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Olabisi Jana (the actual one)(I finished it I think)
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Character name: Olabisi Jana Kwele ((O la BEE see - Ya na - KWEL ee))

Character source: original

Character history:
Olabisi grew up in a tribe in Kenya called Dambori. She was happy there. When she was 10 her family moved to California because her mother's sister was dying at the hands of an abusive husband...

She hated America with a burning passion because the children were always mean to her and criticized her super short hair, until she grew it out. She figured people didn't like her because she was different and smart. But she cared for knowledge more than people so she went through school with out ever making a friend. The only comfort she ever had was Obadiah-Ishmael, who had come to California a year before her.

She is taken in to the Omnivers in the middle of the night, while she was asleep in her brother's bed.
When she gets to the Omnivers, her only goal is to "find the demon who separated her from her brother, and kill them."


Olabisi is extremely shy. She runs away from people and conversations make her cry. She is also terrified of the male race and physical contact. The only exception is her cousin, Obadiah-Ishmael, who she refers to as "Brother," some times. She also always sleeps in his bed, even though they lived in different houses.

She is also very smart, which come almost too natural. She's a healer (not like a doctor, because she actually has no certified education in medicine) but it's nothing magical.(She uses herbs and things like that. She learned it from her mother, who is the country's healer.) She loves learning and books, and she has skills in many things...

except fighting. She's actually stupidly week. Not to mention she's also partially crippled in a way that she actually can't run with out her ankles giving out, unless she carefully thinks about every movement and step. Also she's kind of blind (but not really) so she kind of relies on her ears more than her eyes. (nothing magical)

She speaks Swahili, French, English, and German.

Physical Description:
Average height, maybe 5'2''. She's really dark, and she has thick, luscious, long, black hair. She has brown eyes, and is pretty curvy. She has a tattoo running from over her heart, to her left thigh. It is basically just a bunch of flowers on a vine.

Stats:
ATK: 1
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies:
Ranged Proficiency

Starting Powers: TBA

Starting Moves:

1)Basically she can bend the 4 elements. As long as they are there she can use them. Except fire, that's made in the stomach (though she does need the sun) There's nothing extra special about the moves. When she hits some one it's just like getting hit by a rock. Or water. Or wind. Or fire.

It can look different any time she uses it:
Water and fire: basically just look like there's a snake of it following her hands, fingers, and/or feet. She can freeze the water (and, you know, throw it like a stick or some thing. or maybe just freeze a puddle so some one can slip. Nothing extravagant.)

(If she were any better she could shift tides and bring tidal waves, or set a valley on fire in one move. But she's not that powerful, really, and that would take too much energy.)

The earth: looks more like little pillars she can pull out of the ground (or where ever there is earth) and bend. Whether it is for her to elevate her self or knock some thing over. She can also break(move/bend) solid rock (but it takes forever 'cause she's weak) with a lot of punching. It's the same thing, just different effects.

The air: well that doesn't look like any thing 'cause you can't see air.

These move does take a lot of concentration the whole time they are being used. (she can't focus, then attack. it doesn't work that way.) But, since she moves the elements with her body, she actually can't do it while standing still. If she wants to throw water at you, she actually has to move to get it done. it's an extremely physical power.

2) "Dunia, moto, maji, hewa." One thing she can do while standing still is energy bending. It takes a lot of concentration, because she is using all the elements at once. However, she is not bending the elements, only the energy she uses to bend the elements. She usually says those words back there and puts her hands out but it is not mandatory.

At it's weaker state it usually takes about 30 seconds to "load." She doesn't usually go past that because she's not very patient.

It usually looks like 4, light green, glowing beams (about five inches wide each) coming from her back, and then meeting at her target. (It still takes aim though. The same amount it woulld take if she were throwing a stick at some one.) When it hits you it's kind of like this over whelming tickling sensation, 'cept, you don't laugh or any thing. (you might) I does hurt, but it really only feels like... say you fell in to a vat of bees but they didn't really sting you, but it felt like they were draining your energy. It doesn't actually drain your energy but that what it feels like. It might knock you over if you didn't see it coming.

((Did I do this right?))


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#2
Hi there!

First thing's first you need to write specifically when your character is taken to the Omniverse

I would suggest rereading <!-- l --><a class="postlink-local" href="http://omniverse-rpg.com/moves.php#Moves">moves.php#Moves</a><!-- l --> but here are some comments about your moves.

Moves need to be more specific, For example, you can't say you can bend elements but instead you can say something around the lines of a fireball or throwing a chunk of rock for a move. It has to be specific, for a good representative of what your looking for you may check out Avatar Aang's roster-----> <!-- l --><a class="postlink-local" href="http://omniverse-rpg.com/viewtopic.php?f=30&t=1709">viewtopic.php?f=30&t=1709</a><!-- l -->

For your second move, I'm kind of confused about what it does? Does it tickle the person? Also tell us how long does it take to charge and you'll need homing proficiency for this one.
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#3
Okay I think I fixed it (n_n)
#4
You would need a move for each specific action like to freeze a puddle would be one move and to send a fireball would be another move. And each move would be at a 300 price in OM. Thanks!
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#5
Mm ok then how do I purchase it again?
#6
Put them in here and I'll approve them with the application
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#7
ok
move earth
move water
freeze water
blow air
make fire

do all those count as separate?
#8
All of these are very vague. Please take another look at the rules about moves or an active person's roster to see what I'm talking about
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#9
I'd recommend reading Aang's roster to see how he does his moves. I'm sure he won't mind (nor is it illegal or immoral) if you use his move set as inspiration for yours.

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