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Noragnir enters the chaos
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CHARACTER NAME: Noragnir Wolfsttag

CHARACTER SOURCE: Original

CHARACTER HISTORY: Noragnir is a dwarf born into a world of both technology, and magic that created an air very similar to that of a steampunk world. He grew up the son of an engineer, and like his father feel in love with the smell of oil, and the turning of gears the sounds of his world driving him to learn more, and more of the world. His mind drove him to create the first effecient firearms of his worlkd leading the the creation of his 'Ravanger' A shotgun that uses both amunition, and mana to fire, and his "Quickshot" pistol. He mastared these weapons, and went out into the world of his to make a name for himself with his weapons, and inventive mind, but that plan seems to have changed rather suddenly.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
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Noragnir is in all basics a dwarf like many you would see in a fantasy world though those of his home-world do have at least a few differences from those in other worlds. He stands at roughly four feet seven inches the tall end of the spectrum for his race his body while still heavy in muscle is leaner then one might expect from a dwarf his is also for less hairy then you would expect. His face is hard angles covered with a well styled beard of fiery red the style more along the lines of steampunk style then those of the average dwarf. His emerald eyes are centered in his head the gaze usually hidden behind dark circular framed shades, and on occasion his bangs from his usually slicked back hair the shade of which matches his beard.

STATS:
ATK: 4
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:
Ranged Proficiency - 1000 OM
Area attack Proficiency - 600 OM
STARTING POWERS:
Enhanced Senses Basic -1400 OM
STARTING MOVES: 
Ravager Shotgun (requires Ranged Proficiency) - 300 OM
A squat heavy Shotgun created by Nor himself when he was in his early days of inventing. The thing isn't all that great on the eye the steel barrel shaped into a wolf's head covered in heavy dwarf runes to reinforce it, attached with care to a heavy oak stock meant to help brace it during combat. The weapon fires a single heavy slug of iron using both gunpowder, and magic. The slug is far heavier then a basic pistol round, and in turn requires more power to get it to speed. This weapon kicks like a mule, and is not meant to be used while moving. The weapons diameters are in line with a Lupara style sawed off shotgun the total length of the weapon is around twelve inches half of which is the barrel, but it is bulky as hell definitely something meant to be used by someone powerful. The weapon holds only one round at a time breaking open to change out the shell, and then closing it, and pulling the hammer back to fire again. The entire process takes around two seconds limiting it's rate of fire, but allowing for the use of the heavy slug rounds that it was designed to handle.

Quickshot Pistol - (Requires Ranged Proficiency) - 600 OM
Noragnir's choice for midrange combate the Quickshot is a long barreled revolver along the lines of the peacemaker colt with a total length of around thirteen inches seven, and a half of which is the barrel, The weapon hols six rounds that must be reloaded individually with the time being around a half secound per round. The weapon is best used when aimed, but can be used while moving though it splits the focus of the shot. The user could also 'fan ' the hammer allowing to fire all the rounds quickly but the weapon suffers more ware this way and it's accuracy suffers. The weapon has an effective range of 17 yards maximum though the longer distance takes greater aim.

Dragon's Breath Grenade (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) - 300 OM
A rather basic six inch pipe bomb style grenade covered in runes that ignite the bomb with a thought, and willing of mana. The weapon has a fuse that detonates after four seconds, or upon impact releasing a vicious explosion of around seven feet. Nor's effective throwing range for this weapon is around 20 yards. (The effective range of a trained rl soldier.) The weapon triggering system is heavy on Mana cost far more the the dwarfs other weapons as such he only keeps around four on his person. He then must make more with either parts or summoning.The explosion is considered fire elemental damage.

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Hi there! Welcome to the site.

First things first, you’ll need to include a physical description:

Quote:For original characters, please include a detailed physical description (including, minimum, things like height, skin colour, hair colour, eye colour, etcetera if applicable) and picture to give us a rough idea of what they look like. For pre-existing characters, please include a picture and a rough height. It's okay if some of these details get changed or better-ironed out later, but other players will use these as a basis for comparison when meeting.

Ravager Shotgun: Can you give us rough measurements so we know how big the gun is? How long does it take to reload the gun (in other words, what’s the fire rate)? What's the effective range of the weapon? How much damage does it do?

Quickshot Pistol: You can do that, but feel free to put it up here. You have OM to spend after all!

Like I said, you have quite a bit of OM left (2300). It's up to you, of course, but you could theoretically buy all sorts of exciting stuff.
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Editing done I'm rather embarrassed I missed the description though lol I also went and used some mor OM as you suggested I think It should be within the limits still.
#4
Quickshot Pistol - What is the effective range of the pistol? Also, I'm pretty sure that this needs to be 600 OM: 1) regular shooting, 2) fanning hammer.

Dragon's Breath Grenade - To be clear, it either does more damage or it sets the enemies on fire? If it sets people on fire and does damage over time, this will unfortunately need Debuff Proficiency (1000 OM). I'd recommend making this just a regular grenade, making it 300 OM.

If you fix those up, you should be all set?
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#5
Those edits have been made as well.
#6
Soooorrry I missed something.

The pistol should have ONE number for its maximum range, otherwise that will probably be 900...

How far can you throw the grenade? How much effort does it cost to use this attack/make a new one? (The equivalent for your character would be a mana cost of some sort)
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Edits done once again though I did not put the Mana drain in numbers since the site doesn't have such a system but I did put it as heavy though not as bad as say a super weapon.
#8
Umm could I get this checked again please?
#9
Alright you should be all set. Welcome to the Omniverse!

Please copy and paste the below into a new thread in the Rosters Forum with your character’s name as the title:

Name: Noragnir Wolfsttag
Spent OM: 4200
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (1600): Ranged Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600)
Powers (1400/8000): Enhanced Senses Basic (1400)
Moves (1200): Ravager Shotgun (300), Quickshot Pistol (600), Dragon's Breath Grenade (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 2
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

Your purchase log can be found here.
 
Take a look at this thread to give you some pointers about what do do next.
 
If you have any questions, please ask them in this thread.
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