Switching Heidi back to Harry Potter

[Harry Potter]

Character name:Harry Potter

Character source: The Harry Potter Franchise and related sources

Character history:

Harry James Potter, sometimes called The Boy Who Lived, is a near-messianic figure to a secret society of magic users. He is famous among the wizarding community for twice killing the Dark Wizard known as Voldemort, and, some say, for saving all of magical Britain. When Harry first killed Voldemort, he was a one-year-old infant. Although Voldemort killed Harry's parents that night, Voldemort's curse on Harry rebounded and killed Voldemort instead. Sixteen years later, Harry Potter dueled and killed Voldemort at the Battle of Hogwarts. He is a graduate of Gryffindor House at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, he was the Seeker and Captain of the Gryffindor Quidditch team, the 125th Champion of the Tri-Wizard Tournament, and leader of the resistance group Dumbledore's Army. He vanished at some point in the year 2000, two years after the final defeat of Voldemort, and neither the public nor his close friends and family members know where he is now. But these are all things you can learn from the back of a chocolate frog card.

Harry James Potter is a deeply troubled young man who, due to his bravery and compassion, has already overcome adversities most people will never have to experience in their lifetime. At the time of his abduction into the Omniverse, at age twenty, Harry Potter has already reached a satisfying catharsis to his ongoing battle with Lord Voldemort, and is starting to build the family he never had with his high-school sweetheart Ginny Weasly. Harry Potter is not the shy orphan he was when he walked into Hogwarts at age ten, or the fiery rebel he was when he defied the Ministry of Magic at age fifteen, or even the relentless crusader of righteousness he was when he fulfilled his destiny and defeated Lord Voldemort for good at age seventeen. THIS Harry James Potter is a little more mature, a little less adventurous, and a little more confident in who he is.

Physical Description:

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Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

Starting Proficiencies: Physical Attack Proficiency (1000) Ranged Attack Proficiency (1000) Remote Control Proficiency (600) Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600)

Starting Powers: Advanced Telekinesis (1000)

Starting Moves: Stunning Spell (300) Stunning Attack (300) Shield Charm (600) Incendio Punch (600)

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Stunning Spell (300) Requires Ranged Proficiency- This spell requires that Harry aim his wand, or his hand, and perform the incantation 'Stupefy', a process which takes three seconds, after which a bullet-sized projectile of red light shoots from the tip of his wand towards where he aims. It moves at about the speed of an arrow. If the projectile hits its intended target, the target is hit with a kind of magical blunt-force-trauma that doesn't leave any recognizable marks. This spell can be cast three times in a ten second period. It has a range of about 100 feet.


Stunning Attack (300) Requirements- Physical Attack Proficiency

When Harry punches, kicks, or otherwise physically attacks an opponent, he channels his magic into every strike. This magic is represented by a bright red aura coming from his fist (or whatever limb he is using to attack). This aura hovers about an inch from Harry’s hands (or whatever limb he is using to attack). This aura delivers a concussive force on contact. Harry knows this move so well that he uses it almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it.

This move is only not very draining to Harry, and he uses it basically any time he performs hand-to-hand combat.


Shield Charm (600) Requirements- Physical Strength

Harry's primary means of active defense. Harry knows this spell so well that he uses it non-verbally, without a wand, and almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it. Harry creates an invisible shield of magical force about one foot in diameter directly in front of one of his hands. This shield is roughly the shape of a half sphere. He can maintain this shield for up to 1 second at a time, and can use it an unlimited number of times per day.

This shield make fail or break if trying to defend against a stronger attack.

This spell is not very draining, and he uses it basically any time he performs hand-to-hand combat.

The second use of this move is a larger shield (three feet in diameter) that Harry can hold up to five seconds. This version of the spell is moderately draining to Harry, and he can only use it once every few minutes.



Incendio Punch (600) TIER-1 OFFENSIVE SUPERMOVE -Requirements- Physical Strength

Harry vocalizes the incantation 'Incendio', igniting his right hand with magical fire as he channels the spell into his fist. He then delivers an overhand right  punch to a single opponent. If he connects with the punch, he releases the magical energy of the spell into whatever he hit, delivering a blast of magical concussive force and searing magical fire.

This is a Supermove, and as such, passes through non-supermove defenses like shields. This move is discharged on contact; Harry must channel the move each turn or loose it's effect; he may only channel this move up to three turns. The exception to this would be an evasive-type defensive supermove; if a character uses an evasive supermove against Incendio Punch, Harry would discharge the spell early into nothingness as his attack misses.

This move is heavily draining, and that drain is represented by the cost of 1 SP.

OM available: 6725.17
OM used: 6000.00

[Civic]

Everything looks good, just need some more info on the below:

Stunning Spell - does this knock the user back or interrupt them or something? I see it has blunt force trauma but I'd like a little more clarification on the effect please.

Stunning Attack - if this isn't very draining, has little charge and can be activated quickly, the actual effect is going to be pretty weak, just so you know.

Shield Charm - similar comments to Stunning Attack.

[Harry Potter]

Added some changes in underline, look better?

Stunning Spell (300) Requires Ranged Proficiency-

This spell requires that Harry aim his wand, or his hand, and perform the incantation 'Stupefy', a process which takes three seconds, after which a bullet-sized projectile of red light shoots from the tip of his wand towards where he aims. It moves at about the speed of an arrow. If the projectile hits its intended target, the target is hit with a kind of magical blunt-force-trauma that doesn't leave any recognizable marks but does cause damage. This spell can be cast three times in a ten second period. It has a range of about 100 feet.

Targets of the spell may develop bruises or even broken bones from this spell, much as they would if they were hit by a stone thrown from a sling.

Stunning Attack (300) Requirements- Physical Attack Proficiency

When Harry punches, kicks, or otherwise physically attacks an opponent, he channels his magic into every strike. This magic is represented by a bright red aura coming from his fist (or whatever limb he is using to attack). This aura hovers about an inch from Harry’s hands (or whatever limb he is using to attack). This aura delivers a concussive force on contact. Harry knows this move so well that he uses it almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it.

This move is only not very draining to Harry, and he uses it basically any time he performs hand-to-hand combat.

This move is basically an extension of Harry's ATK score and his Physical Attack Proficiency. Harry is not physically strong, so he channels his magical power into his physical attacks.


Shield Charm (600) Requirements- Physical Strength

Harry's primary means of active defense. Harry knows this spell so well that he uses it non-verbally, without a wand, and almost instinctual; it takes him less than a second to activate it. Harry creates an invisible shield of magical force about one foot in diameter directly in front of one of his hands. This shield is roughly the shape of a half sphere. He can maintain this shield for up to 1 second at a time, and can use it an unlimited number of times per day.

This shield make fail or break if trying to defend against a stronger attack.

This spell is not very draining, and he uses it basically any time he performs hand-to-hand combat.

This move is basically an extension of Harry's DEF score and his Physical Attack Proficiency. Harry is not physically tough, so he channels his magical power into physical sheilds.

The second use of this move is a larger shield (three feet in diameter) that Harry can hold up to five seconds. This version of the spell is moderately draining to Harry, and he can only use it once every few minutes.

[Civic]

Looks good.
 
Here's your roster:
 
Name: Harry Potter
Spent OM: 6000
Consumed OM:
Proficiencies (3200): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000), Remote Control (600), Range Materialise (600)
Powers (1000/8000): Advanced Telekinesis (1000)
Moves (1200): Stunning Spell (300), Stunning Attack (300), Shield Charm (600)
Super Moves (600): Incendio Punch (Tier 1 Super Attack) (600)
Transformations (0):
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 1
TEC: 3

Someone with more power than me will be along to update your name and OM.

[Trixie]

Name and OM fixed. Good to go.