Ben 10

[Ben Tennyson]

Character name: Ben Tennyson

Character source: Ben 10 original series

Character history: Ben is a ten-year-old boy who grew up in Bellwood; he was unpopular and often bullied in his school by two boys named Cash and J.T..

However his life changed the day he went on summer vacation with his grandfather Max and his cousin Gwen. A short time after they left Bellwood, Ben went on a walk through the woods in which they were camping, and witnessed the crash of a strange capsule from space, thinking it was a shooting star. This capsule happened to contain the Omnitrix, a powerful watch-like device, that attached itself onto Ben's left wrist and fused with his genetic code.

At first scared, Ben soon discovered that, using the Omnitrix, he was now able to transform into ten super-powered alien creatures. Unable to remove the Omnitrix Ben eventually learned to use the device in order to become a superhero. Though he occasionally fought and arrested ordinary criminals, he was quickly led to also fight super-villains, starting with Dr. Animo, Kevin 11, and ultimately, Vilgax, a vicious and evil alien warlord who wanted to get the Omnitrix for himself for universal conquest.

Despite being very immature and occasionally using the Omnitrix for minor selfish purposes, Ben is a valuable wearer for the Omnitrix, defeating Vilgax and saving people several times.

Long after defeating Vilgax Ben Tennyson finally got to enjoy his summer vacation with his family when suddenly out of nowhere his entire being vanished from sight and from where he lived as he was now surrounded entirely by a black void. Ben wanted to be sarcastic and light things up with Heatblast but for some reason he couldn't even speak let alone see where he was. Suddenly he say a brilliant white figure purging the darkness.

It introduced itself as Omni which made Ben look back at his watch the Omnitrix. Were they the one that created this device that strapped to his wrist so long ago? Probably a coincidence as the strange figure spoke of an Omniverse and a strange orb called Omnilium which according to what they said was like a currency but also a way to create things. Ben was having a hard time understanding all this but with the names all related to Omni Ben wondered if it really did have something to do with the Omnitrix. But before he could ask about the figure vanished and Ben was not at the center of the Nexus and right in front of a strange fountain.

Physical Description: Ben's usual clothes consists of a black-striped, white shirt with short sleeves, green pants and black and white shoes with black stripes. Ben wears the Omnitrix on his left wrist. He has brown shaggy hair, green eyes and a rather light white skin tone.

Ben Tennyson:

Stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4

Starting Proficiencies:

Physical Strength = 1000 OMN

Ranged Proficiency = 1000 OMN

Starting Powers:

Alternate Form: Heat Blast = 2000 OMN

Description:

Stats:
ATK: 3
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 2

Basic Jumping = 300 OMN

Starting Moves:

Fireball: (requires Ranged Proficiency)

Throws multiple Fire Balls at a foe or foes which are conjured in his hands.
The fireballs are roughly the size of a baseball that travel at the speed of an arrow fired from a bow.
Each fireball is rather weak by itself and takes 2 seconds to conjure a total of Six Fireballs at a time.
Currently Heatblast can only fire Six fireballs at a time before needing to conjure them again.
Fireballs do not require aim and can be thrown at random.
Each set of Six Fireballs are thrown One at a time before reaching the maximum of Six then needing to be conjured again.
After each round of Six Fireballs thrown it lessens HeatBlast's stamina slightly each time.

For HeatBlast. Cost 300 OMN

Flaming Sword: (requires Physical Strength) Shapes a sword out of fire to use in battle. This sword is the size and length of an average baseball bat and does moderate damage when swung at a foe. The sword is as quick as a katana in speed when drawn and used. The sword takes 2 seconds to conjure and is maintained with HeatBlast's stamina. If disarmed the sword will go out as it is made directly from HeatBlast. It takes an additional 2 seconds to conjure the sword again if it is disarmed or broken.

For Heatblast. Cost 300 OMN.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct.

[ElFailzalot]

History: Include a mention of at what point he was actually taken and brought to the Omniverse.

For your moves, I suggest reading this: http://omniverse-rpg.com/moves.php#Moves
Especially the section on Writing Moves. Give them another try. We can approve you without them and hash those out in the move approval thread instead so you can start writing if you wish. Let me know.

[ElFailzalot]

History's good now.

Fireball:
-- "Currently Heatblast can only fire Five fireballs at a time before using it again." Does this mean he makes all five at once, or he can only fire five in quick succession, or...?
-- How long does it take to make said fireballs?
-- Is it tiring to do (and if so, how much?), is there a limit to how quickly/how much he can use it?
-- The lingering burn effect is just flavor to the tune of "ow I just got hit by fire" and not any actual lingering damage effect, yes? You'd need Debuff otherwise.

Flaming Sword:
-- How long does it take to make the sword? In a similar note, how long does it last? Does it require concentration/energy to keep it maintained?
-- If he somehow manages to be disarmed or otherwise drop it, what happens? (Will it go out, disappear, still sit there as a flaming sword-like object, etc etc)
-- Ditto the above question about the lingering burn effect.

You'll need to list the new stats and appearance changes (if any) of your alternate form.

Lastly, you seem to have 13 stats allocated. You only start with 10.

[ElFailzalot]

Fireball:
-- "Currently Heatblast can only fire Six fireballs at a time before needing to conjure them again." My previous question regarding this still stands: does he throw them all at once? One after the other?
-- "The Fireballs can be thrown while moving around." Unless this means they can home in on or track targets just by you throwing them wherever, it doesn't need to be mentioned.
-- Another note that just occured to me now (apologies): How does he summon them? In his hand/hands, just hovering somewhere near him, or what?

Flaming Sword: All good.

Alt Form: Still needs some kind of description and what its stats are, if they're different from your normal. If they're the same, you wouldn't need the alt form and I'd suggest the Shapeshifting power.

[ElFailzalot]

Moves are fine now.

Alt Form: Still needs some kind of description and what its stats are, if they're different from your normal. If they're the same, you wouldn't need the alt form and I'd suggest the Shapeshifting power.

[ElFailzalot]

Alright. Everything's fine. I'll get your account activated now, and here's your Roster:

Name: Ben Tennyson
Spent OM: 4900
Consumed OM: 0
Proficiencies (2000): Physical Strength (1000), Ranged (1000)
Powers (300/8000): Super Jumping - Basic (300)
Moves (600): Fireball (300), Flaming Sword (300)
Super Moves (0):
Transformations (2000): Alt Form - Heatblast (2000)
Assists (0):
Items:
Artefacts:
Bases:
Unlocks (0):
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 2
SPD: 2
TEC: 4


Copy that and post it in a new thread here with your character's name as the title.

Your Purchase log can be found right here.

It might not be bad to give this thread a read to get an idea of what else to do now you're approved.