Emerald

[The Dreamer]

Character name:
Emerald

Character source:
Original Character, based in the Steven Universe canon.

Character history:
Emerald is a Gem born a Kindergarten near a heavily forested area. She emerged from the rock much later than others, after those who created her had long since left. What it meant to be a Gem, and how to live as one; both were instilled in her at birth, presumable information implanted by the gems who created her. She took to the forests, now her home, and learn the ways of the animals that lived there, and in every other forest and jungle she lived in throughout her long life. she hadn't much contact with other Gems for most of here centuries of life, up until a point in time where large diamond shaped machine began to crash into the earth, near the forest she currently resided in. Began to moves through the her beloved forest, trashing it in it's wake. She had seen others, other Gems it seemed, take care of previous ones before this, often be Emerald even needed to intervene for fear of her forest. This time they were no where to be seen, so she engaged. By the time it was defeated, she had taken much damage to her gem, and for fear of her life, she had to retreat within to hopefully heal.

When she reawakened, she was standing before a strange humanoid creature in an endless white space. This is where her story of unlimited potential begins.

Physical Description:
Coming Soon.™

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength (1000 OM)
Debuff Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
Basic Regeneration (1300 OM)
Shapeshifting (1400 OM)

Starting Moves:

Emerald Claw Slash (requires Physical Strength) -- 300 OM
Emerald slashes at a target with her emerald claw gauntlets in a quick, sweeping motion, to cause additional damage to armor and flesh, more so than a normal punch could. This move would cause 4-5 moderately deep slashes on the target, about 5 inches in length, spread evenly across a 12 inch wide area of affect. Against Plate-style armor, this causes additional damage to the armor itself, increasing the chance to break or puncture the armor with each additional Emerald Claw Slash. Against Leather, this tears significant holes in the armor, and causes decent damage to the flesh underneath. Against only the target's flesh, or Cloth armor/clothing, this causes the target to bleed, slightly hindering their ability to continue to fight. Additional strike on the target's flesh stack this effect. Against Chainmail-style armor, this move is less effective, as her claws get more caught in the individual right of the mail, overall only doing blunt-force damage of similar strength.
Pros: Additional damage overall. Stacking chance to puncture plate-style armor. Stacking 'Bleed' effect against flesh and light cloth.
Cons: Drastically reduced effectiveness against Chainmail-style armor, akin to a regular punch of the same power. Stacking 'Bleed' effect is reduced against Leather wearing targets.

I'm thinking that this Bleed effect would cause the target to be less and less able to continue to fight, ending in either exhaustion, passing out, or not be able to actually aim acts very well anymore. Not too sure what would be appropriate though.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
Yup.

If everything checks out, and my move is at 300 Om, then i used all 5000. Cool.

[Gilgamesh]

Hi there!

About your move, it would be better if you made a move for the claws itself rather than a slashing motion. It would make things a lot easier. Also we don't do "Armor"(We instead use DEF) here in the Omniverse so the penetrating armor thing wouldn't work so well.

You should also make a separate move for the bleeding effect but at the moment this move would need much larger downsides and would need the debuff proficiency for this move.

[The Dreamer]

Character name:
Emerald

Character source:
Original Character, based in the Steven Universe canon.

Character history:
Emerald is a Gem born a Kindergarten near a heavily forested area. She emerged from the rock much later than others, after those who created her had long since left. What it meant to be a Gem, and how to live as one; both were instilled in her at birth, presumable information implanted by the gems who created her. She took to the forests, now her home, and learned the ways of the animals that lived there, and in every other forest and jungle she lived in throughout her long life. She hadn't had much contact with other Gems for most of her centuries of life, up until a point in time where large diamond shaped machines began to crash into the earth, near the forest she currently resided in. it began to move through the her beloved forest, trashing the forest in it's wake. She had seen others, other Gems she thought, take care of a number of ones before this, often before Emerald even needed to intervene for fear of her forest. This time they were no where to be seen, so she engaged. By the time it was defeated, she had quite a bit of damage to her gem, and for fear of her life, she had to retreat within to hopefully heal.

When she reawakened, she was standing before a strange humanoid creature in an endless white space. This is where her story of unlimited potential begins.

Physical Description:
5'8". Feminine body. Muscular build for the most part. Slightly sharp canines, with her emerald gem in place of her top left canine.
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Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Starting Proficiencies:
Physical Strength (1000 OM)
Debuff Proficiency (1000 OM)

Starting Powers:
Shapeshifting (1400 OM)
Master Super Jumping (800 OM)

Starting Moves:

Emerald Beast Gloves (requires Physical Strength) -- 300 OM
[spoiler][/spoiler]
Emerald smiles, and crosses her arms infront of her chest. A glint of light shines off her gem, and she brings her hands down to her sides, summoning her Gem Weapon, her Emerald Beast Gloves, as she does this, and ending with her hands at her sides, backs of the hands turned forward and fingers pointed down. Her Emerald Beast Gloves are made of actual emerald plus a little magic, so they are quite hard. They're a deep green color, and faceted just like Emerald's own gem; rectangular in shape, with tapered sides and sharp-edged and faceted fingers. From finger tip, to 'palm heel', they measure about 14 inches, stretching two-thirds down each forearms. Despite their large size, Emerald can move just as freely with them as without them, as they are apart of her intrinsically.

Rend and Rake (requires Physical Strength, Debuff Proficiency) -- 300 OM
Emerald quickly slashes at her target, with the intent of causing extra damage and making them bleed. This move would cause 4-5 moderately deep slashes on the target, about 5 inches in length, spread evenly across a 12 inch wide area of affect. These slashes bleed, slightly impeding the target's ability to continue fighting. This effect stacks which each additional, successful Rend and Rake. This move take nominal effort to perform, so I cannot be used again until 3 seconds after the last Rend and Rake.
Pros: Causes the target to bleed, lessening their ability to perform well in a prolonged fight.
Cons: The 'Bleed' effect is weak to start, and only becomes a noticeable problem for the target after 3 successful hits, and has diminishing return after 10 'stacks' of the 'Bleed' effect.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.
Yup.

(I should have 200 OM left, right?)

[Guu]

Approved!

Name: Emerald
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4,800
Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Debuff Proficiency (1000)
Powers (2200): Shapeshifting (1400), Super Jumping; Master (800)
Moves (600): Emerald Beast Gloves (300), Rend and Rake (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Assists:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2


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