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01-16-2018, 09:30 PM
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(01-16-2018, 01:25 PM)Albert Wesker Wrote: ring, ring
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Albert Wesker
Total character count including spaces: 46,796 (according to wordcounter.net)
Total word count: 8,283 (according to wordcounter.net)
Exemplary writing bonus granted!
Albert Wesker: 935.92 OM!
Will update your log in a second. Log updated!
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Link: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=3100
Characters:28114
Words:5146
Comments:The story of a man from a far future having to adapt to a fantasy world is always a fun thing to see.
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Ivy
Quest or Personal: Personal
Participating Characters: Isolda van Harnburg (NPC), assorted NPC secondaries.
Total Character Count: 47658
Total Word Count: 8185
Posts: 105
Threads: 11
Joined: Sep 2015
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01-24-2018, 09:03 PM
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(01-23-2018, 10:10 AM)Revan Noctis Wrote: Link:http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=3100
Characters:28114
Words:5146
Comments:The story of a man from a far future having to adapt to a fantasy world is always a fun thing to see.
Please follow the format provided in the first post of this topic.
(01-23-2018, 11:26 AM)King Ghidorah Wrote: Ivy
Quest or Personal: Personal
Participating Characters: Isolda van Harnburg (NPC), assorted NPC secondaries.
Total Character Count: 47658
Total Word Count: 8185
Exemplary writing bonus granted! This was super enjoyable, I loved all of these characters omg.
King Ghidorah: 953.16 OM
Quote:Log updated!
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ANOTHER CITY, ANOTHER TRIP
Group Storyline
Participating characters: Marcus Wright, Dick Howland, Moon Knight, Angel Fisher
Total Words-
Marcus Wright: 689
Dick Howland: 808
Moon Knight: 485
Angel Fisher: 557
Total Characters-
Marcus Wright: 3941
Dick Howland: 3969
Moon Knight: 2729
Angel Fisher: 2,984
Posts: 75
Threads: 14
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Pyrrhic
Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: Dr. Doom and several NPC's
Words: 4578
Characters: 25716
Posts: 89
Threads: 16
Joined: Jan 2017
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01-27-2018, 07:54 PM
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(01-27-2018, 06:56 PM)Moon Knight Wrote: ANOTHER CITY, ANOTHER TRIP
Group Storyline
Participating characters: Marcus Wright, Dick Howland, Moon Knight, Angel Fisher
Total Words-
Marcus Wright: 689
Dick Howland: 808
Moon Knight: 485
Angel Fisher: 557
Total Characters-
Marcus Wright: 3941
Dick Howland: 3969
Moon Knight: 2729
Angel Fisher: 2,984
*painstakingly reconfigures the bonus-cannon for participation grapeshot*
Alrighty! Here we go....
Marcus: +39.41
Angel: +29.84
Moon: +27.29
Dick: +39.69
A more powerful mod we be along to collect the bodies.
Quote:Logs updated! - Jadedit.
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Link to topic (starting with relevant post)
Just need clearance to be allowed to exit the Void to the Nexus, I should be over the 3000 word count :frog:
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(01-31-2018, 08:04 AM)Amaterasu Wrote: Link to topic (starting with relevant post)
Just need clearance to be allowed to exit the Void to the Nexus, I should be over the 3000 word count :frog:
You're good to go!
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01-31-2018, 10:03 PM
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Link to topic
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline.
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer.
Total character count including spaces: Hecate Rothchild (2473 Words, 13,087 Characters.) Warren Zimmer (1906 Words, 10,097 characters.)
Total word count: (Full Word Count combined: 4673.)
Also on a related note, bumping the previous one.
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Link to topic
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer
Total character count including spaces: 30, 187 (Hecate Rothchild) 34, 123 (Warren Zimmer)
Total word count: [i]5512 Words (Hecate) 6433 Words (Warren Zimmer) [/i]
Posts: 126
Threads: 5
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02-06-2018, 09:52 AM
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(01-31-2018, 10:03 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Link to topic
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline.
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer.
Total character count including spaces: Hecate Rothchild (2473 Words, 13,087 Characters.) Warren Zimmer (1906 Words, 10,097 characters.)
Total word count: (Full Word Count combined: 4673.)
Also on a related note, bumping the previous one.
I think you might have missed out a post or two when counting. I got 2695 words/14345 characters for Hecate. And 2200 words/11617 characters for Warren by my count. (Using wordcounter.net).
Anyway. Participation rewards for all (a higher up will give you the OM later).
Hecate: 143.45 OM
Warren: 116.17 OM
Mark Wrote:Updated.
(02-05-2018, 04:17 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Link to topic
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer
Total character count including spaces: 30, 187 (Hecate Rothchild) 34, 123 (Warren Zimmer)
Total word count: 5512 Words (Hecate) 6433 Words (Warren Zimmer)
Your numbers match up this time - so I guess you just missed out a post or two when counting before.
Hecate, I think the main thing keeping you from getting a great bonus for your writing in this thread is a lack of proofreading. There are occasional issues with the cases of letters (including the odd lowercase i), and some missing punctuation (like no full stop/period at the end of your post), and so on. Content-wise, I like what you write, and what you're doing. Your posts aren't hugely long, and there's nothing stopping you from spending maybe another couple of minutes going over them before you hit send.
Warren, are some minor grammatical errors, but your posts are usually tidy. Most are missing commas. You suffer a lot from telling, rather than showing. Sometimes you do both, which leads to unnecessary repetition and breaks the flow of your writing. For example, at the start of your first post, you described Hecate's swords as being impressive. Then, moments later, had Warren say he was impressed. You don't need to do both. You're a fast writer, and I think taking a few extra moments to think before typing could benefit you. You also tend to write down a lot of dialogue at once. I get you want to achieve a lot with your post, and you can Hecate aren't writing each other's characters, but I'd assume you can talk to each other on discord or with PMs to clarify things - maybe have Hecate lean forwards and seem interested, or have her wave her hand signifying Warren to continue. People don't tend to talk to each other with large essays, even when explaining something. Lastly, there's nothing wrong with you adding an extra bit of description to your posts. It's very Warren-centric. Warren did X or Y because he wants Z. Set the scene a little, what does Warren see? Add a bit of extra detail, it can help avoid it being repetitive.
If either of you wants some clarification on anything, feel free to PM me (I might be slow though, I'm balancing this with Uni).
Participation Bonuses (a higher up will give you the OM later):
Hecate: 301.87 OM
Warren: 341.23 OM
Mark Wrote:Updated.
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Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline.
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer
Total character count including spaces: 13,863 (Warren Zimmer) 15,850 (Hecate.)
Total word count: 2606 (Warren Zimmer) 2924 (Hecate)
In quotes is the calculations done by Hecate.
Quote:2,924 words 15,850 charachters for hecate
2,110 words 11,265 characters for warren
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02-08-2018, 10:26 PM
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Submitting an old completed-and-approved quest for writing-bonus evaluation.
Link: Fostering Interspecies Understanding
Quest or Personal: Quest
Participating Characters: King Ghidorah
Total Character Count: 53334
Total Word Count: 9427
Posts: 89
Threads: 16
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02-08-2018, 10:33 PM
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(02-07-2018, 10:03 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Link to topic
Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline.
Participating characters (please list): Hecate Rothchild, Warren Zimmer
Total character count including spaces: 13,863 (Warren Zimmer) 15,850 (Hecate.)
Total word count: 2606 (Warren Zimmer) 2924 (Hecate)
In quotes is the calculations done by Hecate.
Quote:2,924 words 15,850 charachters for hecate
2,110 words 11,265 characters for warren
Hecate missed one of Warrens posts when doing the numbers, and Warren found an extra character somewhere. Other than that, this all looks on the up-and-up.
50% participation bonus all around!
*RUNS YOU BOTH OVER WITH THE BONUS CAR!*
+138.62 For Warren
+158.5 for Hecate
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02-13-2018, 07:35 PM
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Can we have a participation bonus for this, please?
Pummeling a Pest
Personal Storyline
Warren Zimmer: 3007 words, 16279 characters
Dane Regan (Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX): 1961 words, 11329 characters
Storyteller: 619 words, 3627 characters
Participation Bonuses:
Warren Zimmer: 162.79 OM
Dane Regan: 113.29 OM
Storyteller: n/a
Posts: 105
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(02-08-2018, 10:26 PM)King Ghidorah Wrote: Submitting an old completed-and-approved quest for writing-bonus evaluation.
Link: Fostering Interspecies Understanding
Quest or Personal: Quest
Participating Characters: King Ghidorah
Total Character Count: 53334
Total Word Count: 9427
Exemplary Writing bonus granted! Your reward is...
Ghidorah: 1,066.68 OM! Log is updated!
(02-13-2018, 07:35 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: Can we have a participation bonus for this, please?
Pummeling a Pest
Personal Storyline
Warren Zimmer: 3007 words, 16279 characters
Dane Regan (Xx_Yandere_Lo♥er_xX): 1961 words, 11329 characters
Storyteller: 619 words, 3627 characters
Participation Bonuses:
Warren Zimmer: 162.79 OM
Dane Regan: 113.29 OM
Storyteller: n/a
Sure thing! Logs updated!
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Chasing up on a couple of small-ish participation bonuses here.
A-Myst The Forest
Sandy Myst: 1085 words, 5935 characters
Yuuka Kazami (Renko): 518 words, 2825 characters
Dane Regan: 849 words, 4779 characters
China: 2305 words, 12730 characters
Clownpiece: 684 words, 3865 characters
Participation Bonuses:
Sandy Myst: 59.35 OM
Yuuka Kazami: 28.25 OM
Dane Regan: 47.79 OM
China: 127.30 OM
Clownpiece: 38.65 OM
Pacing Themselves
Sandy Myst: 1727 words, 9644 characters
Yuuka Kazami (Renko): 623 words, 3482 characters
Dane Regan: 440 words, 2369 characters
China: 861 words, 4837 characters
Clownpiece: 1104 words, 6282 characters
Participation Bonuses:
Sandy Myst: 96.44 OM
Yuuka Kazami: 34.82 OM
Dane Regan: 23.69 OM
China: 48.37 OM
Clownpiece: 62.82 OM
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02-15-2018, 06:14 AM
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Just submitting some nexus threads for a few bits of OM
Link to topic http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9455 return to the nexus
Storyline
Participating characters; The Emperor and Essent
Total word count; Essent: 1217 and Emps: 981
Total character count; Essent: 6694 and Emps: 5302
Father's blessings http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8396
Story
The Emperor, Erik Vrell, Shay Cormac, Marisa and Alexander Anderson
Shay; 2061 words and 11603 characters
Alexander; 1288 words and 7203 characters
Erik; 321 words and 1813 characters
Emps; 555 words and 2981 characters
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T'is an old thread, but all of the participants are done with it :frogbon: Gibe bonus OM pls.
Link: Genesis of Apotheosis
Quest/Personal Storyline? Personal Storyline for everyone.
Participating characters: Tearen Wover, Strazberry Strazio Rockwell, Gamzee Makara, Dane Regan, Guu, Kelly MacAryn and Malon
Total character/word count: (this was a long thread so I hope I didn't miss any posts or such. Character and word count was obtained using MS Word)
Tearen: 65,752 (11,262 words)
Strazio: 34,760 (6,100 words)
Gamzee: 26,285 (4,849 words)
Dane: 57,836 (9,968 words)
Guu: 15,988 (2,912 words)
Kelly: 32,233 (5,330 words)
Malon: 60,584 (10,896 words)
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