eggs had been stolen by the Dragons even though he had actually hidden the egg and someone had found it and taken it somewhere.

After Axorn and Kronax heard the news, they quickly set to work creating weapons and armor for the Draconians. Kronax decided that he was going to the front lines with the sword and armor they had created together. Due to this, they decided to name the sword "Dragonsbane". As the war progressed, Axorn continued to distribute custom weapons and armor to the rest of the Draconians. After two long years of war, Kronax decided to try to single-handedly end it by pinning Issilda. Sadly, because of his arrogance he died without even getting near the Dragon Queen on the field of battle. When Breala heard the news, she was even more determined to defeat the Dragons and win the war, but, one of the Draconians found her missing child and showed her a picture of the child. When she saw the picture and recognized all the royal features, she signed a peace treaty with the Dragons and ordered Shlone to be executed for his treachery.

Afterwards, Axorn blamed the death of his brother on himself, thinking that if he had been strong enough to participate in the war, he could have saved his brother. He left the kingdom and wandered the world, training with the powerful Draconian nomads that left the kingdom long ago because of the corruption and hatred of Dragons in it's system. There, he learned how to control the temperature of his fire, and learned how to augment either his human or Dragon DNA to change himself into one of them.

When Axorn returned to the kingdom he learned that the rest of the Queen's eggs had either been duds or were born with defects that resulted in their death. Thus, he has no brothers or sisters.

Axorn joined the army and quickly rose to the top ranks, but after seeing that the army took up all of his time and he had none of his own, he left.

Axorn then had many adventures on his own exploring the world of Tranquility. He later returned to the kingdom briefly when he learned that his brother's body had been found. He took the sword, Dragonsbane and swore an oath that he would fight to keep the balance of the world.

Later, his mother died, almost releasing a Darkling into the world. Thankfully, one of Axorn's Dragon friends was able to destroy the newborn Darkling by tossing it into a black hole.

Axorn has thus become the Draconian King, giving him new responsibilities.

Axorn had heard rumors of people with unique abilities or high positions of power disappearing without a trace. Thus, he made preparations within the kingdom in case he disappeared as well.

Axorn was taking a 1 week vacation from his duties by himself at a small house he had built on a deserted island near a lake. One day, he was sitting peacefully by the lake when the world suddenly went black as he was transported into the Omniverse.

Physical Description: (originals only)
[Image: dragon_by_koutanagamori-d3i8z1h.jpg]

Axorn is a draconian, a half-human half-dragon creature that can be summed up as a bi-pedal dragon. He is a fire draconian, and as such he has red scales and uses the element of fire. Axorn is 6' 2" tall and is about 1' 3" wide. His total wingspan is 7' 3". His feet and hands have claws, and he normally wears leather armor not because of the slight defense boost, but because of the amount of pockets it has for items. Despite the fact that the picture doesn't quite show it, he has a tail.

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies: 2600
Physical Strength (1000)
Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Remote Control Proficiency (600)

Starting Powers: 1800
Flight (1800)

Starting Moves: 600
Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration, will disintegrate anything within a 3cm radius of itself before disintegrating itself. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
#2
(P.S. the account name is King Axorn)
#3
Hi Welcome to the Omniverse!

Your history looks good!

For your move we prefer not to have such concrete words like "disintegrate" since it really wouldn't have the effect on primes in the Omniverse. If you could rephrase that into something less powerful that would be great.
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#4
What I meant by the 'disintegrate within 3cm of itself' was that if my character shot you in the leg, and was able to hold his concentration long enough, it would pretty much just sever your leg. But, I'll fix it anyway.

Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration, will create an explosion of fire, thus burning anything within it's 3cm radius before the crystal disintegrates. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.
#5
The description is a bit vague. How long does it have to concentrate for? Or is it a variable thing, with longer periods of concentration resulting in greater power output?
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#6
That longer concentration resulting in greater output thing sounds good, thanks for the idea!

Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration, will create an explosion of fire, thus burning anything within it's 3cm radius before the crystal disintegrates. The longer the concentration (Minimum 1 minute), the greater the heat of the fire. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.
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"If you truly want to save the world, you'll need to withstand it's flames."
#7
It is a good idea, but variability increases the cost of the move by three hundred. You cool with that?
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#8
I don't have enough OM XD.

I'll save that for a later date but for now:

Dragonsbane: (600) (Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)
Dragonsbane is a powerful gunblade created by Axorn with a moderate weight. It can either be used for melee attacks or can have a sharp crystal fired from the tip which, after activated from a long period of concentration (About 1 minute), will create an explosion of fire, thus burning anything within it's 3cm radius before the crystal disintegrates. The sword can only hold 12 crystals at a time, and has a large recoil, forcing the user to plant their feet before firing if they don't want to fall over.
[Image: Axorn_zpsiipqunna.png]

"If you truly want to save the world, you'll need to withstand it's flames."
#9
Approved at the suggested price. You are free to begin role-playing once you've read the other sticky topic in the joining forum about what to do (and what NOT to do ...!). A mod will be along to post your roster in the soon times. Good luck and have fun! :frogbon:
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#10
Approved!!! Since we have a move similar to that seen here


Name: King Axorn
Level: 1
Spent OM:5000
Proficiencies(2000)Tonguehysical Proficiency (1000) Ranged Proficiency(1000) Remote Control Proficiency(600)
Powers(2800): Flight(1800)
Moves(600): Dragonsbane
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 2

Make a roster in the Roster Forum, copy and paste the above and make that the first post of your roster. The second reply should contain all the core information of your character(Look at the profile of an active member to see what I'm talking about)

Here's a topic to help you along: What to Do Once You've Been Approved

Remember that your first post should be in the Nexus after you've been taken by Omni, and all future purchases should go in a log that I shall set up shorty.

Once you get activated you're good to go! Enjoy the Omniverse!
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