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I hate it, because I kill a lot of orcs, and now you're making it weird.
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Toldja Sasuke.
Westside don't like no orcs.
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04-08-2018, 06:19 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-08-2018, 06:24 PM by Kelly MacAryn.)
Nobody's saying that IC the Orcs don't have valid reasons to feel angry or persecuted, or that you can't write stories about that. I think the problem people are having here - I know its something I've been tripping over a little - is that you seem to be trying to draw a direct parallel between fantasy racism and some of the heinous crap going on right now in real-world America; a swirling powderkeg of suspicion, justified anger, defensiveness, helplessness, self-righteousness, systematized victimization and knee-jerk unthinking rage. You're tapping a pretty deep, dark well - which can make for great writing if handled well... but can also feel like you're shouting at your reader.
Is there racism in Camelot? Hell yeah. I've included it in my own writing. But by naming this thread what you did, just by way of an example, you immediately made everyone who's ever written the death of an orc feel weird, which made people question your ability to carry this off tastefully - and thereby hangs a very long chatbox discussion.
Anyway. That's all I got.