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Joining: Kuroji Setsu
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NameKuroji Setsu ( 黒字説 )
Source: Original Character
Physical Description: Gratuitous brown hair on his head, and a rough shadow of a beard. Shifty green eyes and an indifferent expression. Loose and limited clothing. A zipped up combat vest, with a t shirt underneath. A scarf around his neck. Loosefit pants with a tied belt and sandal-toed shoes. 

History: Setsu comes from a world characterized by the presence of chakra and shinobi lines that utilize it. He was born into a family line who carried with them a hidden pact with a mysterious entity known as オニ画家 ( Onigaka ). オニ画家 bestowed his gift on the clan as tribute of this secret covenant in the form of powerful techniques and rituals. A gift that would be the envy of many outsiders.

Setsu was cast out from his clan's home as they were wiped out. A disastrously powerful being entered their residence and made it it's new home, making sure to leave no being alive. Setsu was only through sheer luck able to escape and make it to the nearest village, where he managed to integrate and eventually work up to the Genin level. He feared this being would hunt him down and so sought power recklessly, eventually going as far as to abandon his new village to join the ranks of a malevolent Doujutsu master. He was brainwashed and turned into an elite shinobi over the course of many years. Eventually a rebellion was formed as this tyrant expanded his territory and Setsu eventually clashed with children, now adults, whom he had been close to in youth. 

If not for the rebellious efforts by several of Setsu's childhood friends, he may have blindly served this lord of illusion the rest of his life. Tragically, the veil of his deception and manipulation fell only as he took his best friend's life and was dealt a significant enough blow that he could no longer utilize his previous gifts. He then fled from any sort of remainder of the conflict and set off from the mainland. Hoping he could rebuild himself and one day return to seek vengeance. 

Knowing little of sea travel and haunted by the fragmented and demonic force that had enslaved him, Setsu somehow managed to reach an island he had never seen on any map. From this island he managed to somehow fend for himself and live in relative peace, struggling all the while to make sense of his experiences. 

Through meditation and ritual he has tried to reconnect with the being that had gifted him and his now defunk clan their abilities, however, he has found only failure. Living in a state of without, he begins to appreciate what he had when he was all too naive to be thankful. His efforts to transcend yielded unexpected fruit though and encountering shadowy, animalistic being leads him to a gateway which he steps though.

Spent OM: 4700
Consumed OM0
Proficiencies

Buff Proficiency - 400 OM
Physical Strength - 1000 OM
Powers ( 0 / 8000 ) :
Advanced Super Jump - 500 OM
Master Acrobat - 400 OM
Burst Movement - 800 OM
Super Speed - 1000 OM
MovesN/A
鬼百合 ( Oniyuri; Tiger Lily )
Type: Augmented Physical Attack
OM: 600
Description: Oniyuri is a basic fighting technique of Setsu's that involves the concentration of chakra/energy into ethereal blades at exactly 6 inches from the tips of his fingers, and which then extend a length of 6-18 inches. When in use, the fingers which direct the blades must be straight and so can be limited from one to five total blades per hand. This can be devastating to soft or unguarded targets, but is lacking in piercing ability when it comes to harder materials like metal though it can parry them.
Super MovesN/A
TransformationsN/A

AssistsN/A
ItemsN/A
ArtifactsN/A
BasesN/A

UnlocksN/A

Base Stats:
Attack3

Defense2
Speed3
Technique2
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Hi Kuroji, most of your application looks good, just a couple of items:

Oniyuri - because the swords can be extended, this counts as another variable of the move, so its cost will be 600 OM. Let me know if you're good with that.

Gekido no Hada - you won't be able to purchase a power-up/transformation until you hit level 2, which is 6000 OM. You can either purchase something else with your OM or save it for something later.
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Illidan Stormrage \ Jim Raynor \ Cell
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Everything looks good! Welcome to the Omniverse! We hope you have a great time here.
 
Please copy and paste the below into a new thread in the Rosters forum with your character’s name as the title:
 
Name: Kuroji Setsu
Spent OM: 4700
Consumed OM:
Proficiencies (1400): Physical Strength (1000), Buff (400) 
Powers (2700/8000): Advanced Super Jumping (500), Master Acrobat (400), Burst Movement (800), Super Speed (1000)
Moves (600): Oniyuri-Tiger Lily (600) 
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 2
SPD: 3
TEC: 2
 
Your purchase log can be found here.
 
Take a look at this thread to give you some pointers about what do do next.
 
If you have any questions, please ask them in this thread.
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