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It only took like, 6 months, but here we are >.>
Submitting for a possible bonus.
Thread Name: Aftermath
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Clownpiece
Total Word Count: 8388
Total Character Count: 48218
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9108
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(This post was last modified: 03-29-2018, 08:05 PM by Ash.)
Honeymoon In Hell
Quest
Participating characters (please list):
Ash the Storm Demon
Desman Black(To be Continued)
Ash the Storm Demon
Total character count including spaces: 184,736
Total word count: 34,299
Clarification Notes:
Ash and Desman are doing the thread together, but Ash has left early because she's... Well Ash. I am turning the quest in in hopes to appease my new boss~!! However, Desman has one more post and we want to turn it in for participation bonus. If I need to wait until he is done, then will do, but I still am hoping to get an audience with Diablo.
This is out of 61,909 words; 333,693 characters total for the completed quest with two characters, also.
Warning: Anything that involves Ash should be rated M. Possibly higher.
Erik Vrell : Ash has a 'love' fourth dimensional shape
Erik Vrell : As in its wide and unfathomable for us mere mortals
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Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
"Mine eyes hath seen the glory of the presence of my Lord. He is sifting through the treasures in which his Gates of Wrath does store. He lets loose the righteous vengeance of his terrible swift swords. Gilgemesh has returned!"
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04-01-2018, 07:07 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-01-2018, 07:08 PM by Dane Regan.)
@Sage: Fair enough. I wasn't trying to cheat the system or anything with my Ebony thread since it wasn't graded originally. Like, I wouldn't resubmit something that got great in the hopes of exemp, or something with no quality bonus in the hopes of getting one again or getting an improvement to a previous grading. I was just looking for a stamp saying 'you dun kinda gud' and a bit of OM, since I'm genuinely pretty proud of it.
@Ash: I'll leave your thread for someone else.
(03-29-2018, 07:45 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: It only took like, 6 months, but here we are >.>
Submitting for a possible bonus.
Thread Name: Aftermath
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Clownpiece
Total Word Count: 8388
Total Character Count: 48218
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9108
I judge this thread to be worthy of an exemplary bonus! Because it was simultaneously kinda funny, but also serious. And a genuinely good read. Any writing errors were sparse.
Clownpiece: 964.36 OM
(03-31-2018, 02:31 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
I got a different character/word count here. Are you sure you counted spaces? Either way, my numbers were 7166 words / 40704 characters (with wordcounter.net). Your writing was awesome, especially the dialogue, but my main irk is that there are occasional random spaces in your writing. Like a double space between two words seemingly at random, and a space before a comma on occasions. Outside of that, I didn't spot any recurring 'mistakes'.
Anyway, I judge this worthy of a great bonus (the highest one you're eligible for based on word count).
Serraph Quarrere: 407.04 OM
A more senior staffer will dish out your rewards later.
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I was going off the word counter here on the site. Every other site gave varying readings so I just stuck with this one. I appreciate the look good man!
"Mine eyes hath seen the glory of the presence of my Lord. He is sifting through the treasures in which his Gates of Wrath does store. He lets loose the righteous vengeance of his terrible swift swords. Gilgemesh has returned!"
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(04-01-2018, 07:13 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: I was going off the word counter here on the site. Every other site gave varying readings so I just stuck with this one. I appreciate the look good man!
I'd strongly advise not to use the site counter since:
A) The word and character counts include bb code (so making something in italics will increase it - and we want word/character counts without the code).
B) It doesn't count spaces. And we need the character count with spaces.
The site counter is nice for guessing roughly how big your post is while you're writing, but not for any official numbers.
Just copy paste it all into wordcounter.net or something like that next time (or into gdocs or word) and you'll be good.
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Appreciate it Reagan-sama!
"Mine eyes hath seen the glory of the presence of my Lord. He is sifting through the treasures in which his Gates of Wrath does store. He lets loose the righteous vengeance of his terrible swift swords. Gilgemesh has returned!"
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Link to Topic: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9504
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: Ash Williams, Celestia, Revan
Total Word Count: Ash Williams (25,191), Revan (17,898), Celestia (18,506)
Total Character Count: Ash Williams (4,621), Revan (3,291), Celestia (3,290)
wordcounter.net was used
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Thread Name: [M] Chosen by God: I Always Knew I Was Awesome
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Ahana Varma
Total Word Count: 4,230 (according to WordCounter.net)
Total Character Count: 22,981 (according to WordCounter.net)
Posts: 166
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(03-29-2018, 08:03 PM)Ash Wrote: Honeymoon In Hell
Quest
Participating characters (please list):
Ash the Storm Demon
Desman Black(To be Continued)
Ash the Storm Demon
Total character count including spaces: 184,736
Total word count: 34,299
Clarification Notes:
Ash and Desman are doing the thread together, but Ash has left early because she's... Well Ash. I am turning the quest in in hopes to appease my new boss~!! However, Desman has one more post and we want to turn it in for participation bonus. If I need to wait until he is done, then will do, but I still am hoping to get an audience with Diablo.
This is out of 61,909 words; 333,693 characters total for the completed quest with two characters, also.
4 Day bump.
I've debated on the clarity of this request...
I'm just trying to get to the Diablo part where I sign away what soul Ash has left. I don't want the bonus or anything. (At least not right now, that can wait until Desman's done.) Just trying to escape the underverse.
Warning: Anything that involves Ash should be rated M. Possibly higher.
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Erik Vrell : As in its wide and unfathomable for us mere mortals
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Turning in this thread for Participation Bonuses
And I'd like for my work to be judged. (Viola doesn't have the wordcount, unfortunately)
Thread Name: Reborn as a Spider Once Again
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Kumoko, Viola
Total Word Count:
Kumoko: 5474
Viola: 1354
Total Character Count:
Kumoko: 28997
Viola: 7868
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9855
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Link to topic Into the woods
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shantotto, Rafael Esquivel
Total character count including spaces: Shantotto (34,092) Rafael Esquivel (20,112)
Total word count: Shantotto (6,450) Rafael Esquivel (3,756)
Posts: 166
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UPDATED!!!
Honeymoon In Hell
Quest: Completed w/ Permission.
Participating characters (please list):
Ash the Storm Demon
Desman Black
Ash the Storm Demon
Total character count including spaces: 184,736
Total word count: 34,299
Desman Black
Total characters count including spaces: 158,759
Total word count: 29,424
Completed Quest
63,723 words; 343,495 characters.
Requesting Diablo for Ash.
Requesting Diablo for Desman. (In Character a Month Later)
<3~!
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04-16-2018, 12:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-16-2018, 12:06 PM by Dane Regan.)
Just a friendly reminder that OM hasn't been given out for these:
(04-01-2018, 07:07 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: @Sage: Fair enough. I wasn't trying to cheat the system or anything with my Ebony thread since it wasn't graded originally. Like, I wouldn't resubmit something that got great in the hopes of exemp, or something with no quality bonus in the hopes of getting one again or getting an improvement to a previous grading. I was just looking for a stamp saying 'you dun kinda gud' and a bit of OM, since I'm genuinely pretty proud of it.[spoiler]
@Ash: I'll leave your thread for someone else.
(03-29-2018, 07:45 PM)Clownpiece Wrote: It only took like, 6 months, but here we are >.>
Submitting for a possible bonus.
Thread Name: Aftermath
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Clownpiece
Total Word Count: 8388
Total Character Count: 48218
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9108
I judge this thread to be worthy of an exemplary bonus! Because it was simultaneously kinda funny, but also serious. And a genuinely good read. Any writing errors were sparse.
Clownpiece: 964.36 OM
(03-31-2018, 02:31 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
I got a different character/word count here. Are you sure you counted spaces? Either way, my numbers were 7166 words / 40704 characters (with wordcounter.net). Your writing was awesome, especially the dialogue, but my main irk is that there are occasional random spaces in your writing. Like a double space between two words seemingly at random, and a space before a comma on occasions. Outside of that, I didn't spot any recurring 'mistakes'.
Anyway, I judge this worthy of a great bonus (the highest one you're eligible for based on word count).
Serraph Quarrere: 407.04 OM
[/spoiler]
A more senior staffer will dish out your rewards later.
And now for all the newer stuff:
(04-02-2018, 11:03 AM)Ash Williams Wrote: Link to Topic: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9504
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: Ash Williams, Celestia, Revan
Total Word Count: Ash Williams (25,191), Revan (17,898), Celestia (18,506)
Total Character Count: Ash Williams (4,621), Revan (3,291), Celestia (3,290)
wordcounter.net was used
A fun read. Only Ash Williams qualifies for a Great bonus, and his posts were well written and proofread so I have no problem awarding it to him.
Ash Williams: 503.82 OM (Great + Participation)
Revan Noctis: 178.98 OM (Participation)
Celestia: 185.06 OM (Participation)
(04-02-2018, 02:27 PM)Ahana Varma Wrote: Thread Name: [M] Chosen by God: I Always Knew I Was Awesome
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Ahana Varma
Total Word Count: 4,230 (according to WordCounter.net)
Total Character Count: 22,981 (according to WordCounter.net)
That's a nice post you got there. Anyway, well proofread and written as usual. Have fun with your new character.
Ahana Varma: 229.81 OM (Great)
(04-04-2018, 09:18 PM)Kumoko Wrote: Turning in this thread for Participation Bonuses
And I'd like for my work to be judged. (Viola doesn't have the wordcount, unfortunately)
Thread Name: Reborn as a Spider Once Again
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Kumoko, Viola
Total Word Count:
Kumoko: 5474
Viola: 1354
Total Character Count:
Kumoko: 28997
Viola: 7868
Link to Thread: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=9855
Admittedly, I wrote Viola so I did participate in this thread. But, I really enjoy Kumoko's writing. He did a good job with this, so I'm awarding Kumoko a great bonus. (The reason for Viola's lower wordcount is that some of her posts were in the Kopaka+Dawn vs Pennywise thread - although Kumoko was reacting to them. So I'd Kumoko does deserve the participation bonus on all his posts.)
Kumoko: 579.94 OM (Great + Participation)
Viola: 78.68 OM (Participation)
(04-09-2018, 11:47 AM)Shantotto Wrote: Link to topicInto the woods
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shantotto, Rafael Esquivel
Total character count including spaces: Shantotto (34,092) Rafael Esquivel (20,112)
Total word count: Shantotto (6,450) Rafael Esquivel (3,756)
Shantotto is making an effort to proofread better, and his posts are less "messy" than with the Hecate thread he submitted for great a while back. So, since he's clearly responded to the feedback, I'm giving Shantotto a great bonus. For the participation bonus, his first 6 posts don't qualify [1856 words/10128 characters] (since Shan was solo and not with Raf).
Shantotto: 479.28 OM (Posts 7 and onwards, Great + Participation) + 101.28 OM (Posts 1 to 6, Great) = 580.56 OM
Rafael Esquivel: 201.12 OM (Participation)
A higher up will dish out the OM for you guys later.
@Ash: I'd definitely vouch for giving your quest exemplary, but I'm not as great with feedback and the like, hence why I think you deserve to hear that from another staffer. Either way, you should be good to go see Diablo.
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I've initiated the process to getting Ash and Desman a Diablo post from the Stoeyteller. I ask that you bare with us while the people who normally do so are currently a tad busy with life. Thank you for your patience.
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(04-12-2018, 11:35 AM)Ash Wrote: UPDATED!!!
Honeymoon In Hell
Quest: Completed w/ Permission.
Participating characters (please list):
Ash the Storm Demon
Desman Black
Ash the Storm Demon
Total character count including spaces: 184,736
Total word count: 34,299
Desman Black
Total characters count including spaces: 158,759
Total word count: 29,424
Completed Quest
63,723 words; 343,495 characters.
Requesting Diablo for Ash.
Requesting Diablo for Desman. (In Character a Month Later)
<3~!
Despite what I said earlier about being more tentative, I am going to grade this thread exemplary (both Desman and Ash). You've got the content, quality, and wordcount easily. I might not be the best at feedback, but you definitely deserve your grading. Another staffer (likely Alex or Trixie, I think) will handle your meetings with Diablo.
On the assumption that neither of you will be posting in the thread again, your bonuses (exemp+participation, +150%) are:
Ash: 5542.08 OM
Desman: 4762.77 OM
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Got a thread of my own to submit here. A bit of an olde, but I gave it a brush over to polish some stuff off first (just fixing spelling, grammar, and improving clarity where needed - no content was changed). Hoping for exemplary.
Link to Topic: A nice change in scenery
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal Storyline
Participating Characters: Dane Regan
Total Word Count: 15,775
Total Character Count: 87,624
Posts: 19
Threads: 3
Joined: Mar 2018
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Thread Name: [M] The Gifts of God: Omnilium is a Wonderful Thing
Quest or Personal Storyline: Personal
Participating Characters: Ahana Varma
Total Word Count: 9,206 (according to WordCounter.net)
Total Character Count: 50,536 (according to WordCounter.net)
Posts: 44
Threads: 1
Joined: Jan 2017
Reputation:
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(04-01-2018, 07:07 PM)Dane Regan Wrote: (03-31-2018, 02:31 PM)Serraph Quarrere Wrote: Link to topic: Armata de Strigoi
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal Storyline
Participating characters (please list): Serraph Quarrer
Total character count including spaces: 33,453
Total word count: 7,390
I want to submit my thread above for grading and for whatever potential bonus exists~
Thank you guys for your hard work!
I got a different character/word count here. Are you sure you counted spaces? Either way, my numbers were 7166 words / 40704 characters (with wordcounter.net). Your writing was awesome, especially the dialogue, but my main irk is that there are occasional random spaces in your writing. Like a double space between two words seemingly at random, and a space before a comma on occasions. Outside of that, I didn't spot any recurring 'mistakes'.
Anyway, I judge this worthy of a great bonus (the highest one you're eligible for based on word count).
Serraph Quarrere: 407.04 OM
A more senior staffer will dish out your rewards later.
I figured something is going on among the staff so just a friendly reminder here: I've yet to obtain the bonus rewarded to me.
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Bumping alongside Serraph
Shantotto Wrote:
Link to topicInto the woods
Quest or Personal Storyline?: Personal storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shantotto, Rafael Esquivel
Total character count including spaces: Shantotto (34,092) Rafael Esquivel (20,112)
Total word count: Shantotto (6,450) Rafael Esquivel (3,756)
Shantotto is making an effort to proofread better, and his posts are less "messy" than with the Hecate thread he submitted for great a while back. So, since he's clearly responded to the feedback, I'm giving Shantotto a great bonus. For the participation bonus, his first 6 posts don't qualify [1856 words/10128 characters] (since Shan was solo and not with Raf).
Shantotto: 479.28 OM (Posts 7 and onwards, Great + Participation) + 101.28 OM (Posts 1 to 6, Great) = 580.56 OM
Rafael Esquivel: 201.12 OM (Participation)
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